Ya know I broadly agree with you BillJ, as I've said in previous threads, but I do think it wouldn't have been too much of a chore for them to have paid some mind to the existing chronology. Even having one person in the writer's room familiar with TOS would have saved an avoidable error, without limiting them in any way. They could have:
- ) - pitched their idea, free as a bird, uninhibited by the chains of continuity
- ) - looked "cloaking device" up in the Encylopedia, taking maybe 35 seconds
- ) - changed it very subtly in a way that wouldn't have broken the script one iota
Novel writers scrupulously research the era of their story. Looking up 'cloaking device', or you know, watching the top 10 episodes of TOS at some point in their lives, would have eliminated the entire problem, with no fuss, no drawback, no negative consequence of any kind. And I'm not even arguing that you CAN'T break canon. Believe it or not, I don't even think that is necessary - it's just breaking a hugely famous piece of continuity - for a shit episode - when a cloaked ship wasn't even required - that is a special kind of ineptitude and failure.
And yes, maybe Trekkies would have been more forgiving, if the episode had actually been any good.
If you read my entire post, you would find I pretty much said exactly what you said in your second paragraph, line for line. I also think the episode was shit, because it was shit, and no amount of reverence for canon would have saved it.
Why do people always argue it has to be one or the other? You can do both. You can have an un-impinged creativity, and still pay homage to what has come before. Off the top of my head, I can think of literally millions of plot points that wouldn't contradict anything in TOS. "Writing from an encyclopedia entry" isn't exactly what I said, is it?