Just saw it (Yep, I broke down and actually used a Bittorent client - something I swore I'd never do on my home PC).
Overall, an AMAZING job. As stated by many above; everyone seemed to kick the acting level up to a decent degree - and I also don't see the flak th person playinying Mr. Scott is getting. Yes, the acent is unfortunately not the best, but come on; he's is giving it his best effort, and did okay.
The actress playing Sulu's 'alternate' daughter was amazing; and the rest of the cast did well too (This was the first time the person playing Dr. McCoy didn't make me cringe - and I can live with the fact that he isn't even attempting any sort of 'Southern' accent.
Interesting too is the attempt to tie 'everything together more (using a frieghter model reminiscent of the Cargo haulers seen on the
Enterprise series was an interesting touch. And while I again understand the reason you did it, to me the voice of the computer (played by Majel Roddenberry) WASN'T the 23rd century 1701 computer voice; it was the 24th century 1701-D computer voice; and actually, that was one of the more jarring things that stuck out to me while viewing the episode (yes, I guess I'm a major TOS geek).
And while it IS a TOS saple, it would be nice to see a battle where the 1701 doesn't destroy/heavily damage a ship with ONE phaser burst (sorry, didn't like that aspect of Star Trek in 1969; and still don't care for it today).
But - bottom line, if this DIDN'T come off so well as being lime an actual (modern day produced) TOS episode, I wouldn't be quibbling like this.
Again, AMAZING job; and this time everything from acting to the script, to the music and effects really came together well.
I'm looking forward to
Blood and Fire (although is it really neccessary to have the 'friend' of Ensign Kirk who says "I've never even met him..." to be so openly flaming? (Sorry, that's the way he came across in the small snippet of the 'Next Voyage' promo).
Congrats again on an excellent piece of work.