Is it? Because I freaking loved it - other than the reimagined Klingon stuff. That was off-putting. But the new animation completely revitalized the dialog. The edits were choppy - mostly because the creator is making an abridged version - but this is totally on the right track.
Had he/she just stuck with the original Klingon designs and maybe tweaked the voice so it didn't sound like Doohan and then updated the animation as seen, this would be a home run.
Even Uhura's line "well, we could always throw rocks" is not suddenly hilarious because of the decision to not do a closeup. Just a quick rack focus and then back, everyone just ignoring it.
Honestly, as a proof of concept, I would back it. I'd love to see the entirety of TAS redone like this.