I have read that book a gazillion times (probably like you have) and out of a description of 11 decks, 6 decks don't match up with the show. That's not quite "far more consistent with the show that it is inconsistent", IMO.
Well obviously, I don't see it that way. And while the use of "far" more consistent may have been a bit of hyperbole on my part, I stand by my original statement.
I don't usually get as pedantic about these things as you do (there's that word again) but I think I can make an exception in this case.
So before we begin, let's remember a few things;
1st; TMOST can't fairly be expected to agree with any episode (mostly from the first season) written before it, itself, was written and was available as a reference source for the writing staff, so any such deck references shouldn't really count, or at least, not hold as much weight. It was mostly during second production season that Whitfield interviewed the writing staff and and the deck by deck description was written up and it was fresh in everyone's mind. The same goes for the 3rd season to a certain extent, by then most of the show runners had left or were leaving, and judging from the scripts/episodes, not much care was given to deck reference continuity, at least not in regards info from TMOST/writers guide.
And 2nd; that there is consistency, inconsistency, and then there's not inconstant! And of course, we're both gonna have differing interpretations of the available factoids, so that's inevitable. I tend to see TMOST as a glass half full, whereas you tend to see it as a glass half empty, or should that be a glass 2/3rds full vs 2/3rds empty?
Deck 2: "Primarily research labs, work areas for various technicians, and related duty stations" "The Enterprise Incident" passenger quarters (or brig?) on Deck 2.
"Primarily" does mean that there are other things besides those specifically mentioned, does it not? And the reference from "The Enterprise Incident" is
not to "passenger" or "guest" quarters, either of which might indicate more than one, but to "her quarters" instead, and since "quarters" is spelled and spoken the same way whether singular or plural, we have no reason to assume that there is more than one. If you want to assume there is, that's fine for you, but I choose to assume that there is only one, and that it is the same as Pike's old quarters, thus justifying it's otherwise odd location. So I'm going to call this this one
"not inconsistent".
Deck 3: "Primarily research labs, work areas for various technicians, and related duty stations" "WNMHGB" Engineering deck? (Or is it Engineering hull, deck three?) "LTBYLB": Rec Room 3. "CX": Rec Room 6 -- maybe not primarily research labs when you have rec and living quarters.
Once again "primarily" allows for some other things besides those specifically mentioned. The "WNMHGB" Engineering deck? 1st, this is an example of TOS being inconsistent with itself, where "engineering" is variously located on decks 3, 5, 7 (possibly), 14, and "B" deck; so those that live in glass houses etc.etc. But I think this deck 3 engineering might be a lab or something, so it could fall under "work areas for various technicians". And as for rec rooms 3 and 6? again an inconsistency in TOS, but one that is fairly easy to reconcile, but does this mean there are two rec rooms or six or more? either way we have to make some assumptions, so I'm going to assume there are just the two and they are there mostly for the use of the lab rats and technicians that work on decks 2 and 3 when they take their coffee/lunch breaks and/or to double as briefing rooms to brainstorm solutions to the threat of the the week. So, I'm gonna call this one a
"not inconsistent".
Deck 4: "Primarily crew quarters with some provision for passenger quarters. There are no duty stations on these decks." -- mostly okay, as per "The Ultimate Computer" except for the Rec Room that cuts through this deck
We don't know there is a rec room cutting through the deck, that's an interpretation/assumption on your part, but even if it does, this still qualifies as the first solid win for me, so I'm calling this one CONSISTENT. Also, consider that "TUC" is also the episode that most closely associates the Engineering Section with the Impulse deck, so both taken together, this suggests that the script writer(s) were using info that would later be included in TMOST as a reference source.
Deck 5: "Primarily crew quarters with some provision for passenger quarters. There are no duty stations on these decks. ... Captain's quarters, as well as those of Mr. Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Scotty are located on Deck 5..." "Corbomite Maneuver": has duty stations. "LTBYLB": Rec Room 3. "Elaan of Troyus" Sickbay -- not quite, Duty stations are present and Sickbay is up here along with a large Rec Room 3. Senior officer quarters at least right?
I've already conceded this one concerning sickbay, but what's this about duty stations from "TCM"" maybe I missed that one, unless your referring to the deck 5 engineering? But no matter, this deck is already inconsistent so that's that. Consider the senior officers quarters though, these are "right" (three episodes worth) most likely because the writing staff was aware of, and using as a reference, the deck by deck info that was later included in TMOST.
Deck 6: "Primarily crew quarters with some provision for passenger quarters. There are no duty stations on these decks." ... -- okay, as per "The Ultimate Computer", "LTBYLB". "Return to Tomorrow" has a briefing room but that's okay.
Agreed, I don't consider briefing rooms as "duty stations", and again evidence that info later included in TMOST is being referenced. So another solid win for me.
Deck 7: "The central section of the seventh deck level includes the office of the ship's Surgeon, the entire sick bay complex, and all labs and related functions falling under the jurisdiction of the medical department. The outer section is a "protective shell" complex of water and other bulk storage. At the very center of the seventh deck, and extending down to the eight deck is the core of the ship's main computer system, it's memory banks and primary controls." "TDM": Reports power failure of main energisers. -- Lack of mention of engineering facilities and wrong deck for sickbay.
Well, whether there's a lack of mention of an engineering deck is quite the crucial issue, and the one we've been debating, but in the interest of brevity, I won't go into it again right here. Not sure if we should include the sickbay issue twice, but I'm feeling pretty good about how things are stacking up, so I'll let you have this one and call it "Inconsistent".
Deck 8: "The primary hull's eighth deck level contains four major facilities: a large recreation area, the main food preparation area, ship's laundry, and a rather exotic entertainment center." "I, Mudd": Auxiliary Control. -- Missing major facility, the Aux Control. Unless it got the rec rooms flipped and they are actually on the upper decks.
I think the Auxiliary Control might be in the center-most section of this deck, and thus part of the library computer complex extending down from the deck above, this is consistent with how the "AC" was used in "The Way to Eden" where research involving the ships records was conducted. this would also be a good protected place for an auxiliary control. So all in all, I'm calling this one another "not inconsistent"
Deck 9,"Primarily devoted to freight and cargo carrying space, some technicians' repair shops, and other miscellaneous activities." --No inconsistency
Deck 10: "Primarily devoted to freight and cargo carrying space, some technicians' repair shops, and other miscellaneous activities." --No inconsistency
Agreed.
Deck 11: "The ship's phaser banks are located on the underside of the saucer-shaped hull, and therefore deck 11 contains the ship's phaser controls and other related equipment and facilities. --Try to fit the Phaser room in that space.
There you go going all thermion on me again. I think it'll fit just fine. remember this set was a redress of the engineering set, so we don't know what MJ might have done if he could have built a set fro scratch, probably something like the auxiliary control room? anyway this is another "not inconsistent".
So, let's see; we have bridge -consistent, deck 2 -not inconsistent, deck 3 -iffy but not inconsistent, deck 4 -consistent, deck 5 -inconsistent, deck 6 -consistent, deck 7 inconsistent, deck 8 -not inconsistent, decks 9 and 10 -not inconsistent, and deck 11 -not inconsistent.
So we have three decks consistent, six deck not-inconsistent, and only two decks inconsistent. So that's arguably only two decks flat-out inconsistent out of eleven decks total. So even if we throw in the iffy deck three as inconsistent, I think that pretty much justifies my use of "far more" consistent (or at least not inconsistent) than inconsistent.
That's all the time I have for today folks, I'll comment on some other points tomorrow when I have some more time.