Could this design have worked out better?

[miraclefan]

http://www.starshipmodeler.us/gallery14/js_061210_ent.htm

Please understand this is NOT my work, but I liked it enough to showcase it here.
The only thing I thought didn't work out here was the secondary hull, but with modification this would have looked good on screen.
Thoughts?

 

[Finn]

It basically looks the same so it wouldn't make a difference.

 

[Nerys Myk]

Looks like the nacelles are wait for propellers.

 

[Myasishchev]

Probably not, because it still doesn't have several hundred square kilometers of radiators.

 

[shapeshifter]

I think it looks more as I expected it to than The Abomination does but that would probably cause it to be rejected by JJ because it isn't different enough.