Plotwise, at this point Uhura already knows that Kirk is to be addressed as Captain, as per the earlier bridge scene where she had received such instructions from Starfleet, used the appropriate title, and prompted Sulu to use it as well. McCoy's choice of terminology we have to attribute to his affable curmudgeoness or whatever...
Yup. And censoring the log entry when the pilot was aired as part of the first season is poor proof of "changes" in interpretation of the backstory, the nature of the starship, etc. - the entry had to be censored because it indicated that this was the very first adventure of the series, while the intent at the eventual airing was instead to portray it as part of the episodic show.
The censoring does remove all traces of any intent to portray the ship as not-quite-military, though. It also sorta cuts the umbilical to Forbidden Planet and its mission of SAR, colonial oversight and contact with alien life...
Timo Saloniemi
Shaw is simply pointing out the IRL advancement of the production. Of course in-universe the original Where No Man voiceover is not canon.
Yup. And censoring the log entry when the pilot was aired as part of the first season is poor proof of "changes" in interpretation of the backstory, the nature of the starship, etc. - the entry had to be censored because it indicated that this was the very first adventure of the series, while the intent at the eventual airing was instead to portray it as part of the episodic show.
The censoring does remove all traces of any intent to portray the ship as not-quite-military, though. It also sorta cuts the umbilical to Forbidden Planet and its mission of SAR, colonial oversight and contact with alien life...
Timo Saloniemi