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TNG Relaunch: What happened to Madden?

Xeris said:
I don't even remember what the excuse was for him being aboard in Insurrection, wasn't he actually supposed to be Ambassador by that time? I can't remember.

No, INS took place during the Dominion War. As for Worf's reason for being there, he did explain it, but only in the background while other people were talking, and thus his explanation was drowned out. According to the script, his explanation was, "I was at the Manzar colony installing a new defense perimeter when I heard the Enterprise was in this sector." So apparently it was okay for him to just drop what he was doing and go hang out with his old buds in the middle of a war.
 
Maestro said:
Because the deleted scene was included in the DVD as a deleted scene, everyone has the right, in a TrekLit forum, to ask the question, "What happened to Madden?" What we don't have the right to say is "Because he was in that deleted scene, you writers must use him or explain what happened."

This thread is, I think, really reflective of the way DVDs and their bonus features are changing the way we view films. Thinking about my own viewing habits, I know I prefer the Director's Edition of "Daredevil", always watch "The Lord of the Rings" with the extended footage spliced in, or reading about yet another edit of "Blade Runner" being released just a short time ago. And I almost never go to the theatres anymore, so 'theatrical version', to me, is just another option on the menu screen. While people like me are probably still a minority, the notion of a 'definitive' version of a film, as represented by the theatrical release, is growing increasingly fuzzy, with ever more user-determined options creating a more diverse experience of a same product. I rather suspect the Madden question is going to keep coming up, partly for this reason: no matter how many times one italicizes deleted scene, the fact that it contains a segment of the story will make it relevant to people increasingly used to exercizing their own preferences in conceptualizing the product.

Fictitiously yours, Trent Roman
 
Christopher said:
Xeris said:
I don't even remember what the excuse was for him being aboard in Insurrection

he did explain it, but only in the background... According to the script, his explanation was, "I was at the Manzar colony installing a new defense perimeter when I heard the Enterprise was in this sector."

In the DVD commentary, Rick Berman admits that the explanations were getting ridiculous so they didn't bother to film it (or hear it, as it were) for this one.

Trent Roman said:This thread is, I think, really reflective of the way DVDs and their bonus features are changing the way we view films. ... I prefer the Director's Edition of "Daredevil", always watch "The Lord of the Rings" with the extended footage spliced in, or reading about yet another edit of "Blade Runner" being released just a short time ago. ... 'theatrical version', to me, is just another option on the menu screen.

But Star Trek is a different beast from those films. This is a major franchise that has created an intricate fictitious universe (or multi-verse) so little details get far more scrutiny and can have major ripple effects in the continuity.
 
Trent Roman said:
This thread is, I think, really reflective of the way DVDs and their bonus features are changing the way we view films. Thinking about my own viewing habits, I know I prefer the Director's Edition of "Daredevil", always watch "The Lord of the Rings" with the extended footage spliced in, or reading about yet another edit of "Blade Runner" being released just a short time ago.

But this isn't like those, because no attempt has been made to put the Madden scene back in the film. It is a separate, leftover thing, no more a part of the film than a blooper reel would be. There's a fundamental difference between new scenes in a director's cut and deleted scenes as separate bonus material.
 
It probably doesn't help the confusion, though, that some aspects of the deleted scenes were used (such as Crusher's fate) and that Madden is in Dillard's novelization, from which some concepts have been adopted by the Marcokradiverse (such as the name "Vkruk" for the Viceroy).
 
Christopher said:
Trent Roman said:
This thread is, I think, really reflective of the way DVDs and their bonus features are changing the way we view films. Thinking about my own viewing habits, I know I prefer the Director's Edition of "Daredevil", always watch "The Lord of the Rings" with the extended footage spliced in, or reading about yet another edit of "Blade Runner" being released just a short time ago.
But this isn't like those, because no attempt has been made to put the Madden scene back in the film. It is a separate, leftover thing, no more a part of the film than a blooper reel would be. There's a fundamental difference between new scenes in a director's cut and deleted scenes as separate bonus material.
But I believe Trent's point is that some people think that someday there might be a director's cut that does include that scene. Now, you and I don't expect Stuart Baird to do something like that, but Joe Average may.
 
^ Nothing even so specific, although I suppose a NEM director's cut may be a possibility. What I'm saying is that the footage is out there, and unlike say a gag reel it feels like part of the story even if it's not included in the main film. People here, in this very thread, have given very good reasons why deleted scenes and that one specifically shouldn't be considered part of the film, particularly in a franchise like Trek, but that only comes into effect if someone takes the time to stop and think about it... rather than, as most of us do, simply watching whatever there is to watch and whatever sticks, sticks; without analysing every sequence for legitimacy. So like Maestro said, it's perfectly reasonable for people to wonder about this character that they've seen, because the theatrical version is no longer the authorial, inviolate entity it once was; the context of footage has become diffuse while still being part of an official product. Even though we here have made a sharp distinction between the theatrical version and the extra scenes in terms of 'must follow / need not follow', I don't think that's anywhere near as obvious to casual fans as some have been making it out to be, and I'm starting to wonder if it might not have been an idea to bring Madden into the fiction, however briefly, to reduce any potential dissonance between what's been seen and what's in print. To those only familiar with the movie proper, he'd be just another character introduced and off'ed in Resistance, while those who seem to recall this Madden fellow becoming the new first officer wouldn't be left confused.

Fictitiously yours, Trent Roman
 
Deleted scenes are a nice little curiosity, but that's all they are. I find myself reminded of when the "restored" version of Robert A. Heinlein's Stranger in a Strange Land was released -- it was his first draft, before it was edited, trumpeted as having "20,000 words restored!" as if that was a good thing.

I read that edition -- it read like a book that needed 20,000 words cut out of it.

When I was writing Honor Bound, I wound up trashing an entire chapter because it wasn't working. I still have the old version of that chapter on my hard drive because I wanted it for reference when I rewrote it. But I cut it for a reason.

The Madden scene was also cut for a reason, and we shouldn't have to be beholden to a dumb scene that the director wisely excised from the final cut of the movie because it was idiotic, out of character, aggressively unfunny (would that he had done the same for the forty-five other aggressively unfunny scenes in the movie), and didn't make any sense from a general perspective, given that they had a viable first officer candidate right there in Worf.

Plus, it's on a separate part of the DVD that's clearly labelled "DELETED SCENES." I'm sorry, but if people are confused by that, then nothing I can do will help them.
 
Yes, but now he's retired, and sadly just provides white noise between plays during UFP-TV broadcast coverage of UPSL games. (United Parrises Squares League)

His name is also attached to the X-Holodeck 360 version, called Madden UPSL 2380... "It's in the game!!!" ™
 
JD said:
I've been wondering during this disscussion if something is actually added back into the movie do you guys then have to follow it?

It's up to Paula Block, CBS Consumer Products, if she insists that a newly-restored scene must be acknowledged by a licensed tie-in, or whether it can be ignored.

We haven't really seen too many (any?) examples yet. I'd guess a new novel mentioning Vejur's cloud would now have to specify 2 AUs in diameter (TMP DVD-DE), not 82 AUs (theatrical and TV editions). Restored scenes in old movies don't usually change the important canonical facts enough to threaten the course of future novels.

Paula still uses the old Roddenberry/Arnold "ST Office" memo about canon as a guide to what's canonical, and what's not, but its authors actually anticipated the existence of several future examples, ie. live-action footage shot for various CD-ROM games and the rides at Las Vegas Hilton's "ST Experience". (Still not canon, even though live action and shown on a screen.) The memo never mentioned restored scenes. Even the restored scenes of "The Cage" don't alter canon, except maaaaaybe for how Pike leaves Vina the first time (ie. the Talosians giving her an illusion of Pike for company in a scene that repeats itself exactly, years later, but with the real one).

But the memo stopped being a hard and fast rule from the day after Roddenberry died, and Richard Arnold was no longer vetting the proposals and finished manuscripts of the tie-ins on GR's behalf.

The most important guide now is, as ever: does it provide maximum storytelling possibilities while staying true to the Star Trek format and premise?
 
Emh said:
But I believe Trent's point is that some people think that someday there might be a director's cut that does include that scene. Now, you and I don't expect Stuart Baird to do something like that, but Joe Average may.

Then they'd be wrong. Stuart Baird has stated clearly on numerous occasions that he doesn't believe in "directors' cuts" and has no intention of ever creating one. He's satisfied with the film as it exists; it is already the director's preferred cut.

Just because a number of people may think something doesn't make it any less wrong. The more people who hold a misapprehension, the more important it is to clarify the reality.


Therin of Andor said:
We haven't really seen too many (any?) examples yet. I'd guess a new novel mentioning Vejur's cloud would now have to specify 2 AUs in diameter (TMP DVD-DE), not 82 AUs (theatrical and TV editions).

I did so in Ex Machina, but not because I "had to" -- simply because I believed the 2 AU figure made much more sense in terms of the Enterprise's travel time through the cloud. There were no dictates from the licensing office about which version to follow.

Paula still uses the old Roddenberry/Arnold "ST Office" memo about canon as a guide to what's canonical, and what's not, but its authors actually anticipated the existence of several future examples... The memo never mentioned restored scenes. Even the restored scenes of "The Cage" don't alter canon, except maaaaaybe for how Pike leaves Vina the first time (ie. the Talosians giving her an illusion of Pike for company in a scene that repeats itself exactly, years later, but with the real one).

But the memo stopped being a hard and fast rule from the day after Roddenberry died, and Richard Arnold was no longer vetting the proposals and finished manuscripts of the tie-ins on GR's behalf.

Keep in mind that canon itself has many internal contradictions, things that get changed over time. Lithium crystals became dilithium. UESPA became Starfleet. The depiction of antimatter in "The Alternative Factor" was ignored everywhere thereafter. Ferengi lost their weird body language after their first appearance. "The Battle"'s assertion that headaches had ceased to exist was wisely ignored in later shows. Data used contractions routinely in the early first season and wasn't defined as emotionless until the third season. Trills were redesigned and lost their inability to use transporters. "Threshold" has been renounced by its own writer as non-canonical. And so on.

"Canon" never means an absolutely consistent continuity -- it just means the core body of stories that's meant to be treated as though it's a common, consistent history even when it isn't. And generally the rule is that the more recent of two contradictory assertions is to be treated as the "true" version -- the revised draft of history, as it were -- while the earlier assertion is swept under the rug. Data did use contractions all the time in early TNG, but we novelists are obligated to pretend he did not -- or at least to avoid explicitly asserting that he did.

Of course, contrary to fan mythology, this is not a matter of strict, systematic rules printed down somewhere, but more a matter of art and creative judgment. Actual written definitions of canon like the Arnold letter are quite rare; more commonly it's just an "I know it when I see it" sort of thing. But it is a convention, if not a formal law, to go with the later, revised interpretation of things where there's a conflict. So that would suggest that if there are two different cuts of a movie, the newer version is preferred.

Well, maybe. The catch is, most of those reinterpretations didn't just come later, but were referred to more often. There are bound to be cases where the reverse is true: where one thing was asserted in multiple episodes, and then a contradictory thing was asserted once, later on. For instance, Deanna saying in INS that she'd never kissed a bearded Riker, when that actually happened at least 4 or 5 times in TNG. Which version do you go with?

So if there's just one example versus one example, the original vs. the director's cut, it might not be so easy to decide which is preferable. Generally it's the one that has the most influence on the canon as a whole; a lot more episodes have depended on Data's lack of emotion or Dax's ability to use transporters safely than on the earlier assertions. But something like, say, Colonel West's role in the ST VI conspiracy has had no bearing on other canon.

Of course, all this is beside the point of this thread, because, again, all indications are that the cut of NEM that exists now is already the director's preferred version. Personally I wish Baird would change his mind and put the Picard/Data philosophical discussion back in the film while cutting out the entire dune buggy chase. But even if he did decide to make a director's cut, I can't see any reason why he would choose to restore that horrible Madden scene. It just plain didn't work, not as a scene in and of itself and especially not as the ending of the film. So expecting the Madden scene to be restored to the film "someday" is irrational on a number of levels. Just because a scene was filmed doesn't make it obligatory to use it. That's why films are edited in the first place.
 
I think everyone posting here understands that deleted scenes aren't a part of the on-screen canon. The question of "could they be later in a Director's Edition" does raise a valid question, however.

I don't think anyone here is demanding the Madden be addressed in the books because he appeared in the deleted scenes, but I think it's a fair question to ask why he wasn't.

I certainly agree that having Worf be the XO opens up a great many interesting storylines. By that same token, however, I am not entirely convinced that bringing Worf back to the Enterprise was the right direction for that character to head.

Having Madden appear in Resistance only to be a part of the body count could have also opened some interesting story lines, but then you'd have people up in arms because he was killed off right away. You'd also have to figure out what Worf was supposed to be doing. Having Worf on the ship might stretch credibility ... the authors here are very adament that Worf would not be back at Tactical (which is amusing, because that's right where TPTB had be putting him).

I doubt that Picard could have become Locutus again with Madden as the XO. His trust in Worf is a lot of why the book turned out the way it did.

Meh, I would have liked to have seen Madden, but I like what's been done with Worf.
 
I think the question comes down to "What version of the movie have the most people seen?" Because, when you get down to it, any novel stemming from Nemesis has to be accessible to people who've at least seen that film. Whether they have the DVD or not is meaningless. These are following the movie, not the DVD.

The winner is usually going to be the theatrical release.

Any director's cut may be taken on a case-by-case basis, but ultimately the smartest decision from a sales perspective is what makes the books accessible to the most people.
 
^^That's a good point. I hadn't thought of that.

Although on the other hand, it might be different for an older movie like TMP. Not as many people currently reading Trek fiction will have seen the movie in theaters -- and as time goes on, more and more new fans will know it mainly from the DVDs. So maybe which version is better-known may change over time.

Still, you're right that it should be about accessibility first and foremost.
 
But what happens when TPTB bring out a new version of NEMESIS with that extra scene at the end? It could be a director's cut (no matter what Baird said) or a new theatrical version. Just like Spock's mentioning that Klingons don't have tearducts.

Will you writers have to take that, what was added back in later, into account?
 
Tino said:
But what happens when TPTB bring out a new version of NEMESIS with that extra scene at the end?

Again, why would you think there's any remote likelihood of that happening? The scene didn't work as the final scene of the movie. Even aside from the fact that it was badly written and unfunny, it didn't work from an editorial standpoint for at least two reasons. One, its levity was inappropriate in the wake of Data's death and thus it would've damaged the mood of the end of the film, undermining the impact of that death. The existing finale is far better because it acknowledges Data's loss while still providing a gently optimistic conclusion. Two, its inclusion would've been badly paced; at this point, the movie needs to keep its momentum going to the finale, not engage in a lengthy digression about seatbelts and the introduction of a new character that has no relevance whatsoever to the story. If there's one thing that's sacrosanct to Hollywood editors, it's pacing. The story has to keep flowing and can't afford extraneous sidebars and distractions.

So there is just nothing about that scene that makes it remotely credible that any competent director or editor would ever go, "You know, this would work as the finale of the movie after all." Because it just plain doesn't work as a finale on any level. It was a mistake. It was a first-draft version that didn't work and was replaced by something stronger. There is just no sense in asking what would happen if it got put back in, because there's no reason why it would be. It's like asking "What if there were a director's cut of Generations that restored the original, far lamer Kirk death that audiences hated?" It's just too improbable a premise to be worth contemplating.
 
Yeah, but...

How would the novelists cope if Stephen Spielberg was brought in to re-edit The Search For Spock, and he replaced all of the Klingons' phasers with walkie-talkies?

What would happen to the canon if TPTB made a Special Edition of Star Trek: Generations and decided to utilize scenes from the Voyager episode "Threshold," so that instead of dying, Kirk just turned into a giant salamander?

What if the digitally remastered version of "The Way To Eden" comes out and all of the music has been replaced with Indigo Girls tunes set to a disco beat? And then what if they digitally insert a character whose name is actually "Herbert" and create a whole new storyline for him where he saves the universe but creates an alternate timeline where banana cream pie doesn't exist? And then the hippies decide not to go to Eden but rather to create a variety act called "The Aristocrats"?

What are you all going to do then??? Huh???
 
Christopher said:
^^That's a good point. I hadn't thought of that.

[ snip ]

Still, you're right that it should be about accessibility first and foremost.

Okay, folks, note this day for future reference. Neither one of these happen very often, but at the same time? I should go buy a lottery ticket.

;)
 
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