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Some thoughts about revenge as a motive for drama

Lance

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Just some general thoughts, swimming around inside the fishbowl that is my head. ;)

"Revenge as drama" has become something of a hot topic among fandom for the nuTrek movies. Or, rather, it has become a topic of what to avoid in future scripts.

I can totally get why script-writers keep returning to revenge as a cornerstone of their scripts. Revenge is a base emotion. It's maybe one of the most easy ways for a writer to attribute a motivation to a character.

(Particularly an antagonist, although it can be used for dramatic purposes in a protagonist as well, eg. Picard's not wanting to let go of the fight against the Borg in "First Contact" being overtly compared/contrasted in the dialogue itself to Captain Ahab's quest for revenge against the great white).

We can all 'get' revenge as a motivation.

Despite what we say about being 'tired' of revenge in the Star Trek movies, it's worth noting that some of Star Trek's most highly regarded hours, both on the big and small screen, are built on the archtype. The likes of "Obsession", "The Doomsday Machine", "The Wrath of Khan", "First Contact", "For The Uniform".

Each of these above mentioned episodes and movies remain well regarded within the fandom, and all of them use revenge as a central concept in some way or other.

The trouble, really, is that Hollywood is always keen on creating a "Formula For Success" that they can milk again and again. And 'the suits' have come to the conclusion, not without due justification I must hasten to add, that revenge plots work for Star Trek.

Or at least, that revenge plots work for theatrical Star Trek.

And yet this might not actually be practicably true. Of all the 11 Star Trek movie plots, approximately half of them revolve around revenge as a basis for something.

TWOK, FC, INS, NEM, ST09 and STiD all touch upon revenge as a motive one some way or other. GENS has an antagonist driven by sorrow instead, but to outside appearances it comes across almost like revenge too, even though he isn't exactly targeting anyone specifically in retaliation for a past incident. Soran has got a general apathy towards the rest of the universe, feeling slighted for the Borg killing his entire family, and these sociopathic tendencies manifest themselves in his complete disregard for the cultures he's willing to destroy to 'escape' from this reality and into a much (from his point-of-view) nicer one.

But it can not be said that all of these movies are praised by the fandom. Indeed, some of them are instead derided for their villains lacking depth and having paper-thin (if immediately understandable) motivations for their actions. Nor did they all resonate with the general public either. So clearly, revenge is not some magic formula plot generator that creates immediate success.

I think the real reason why so many of us claim we want a 'Revenge Free Movie Plot' for the next Star Trek movie is because we most of us are recognizing that it has become a formula through over-use.

It has gotten repetitive to the point of becoming something that makes us roll our eyes at the very mention of it:

"Revenge? Again with the revenge?!? What is it with these people?" :rolleyes: (etc, etc,)

It's kind of what "The Trouble With Tribbles" writer David Gerrold said in his non-fiction book 'The World Of Star Trek' back in the seventies, when he talked at length about how formula erodes format. The more a TV show (or movie series) settles upon an established, 'successful' formula, the less it becomes willing to do anything other than said formula, and therefore the less often it plays to the strengths of its original format.

What we really need is a cartharsis of some kind. A movie plot that foregoes revenge, maybe forgoes identifiable human-like villains altogether, in order to allow us the release from all these revenge movies. Variety is the spice of life, and the TOS movies (for better AND worse) at least recognized/acknowledged the need for this, as they found other motivations for their antagonists, and the success of TVH is at least partially attributable to Leonard Nimoy's decision to deliberately go for a change in tone, again providing cartharsis from all the High Drama that was such a part of TWOK and TSFS.

On the other hand, I remain less confident that Hollywood can deliver on this. Even if some people involved in nuTrek can see that this revenge kick is getting tired, there must be others who push hard for the winning formula of TWOK to be distilled, purified to it's most base elements, and then replicated in 'Lite' variants every new movie.

Like I said, just some general thoughts. What do you guys think? :)
 
I don't think we even need a villain at all. We just need a writer with an imagination who actually has something to say.
 
I think the next movie should be about a Klingon ship out for reve--sorry--exact expiation against Kirk for what happened on Qo'noS.
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Just some general thoughts, swimming around inside the fishbowl that is my head. ;)
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The trouble, really, is that Hollywood is always keen on creating a "Formula For Success" that they can milk again and again. And 'the suits' have come to the conclusion, not without due justification I must hasten to add, that revenge plots work for Star Trek.Or at least, that revenge plots work for theatrical Star Trek.
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What do you guys think? :)
As long as STAR TREK productions are being exceptionally well-funded, those making them are going to make the sure bet, they do not want to play a longshot. If STAR TREK can sustain its brand name marketability, then I suspect they will get a little more artsy, because there's less risk. Until this franchise can equate to, or exceed the marketability of STAR WARS, then, no ... I wouldn't count on too much of that, actually.
 
Trek doesn't have to be artsy in order to be imaginative. The last two films have been about an evil villain from another time out for revenge. There are plots which mainstream audiences can wrap their heads around. Hell, just having a villain out for revenge who isn't from another time would be a change of pace for the Abrams crew.
 
Hmm. ABC has devoted an entire series to the concept of revenge, called (not ironically) Revenge. I don't watch it. :lol:

There aren't many motives for bad guys in TV and movies. Revenge, megalomania, revenge ...

If that type of entertainment didn't attract viewers, it wouldn't be long before the folks who make the stuff would find another focus.

So, it is what it is. Like it or don't, they'll keep shoveling the stuff out until people stop paying for it.
 
I think about the films that are regarded as the greatest science fiction movies.
I'm thinking that only Matrix and Blade Runner have themes of 'revenge'. Even then I'm not certain that is their main theme.
 
Blade Runner's main theme always seemed - to me, at least - to be about Human mortality and how it defines us. Indeed, J.F. Sebastian underscores this very suggestion, as does Roy Batty's demanding his creator for a longer lifespan. The artificial people Humans have created also beg the question, is it our flesh that makes us Human and the fact that it is mortal? Unfortunately, this movie never really deals with these issues. In the end, Tyrell coldly and matter-of-factly reminds Roy that it's just the way it is. Unfortunately for Tyrell, Roy did not take kindly to it ...
 
I think about the films that are regarded as the greatest science fiction movies.
I'm thinking that only Matrix and Blade Runner have themes of 'revenge'. Even then I'm not certain that is their main theme.

Yes, I wouldn't say the theme of The Matrix is revenge.
 
Blade Runner's main theme always seemed - to me, at least - to be about Human mortality and how it defines us. Indeed, J.F. Sebastian underscores this very suggestion, as does Roy Batty's demanding his creator for a longer lifespan. The artificial people Humans have created also beg the question, is it our flesh that makes us Human and the fact that it is mortal? Unfortunately, this movie never really deals with these issues. In the end, Tyrell coldly and matter-of-factly reminds Roy that it's just the way it is. Unfortunately for Tyrell, Roy did not take kindly to it ...

I think about the films that are regarded as the greatest science fiction movies.
I'm thinking that only Matrix and Blade Runner have themes of 'revenge'. Even then I'm not certain that is their main theme.

Yes, I wouldn't say the theme of The Matrix is revenge.

I don't think the main theme of either film is revenge but I also think that the 'machines' want to get some 'revenge' on their makers. In Blade Runner for their crap lives and the limitations on their lives they methodically track everyone down and kill them. Not just to get revenge but that's just another sweet part of the deal.
And for some reason in Matrix the 'Matrix' I think punishes humankind for its destructive ways by using humans as light bulb generators.

Anyway there's a lot of great science fiction movies out there where the overall theme is not revenge. The next Star Trek movie could be one of those too.:)
 
Revenge as a theme could work if it was done in an intelligent way. I think the main reason people are fed up with revenge as a theme in Star Trek movies is because the "bad guys" are mostly depicted as being on the verge of insanity or already beyond it. Although insanity could also work, but only if it comes across as the calm, calculating and manipulating kind of insanity. The problem with Star Trek movies is that we got onedimensional screaming madmen with super ships and super weapons instead of intelligent characters that are on par with our heroes.

I had hoped that Khan would turn out differently, that he would fight with brainpower instead of going completely berserk. In the beginning of the movie I thought they got it right, but in the end it almost felt like Nero II.
 
Khan was nothing but an out of control One dimensional screaming madman? When did that happen?
 
Khan was nothing but an out of control One dimensional screaming madman? When did that happen?

The route taken to the bridge was a reflection of brainpower.

To what bridge? The Vengeance bridge? So he told Kirk that Marcus was a bad guy ... big deal. Kirk would have found out five minutes later by himself (when the Vengeance warped in and Marcus tried to destroy the Enterprise).

And that was pretty much it. If nuKhan really was so super intelligent, he didn't even begin to show it. He bombed the Section 31 base in London, massacred some Admirals in Starfleet HQ and flew the Vengeance right into San Francisco ... I think that qualifies as a onedimensional madman. They tried to give him some depth by making it about his "family", but it absolutely didn't work for me.

I'd love to see a villain that is a little more Luther Sloan like, someone who can actually outsmart the Enterprise crew ... not just on one occasion but throughout the whole movie, cat and mouse like. I know that Sloan's motivation wasn't revenge, but you get the point.

And I want a movie that doesn't end with big explosions and the villain going nuts.
 
Oso Blanco said:
To what bridge? The Vengeance bridge?

Yeah, that's the one! Good to see you're following along...

Oso Blanco said:
So he told Kirk that Marcus was a bad guy ... big deal. Kirk would have found out five minutes later by himself (when the Vengeance warped in and Marcus tried to destroy the Enterprise).

Spoke too soon. That doesn't seem to have anything to do with what I said.

Oso Blanco said:
And I want a movie that doesn't end with big explosions and the villain going nuts.

This movie doesn't end with the villain going nuts. It ends with Spock going nuts.
 
Oso Blanco said:
To what bridge? The Vengeance bridge?

Yeah, that's the one! Good to see you're following along...

Oso Blanco said:
So he told Kirk that Marcus was a bad guy ... big deal. Kirk would have found out five minutes later by himself (when the Vengeance warped in and Marcus tried to destroy the Enterprise).

Spoke too soon. That doesn't seem to have anything to do with what I said.
Set, that's making the response unnecessarily personal, and I know I've asked you on more than one occasion to refrain from doing so. Warning for trolling; comments to PM.
 
We just need a writer with an imagination who actually has something to say.

And a studio willing to spend $150-$200 million dollars (plus marketing) to bring it to the screen. That is the problem. It's tough for an executive to back a film with that type of budget that has a premise that isn't an easy sell to the general public.
 
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