The whole Pheytus thing was just a joke that ran through one book. I don't see how it brought the quality of the entire story down to "Star Trek: Middle School" with just one joke. This series is known for its humor and outrageousness (just look at some of the plot points and characters), and it has been since the series came out in 1997. It's not like it's Arthur C. Clarke or anything.
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It's not just that it's a joke, it's an inept joke. It's a pun that only works if you pronounce it fee-tus, but it's spelled in such a way that a lot of people are going to read it as fay-tus. I did. Not to mention that Starfleet personnel making fun of another person's name strikes me as implausibly juvenile on the characters' part and self-indulgent on the author's. And it's not just one joke, it's just the most extreme example (fortunately, the notorious "21 bun salute" scene was removed from one of the NF books by its editor before publication).
I also originally read it as "fay-tus". If someone didn't get it, then it was no big deal. It didn't play into the story that much, did it?
To say that Starfleet personel wouldn't make fun of someone's name is rather naive. They are people, not gods. They do and say the same things as everyone else. We like to think that they should be beyond reproach, but if they can be traitorous (Capt.Tracey) break the prime directive (every Captain at some point) and even shoot another member of the fleet in the foot (one of the MACO's in Destiny), then making fun of someones name can be considered rather tame. And as for self indulgence on the writer's behalf...have you ever read any of PAD's other comics or books?
