Re: A Hater Revisits Voyager
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That is a freaking brilliant arc right there, my man. You have taken a series of otherwise tangientally related events and spun straw into gold!
'But Ben,' says Jeri Taylor, 'the people don't want arcs. They don't work.'
*sigh*
Well I like my story arcs, so Basics part 2 would have been expanded over three or four episodes. The way I see it, Tom begins hearing rumours about Voyager attacking innocent vessels and he convinces the Talaxians to investigate. When they catch up with Voyager, Tom finds out that the Kazon have control of it and he is forced to flee because the Talaxian ship isn't powerful enough to take on Voyager. Tom realises that they need to form a powerful fleet to take on Voyager and the other Nistrim ships so he convinces various races including the Talaxians, the Trabe and maybe even the Vidiians to put together enough ships to take on the Nistrim before they destroy the little stability which exists in that region of space.I particularly like the Kazon angle, Captain Tuvok, and Tom actually leaving to come back for 'Basics, Part II.' Would you have him hear about the Kazon bragging that they stole Voyager as the device to get him to come back?
They retake the ship in an epic battle, the crew is rescued from wherever they are, and Voyager leaves the region which is now a little more united thanks to Tom's efforts. He could either stay behind and try to help the region on the path towards its own Federation, or he could do the "safe" thing and rejoin the crew on the journey towards Earth.
The Voyager-Nistrim incident could have been the event which led to stability in a dangerous region of space, much like the Romulan wars united the various races around Earth. I think that would have been much more fitting for a Star Trek series than having Voyager fly off leaving the problem behind.
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That is a freaking brilliant arc right there, my man. You have taken a series of otherwise tangientally related events and spun straw into gold!
'But Ben,' says Jeri Taylor, 'the people don't want arcs. They don't work.'
*sigh*
