Edited to add re: the Crystalline Entity.
The big difference between Seven killing Bjayzel and the attempted killing of the Crystalline Entity is, I don't think it's entirely clear that the C.E. understands that it is murdering sentient lifeforms when it acts, and, furthermore, it may be a one-of-a-kind entity. Whereas, Bjayzel clearly understands that she is violating other people's rights, and is clearly not the only one of her kind. End edit.
Sci said:
Yes, it is. You just didn't engage with the material on its own terms and are therefore denying the implications of the text and the subtext. Any work of art can be made to seem shallow if the viewer chooses not to actually engage with it.
Couldnt you say the same about any shallow story?
"The same?" "The same" would be, "any story can be made to sound shallow even if it is deep if the person describing it refuses to engage with the material."
Trying to rebut that statement with a claim that it applies to shallow works of art is... counter-intuitive. It doesn't contradict my claim that a deep story can be made to sound falsely shallow, it just adds an additional claim that shallow stories can be made to sound shallow.
Sometimes there's just not much to engage with.
There's plenty to engage with in PIC. The show is rife with examinations of mortality, of existentialism, of guilt and redemption, of the meaning of family, of prejudice and oppression, of liberation and connection, of death and new life. You just don't
want to engage with it.
Somebody stole Neelix's lungs and Janeway let them off the hook.
It's been ages since I've seen that episode, but I seem to remember that Janeway recognizes the context of what happened: Both insofar as there is no rule of law in Vidiian society (because it has reverted to a predatory state due to the effects of the Phage), and insofar as
Voyager is not powerful enough to enforce the rule of law upon the Vidiians -- and insofar as there is a need for compassion and forgiveness for people who are essentially pressured into predation by social forces beyond their control.
Bjayzel, by contrast, faces no such pressure. She clearly has the means to emigrate to a planet where there is the rule of law and adequate social and technological infrastructure for her to be safe and have all of her needs met.
So, I'm not persuaded by the comparison. Yes, Janeway in "The Phage" and Seven in "Stardust City Rag" are both facing people who have engaged in predation in an environment where there is no rule of law, and in which they (Janeway and Seven respectively) do not have sufficient power to enforce the rule of law. But the key difference is, the Vidiians have no choice but to prey upon others if they are to survive; Bjayzel has no need to prey upon others to survive. So, no, I'm not convinced that the mercy Janeway showed the Vidiians is a binding precedent upon Seven.
Lon Suder wasnt executed.
Because within the internal environment of the USS
Voyager, they have the rule of law. This example does not apply to Seven's situation.
They didnt execute unarmed people, other than Tuvix
You mean, they didn't murder unarmed people except when they did?
which was explored pretty well
It got one episode and then no allusion or reference to it ever again. We never even saw
allusion to Tuvix ever again, never got any indication his death haunted Janeway the way Bjayzel's death haunted Seven.
True he straight up killed Joker in that one. Also he kicked a guy off the bell tower. I was more thinking of the Nolan batman. But I love 89 Batman as well
I mean, the Nolan Batman isn't all that much better. He talks a big talk about how he only has "one rule," but he damn near turns to the camera and lawyers to the audience that he isn't responsible for Ra's's death in
Batman Begins, he kills Harvey Dent at the end of
The Dark Knight, and he outright kidnaps and tortures people throughout both films.
The things that Star Trek: Picard does, I recognise it does well. But I can't find a link between the dark, hateful, dystopian perspective it presents,
Okay, sorry, gotta fight you on this.
Star Trek: Picard is
not dystopian. If you use that word, you either are intentionally using it fallaciously, or you do not understand the definition of the term.
A
dystopia is not a society that is flawed or a story that features unpleasant political circumstances. A
dystopia is a particular kind of fictional society, that is fundamentally oppressive and tyrannical in some way. Oceania is a totalitarian dystopia based upon authoritarian Stalinism; the World State in
Brave New World is a dystopia based upon authoritarian hedonism; the Community in
The Giver is a dystopia based upon the control of human memory and psychological development; Gilead in
The Handmaid's Tale is a dystopia based upon cisheteropatriarchy. Etc.
The United Federation of Planets in
Star Trek: Picard is not a dystopia. Period. Federation citizens in
Star Trek: Picard have numerous civil rights and liberties. There is no authoritarian government out to oppress the masses. There is no poverty, disease, or war. (Even Raffi, who seems to have totally shut down and isolated herself from
everyone, is living in a mobile home that frankly looks pretty cozy, and there's no indication that she is in any way unsafe living by herself isolated from most of society.)
What the Federation in PIC is
not, is a utopia. It is a mostly-good society which has some major problems and has done terrible things, in the form of banning the development of synthetic lifeforms and refusing to extend evacuation assistance to the Romulans.
That is a terrible thing, but it is not dystopia. The Federation is not fundamentally abusive; it is not an authoritarian state.
The biggest difference between the depiction of the Federation in PIC and the depiction of the Federation in TNG is
not anything that the Federation does. TNG was
full of times the Federation did awful shit -- the Federation tried to forcibly relocate the Ba'ku in INS, it tried to develop illegal phase clock technology and then cover it up in "The
Pegasus," it tried to forcibly relocate the Native American colony on Dorvan V, it ignored evidence warp drive was damaging the fabric of space-time until someone died to prove it, it was ready to allow the people of Boraal II to go extinct in a planetary disaster, it tried to funnel weapons to the Bajoran Resistance in violation of the Prime Directive and its treaty with Cardassia, it assigned an investigator who started a witch-hunt aboard the
Enterprise-D, tries to kidnap Lal away from Data to study her, it was willing to just let the people of Drema IV go extinct in a natural disaster, and it tried to order Data to submit himself to be dismantled so his positronic brain could be studied.
And that's to say nothing of all the times we saw the Federation commit horrible abuses of power in DS9 and VOY. Use of slave labor from sentient EMH Mark Ones, anybody?
The difference is in
framing and tone. In TNG, the tone is bright and optimistic, and the characters are shown as always having sufficient social capital to Do The Right Thing. The narrative frames abuses of power by agents of the Federation government as deviations from the Federation norm (except when it frames that horrible abuse of power as being itself somehow acceptable, such as allowing the planets Dorvan V and Drema IV to go extinct).
PIC, on the other hand, begins with a tone of weariness and regret, and Picard is shown as lacking sufficient social clout to force the Federation to Do The Right Thing. The narrative frames two horrible abuses of power by the Federation government as being an indictment of the Federation as a whole rather than as a deviation from a rogue agent.
Objectively, the Federation in TNG and PIC aren't that much different. The real difference is in how the narrative frames the Federation's behavior and what mood the narrative wants you to have. In TNG, the narrative wants you to think the Federation is Good. In PIC, the narrative wants you to be a bit more skeptical of the Federation's leaders (but still affirms Federation values).
The other difference, of course, is arc. The Federation does not grow or change in TNG, because the narrative frames the Federation as already damn-near perfect. The Federation, however, grows and changes in PIC, coming to realize that it has allowed fear and pain to drive it to make destructive choices for which it must atone. The Federation begins PIC in a state of sin, and is led to a state of forgiveness by Picard. PIC is a story about restoration.
As you rightly say, even when past Star Treks got dark, they did so without deconstructing that hopeful, optimistic future.
Oh bullshit. DS9 was
all about deconstruction. DS9 literally had characters saying, "Earth is the problem. On Earth, you look out the window and you see Paradise. It's easy to be a saint in Paradise."
DS9 was never as dark as Picard.
Horseshit! DS9 had the Federation fighting a terrible war that was killing huge numbers of people. It had the Federation assassinating four innocent men so as to trick the Romulans into joining the war on the basis of falsified evidence!
Voyager was never as dark as Picard.
VOY literally had the Federation using slave labor from sentient EMH Mark Ones!
Once upon a time, all our franchises had their own respective sacred cows, lore that could not be dreamed of being touched, a foundation to build on yes, but always a foundation.
On this point, it's a matter of your aesthetic taste.
It's like comparing, say, A
Superman for All Seasons to
The Dark Knight Returns. All Seasons is a story that's about re-affirming positive, optimistic archetypes. That's the core of the Superman character and world: A hero who comes from the sky and does only good.
The Dark Knight Returns, on the other hand, is a deconstruction of the superheroic genre, and it analyzes the kind of pain and anger that drives a character like Batman.
I happen to think that
Star Trek, as a franchise,
encompasses both poles along this axis.
Star Trek is at its core always going to have a certain level of optimism, but
Star Trek is
not always positive. It
does do deconstruction. It did it in DS9, and it does it in PIC.
Star Trek encompasses both Superman and Batman.
It's indicative of modern zeitgeist. No television is valid unless it competes with Game of Thrones. But some franchises can not just be shoved into that style. Not without losing some thing. Superman is the same, in my opinion. The writers at Warner Brothers tell us the reason they can't make a Superman movie is because they don't know how to write for an optimistic, inherently light character in a world with so much dark. No-one seems to understand that's Superman's appeal as a character, they just look at him and say "He's too nice a character to write for, and we can't figure out how to write for that".
I agree with you 100% on Superman... But
Star Trek is not Superman.
Star Trek encompasses both Superman and Batman, metaphorically speaking. It encompasses both archetype and deconstruction, and it has for
decades. DS9 was deconstructing TNG's optimism in 1993!
Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan was deconstructing TOS's heroic idealization of Captain Kirk in frickin' 1982!
It's like, that's the viewpoint that Picard's writers brought to Star Trek. 'We don't know how to write a positive, conflict-free future'. When new showrunner Michael Piller came aboard The Next Generation in it's third season he expressed similar misgivings, but respected that's what Star Trek is, and tried instead to write dramatic stories inside that. He turned a challenge into a strength, decided that it would be rewarding to work inside those limitations and turn them into a blessing. And in so doing, he presided over some of that show's strongest pieces.
Siiiiigh. Getting rid of the rule against conflict is the
best thing to happen to modern
Star Trek. A "conflict-free future" is both boring and
dishonest. That's not how human beings have ever been or ever will be. It's not "optimism" to claim that there's no conflict in the future -- it's just a lie.
Optimism is saying, yes, people will be people, but we'll make better choices and have better supports. And when TNG
rejects the "no-conflict" rule, that's when it's at its best. For example, Miles O'Brien in "The Wounded" is clearly a man who struggles with bigotry against Cardassians because of the traumas he endured during the Cardassian War. He's not perfect -- he's not inherently "more evolved" than us modern types. But he's part of a society that taught him to recognize this flaw in himself, and he's doing his best to fight it and deal with it -- and in the end, he gets the rogue captain who was to about to re-start the war to turn himself in.
Frankly, that "no conflict" rule means that TNG could never evolve beyond its positive archetypes, that even its best episodes (i.e., the ones that
broke that rule) would have no long-term consequences because to showcase psychologically realistic characters over the long term would be expose the lie of its "conflict-free" future.
I love Superman, but the thing about Superman is, there's a limit to how deep and how high of artistic quality a Superman story can achieve. Because Superman is, at the end of the day, a story for children, about reaffirming the idea of a morally just apollonian order over a morally corrupt dyonisean chaos. Adaptations of Superman should honor that, but there are sever artistic limits that come with that, too.
Star Trek is not Superman.
Star Trek certainly encompasses the positive archetypes of Superman, but it also encompasses deconstructivism and skepticism. It does so
without being nihilistic, but it's also not always positive. It returns to hope in the end, but yes,
Star Trek sometimes takes long detours into darkness first. That's a longstanding ST tradition, and PIC is not unique for indulging in it.
Stuff like The Best of Both Worlds explores conflict and darkness without once jettisoning Star Trek's optimism.
"The Best of Both Worlds" is a deviation from TNGish "positive and conflict-free future" on every level. It's all about the personality conflict between Shelby and Riker on one hand, and about the Federation facing a near-apocalypse on the other. It literally depicts the violent assault and metaphoric rape of the main character, and features the deaths of 11,000 innocent people. It is
dark and conflict-ridden as hell.
I sometimes feel like today's writers are incapable of that. Everything must be dark, full of conflict, full of angst. Because that's 'realistic'. But... is it 'Star Trek'? Piller certainly didn't think so.
You really shouldn't imply a dead guy would back up your opinions just because you want him to. For all you know, Piller would love PIC.
And, yes,
Star Trek: Picard is still legitimate
Star Trek, because
Star Trek: Picard is a classical comedy: It starts in darkness, and ends in light. By the time S1 of PIC ends, the Federation has repealed its ban on Synthetics and realized it was wrong to deny Romulan assistance. It has taken the people of Coppelius under its protection, even though they tried to destroy the Federation, because it has recognized that forgiveness and peace are better than fear and war. Picard himself has been redeemed from his greatest failure, by his willingness to face the world and sacrifice for what he believes in.
Star Trek: Picard deconstructs -- and then re-affirms.