Since the thread has come back up, and I was on TBBS sabbatical when the book originally came out, I wanted to ask a question I've always wondered about.
At the end of SH, when the Enterprise rides in to the rescue, I was struck by how much I resented Kirk in that moment when it switched to his perspective. All these other characters I knew and loved had been suffering and dying, and he's being all cocky about how his hotshot crew can execute this perfect rescue, when he's just been lucky enough to show up after the hard part but before the day is totally lost.
I've wondered if that was a commentary on how many TOS episodes had the Enterprise showing up after a planet had been destroyed, or another ship's crew had all been killed. If you were to step outside of the perspective of Kirk and his crew and look at the whole sequence of events objectively, the episode was still a total disaster even with the intervention of our heroes. It certainly gave me a new perspective on a lot of stories that only had happy endings thanks to a sort of narrative myopia that asserted that our TV friends were the only people who mattered.
So I've been curious if that was an intended message, or if I just took something unexpected out of the contrast of the Vanguard crew being routed and the Enterprise hardly even mussing their hair.