Hmm...7/10
Definitely had good moments, but a little too predictable. In no particular order:
Bowers standing up to Vaughn - now if Bowers had actually succeeded at stopping Vaughn from beaming down to the planet I would have cheered. Just once, I'd like to be surprised in a scene like that. The 'captain' always gets to beam down - not once is he ever stopped. Made Bowers (continue to) look like a whimp
Liked the Ro/Quark stuff, but could have used a little more of it. Ditto with the Sisko/Kira material.
Vaughn and Prynn falling to their doom - no wait, they landed on the Millennium Falcon (I mean, the Klingon ship). That was a little too
Empire Strikes Back for me.
Kira's vision: Didn't do it for me. Felt like watered down LOTR: ROTK (the movie, not the book). Rather generic fantasy stuff there. Could have gotten the point across in a few chapters without stretching it out so far.
Taran'atar under MIND-CONTROL (TM): That felt like a deus ex machina - "He's not really evil, he's being controlled." Again, I'd like to be shook up a little - give us something unpredictable.
Vaughn believing Prynn's dead - I just rolled my eyes at this point - he started believing that way too easily, and then spent the rest of the novel in a Tearful Vaughn Guilt-trip (TM). I was starting to wish he'd just put a phaser in his mouth and save us all from the misery. I'm really sick of that particular arc.
Ascendents: When reports of a mysterious Dominion were trickling in during DS9's early seasons, things were getting creepy. When the parasites were starting to make their move, things were creepy. I'm getting bored waiting on the Ascendents to show their faces in the Alpha Quadrant. Waiting on them is like waiting on Morn to finish talking.
Oh yeah - I formally give my permission to stop printing on the Voyager line of novels in favor of printing more DS9.
