D.C. Fontana had some comments on things that should have been done differently, like the Romulan Commander being more skeptical and cautious toward Spock than what we saw in the episode. Reportedly, Roddenberry's edits to the story would have included Spock "raining kisses" on the Commander. That would have been quite odd.The Enterprise Incident is largely horrible Spockophilic, Kirk-hating fan fic. It's a mess.
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