I voted "good" the first time I have no voted excellent to a series finale but just because it wasn't quite as epic as I hoped and I really feel Moffat could of made a 2 parter out of the story.
Noooo! This story was padded as it was. Did you not recognize the fact that the time all happening at once was just padding to fill out the story? The visuals were there to distract you, and apparently it worked!
Try this exercise. Imagine that River never changed the fixed point in time and that all time happening at once thing just didn't happen. What would happen then? Well, the Doctor would've been enveloped by the Teselecta as he planned and the rest would've happened as it did.
That part of the story was just their to look pretty and fill up time! Yeah, we did learn about the purpose of the eyepatches in there and Amy had her significant moment, but there could've been other ways to do that if they didn't have the need to run out the clock.
I thought the episode was alright. Entertaining. But, it didn't need to be longer.
Mr Awe