One of my favorite episodes, despite some obvious flaws, this a gripping remake of a couple of classic WWII submarine war movies, as well as the introduction of the greatest recurring antagonistic race the federation ever faces in TOS and onward - The Romulans (and wow, they're an offshoot of the Vulcan race - which itself lends an aura of much deeper time to the show). It must have been before the time of Surak when the forbearers of the Romulans left Vulcan, and war lead Vulcan to lose its spaceflight capabilities for centuries after that. How close to extinction must they have come to lose those records and forget about their long lost brothers? I did really love the suggestion in
Star Trek: Enterprise that humans remind the Vulcans of only one other race - themselves - emotional, warlike, dangerous, and without the grace of the discipline of logic, there goes humanity.
The production and airing order are different, so while we've seen the Enterprise fire phasers in
The Corbomite Maneuver, this is the first time they actually wrote that the ship's weapons were used - and since it was before the introduction of "photon torpedoes," they called them proximity phasers - so they acted sort of like depth charges. They transferred story elements of the cat and mouse submarine chase so well they never thought to ask if it always made sense - for example, the hush-hush run silent bits where people whisper so the enemy won't hear them. Water carries sounds very well - better than air - but space - not so much - not at all, in fact, so why the lowered voices? Sure, it makes sense to shut off equipment so you're not putting out EM signals, but whispering? I guess Spock's inadvertent hitting of a button that turned on his loud beeping equipment wasn't bad so much for the noise, but for sending out an EM (or subspace) signal or something that could be "heard."
Star Trek was always so cool for getting around hot button topics the censors didn't want anyone talking about - like the war, racial tensions, and bigotry. It was just science fiction, so not real, so who cared - right? They kept pushing the envelope and getting away with it, so it's little wonder the show was ahead of its time in more ways than one.
Back to the story now. A century earlier, Earth was at war with the Romulans, and after 4 or so years of "primitive battle," by 23rd century standards, they set up a neutral zone between Earth and Romulan space. A weird place inasmuch as there are asteroids lining it (must have been towed there) and a nearby star (otherwise, that comet wouldn't look that way with a long tail), but these things are possible. I suppose an uninhabited star system could be there.
And the Romulans have a super cool weapon and a practical cloaking device, but, apparently, no warp drive. I've come to believe the Romulans must have been using something akin to an aircraft carrier, with these impulse powered scout ships not too far away from the warp driven mother carrier, perhaps set off with months of duration, but the carrier remained safely on the other side of the neutral zone (too costly an investment to risk like that). Otherwise, you just can't get that far into space on impulse alone. And I doubt they'd do all that well against a warp driven starship, but at least their weapon was impressive. Too bad they forgot they're in 3-D space and can go in more directions than just forwards or backwards. Sidestepping such a weapon would be totes easy for a warp driven starship. The writers might have been intelligent, but not experienced, and their pattern indicates two-dimensional thinking. Don't talk to me about two-dimensional thinking, boys - you're as guilty as anyone - or maybe even one-dimensional thinking, really. But then if you later think too hard on it, you can't enjoy one of the most exciting moments in the episode (or maybe the entire series) as a weapon of
THAT destructive magnitude is about to hit the ship (through deflectors and over a mile of solid iron, you saw what it did to the outpost - mein Gott). And WOW, the incidental music sells it - I love all the Trek music and sound effects, and for me it's often the height of hilarity when other shows use those identical sound effects. And there's a pretty girl who needs to cling to the hero, too, so that's fun, even if it was just Rand. So long, Janice, for I think that might have been your last appearance (canned episode, recall).
Later, in
The Deadly Years, the Enterprise will be hit repeatedly with dozens of those blasts (well, maybe the Romulans toned them down to conserve energy/fuel, or the Federation's shield technology had vastly improved since then, or they just found a way to tune their shields specifically to thwart that type of weapon. Live and learn, you know).
But isn't shield tech amazing? An honest to gosh nuke went off just 100 yards away and they survived it - granted, it was probably not a huge nuke since it only needed to destroy their own ship, but still. And talk about one of the most breathtaking re-mastered shots to date - the Enterprise isn't just tilted and dead looking in space like in the original, but tilting and slowly rotating on perhaps two different axes. The shot was truly, Glorious. Other cool remastered bits are a more colorful, particulate laden comet tail and some below and above shots of the Romulan war bird. I was disappointed, though, they didn't include some debris after the war bird self-destructed. Once its transmitters were gone, the viewing screen could/should have reverted from the Romulan bridge shot to an expanding debris field in space rather than an empty space shot. They HAD the room - actual viewing screen time they could have put anything there. I guess they didn't think of it, or more likely, didn't have the time or budget for it, but it would have been much better, IMO. And when they reversed to go away from the Romulan after Spock's tip off, they still showed them moving forward and not backward. Nit picks.
Note: Of course, photon torpedoes would delivery energy on the order of a nuke or more, so I guess the shields are built to take it (or more likely) deflect it around them. I'm just so impressed by shield tech, that's all. When it comes right down to it, their shield tech is always a step ahead of their weapons tech.
We wonder about the wisdom of having Kirk give an order to fire to a guy, who then sends that order down to another guy, who then pushes a button. Why not cut out a step or two? Well, they rarely show that aspect of the weapons again, and when Kirk gives the order, the command is seemingly handled from just the bridge later on. But as I understand it, that is sort of how it works on an actual submarine, so too much direct translation is still going on there.
And never forget well synchronize closed captioning - I occasionally get to learn what's actually been said that was hard to discern before or I just mistook as something else. Here, for example, when the Enterprise fires the final blow, the Romulan commander screams something. I never could make it out. It's "They're firing at us!" which, I guess, was a total surprise since he thought they were virtually dead from the nuke. Guess not, commander. But another CC version has the commander screaming "Weapons!" and that's probably closer to what was actually said. So I dunno.
And there's great acting all over the place - Kirk, the Romulan Commander and his Centurion sidekick - Bones – Spock - Rand. Scotty doesn't say much, but a few gestures made me smile and I knew he was there, too.
Lawrence Montaigne makes his first appearance in Trek: here, as one of my favorite Romulans, Decius.
We will see him gain later as the Vulcan, Stonn.
And Uhura even takes over the navigator's position - she's not just a pretty face, but also a competent bridge officer.
This isn't my favorite episode, but it is certainly one of my top 5 favorites, despite its flawed story elements. The story is a 9, but flaws bring it down, and yet the re-mastered effects raise it back to its rightful 9 out of 10 status. It's one of the best TOS episodes they made.