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"Whispers" Line-by-Line!

^ finishing.... ;)

[Airlock]

O'BRIEN [OC]: I worked on the pylon controls the better part of the day. Needle in a haystack wouldn't do this job justice. When I finally found the crack in the RF power conduit, I couldn't imagine how it could've occurred so deep in the system, unless someone had broken it deliberately.

[O'Brien's quarters]

KEIKO: Hard day?
 
O'BRIEN: You could say that.

^
(Not sure the protocol of doing ones with extensive OC/logs, like "Data's Day". Break it up? Continuous? etc etc.)
 
^ If it's the same character speaking without someone else interrupting then it's included as one post, even if it includes things like log entries, offscreen dialogue, or multiple scene changes.

KEIKO: You want to lie down before dinner?
 
O'BRIEN: No, Jake's coming over in a little while. I promised to help him with his science project.
 
KEIKO: Well, you know how it is with kids. He probably just ate too much junk on the Promenade after school.
 
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