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TNG: A Fury Scorned by Sargent & Zebrowski Review Thread (Spoilers!)

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rfmcdpei

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I just picked up a copy of Pamela Sargent and George Zebrowski's 1996 novel A Fury Scorned, #43 in the old TNG novel series, from one of Toronto's many fine used-book retailers.

I'd hopes for the novel when I opened it up this evening. I'd bought most of the TNG novels consistently until the mid-1990s, #40 or so. I posted here last February about Diane Duane's Intellivore, #45 in the series, probably the last book I bought as I lost interest in the series. I probably passed up #43 in the bookstores. It wasn't until later, when I learned more about the authors as I read more SF, that I became curious. Sargent and Zebrowski, it turned out, were notable authors in their own rights, Sargent writing among other things a noteworthy trilogy about Venus terraforming and a YA generation ship novel (Earthseed) that I quite like, Zebrowski writing "Big Idea" SF of which perhaps his most notable might be his 1979 Macrolife. Their credentials made me curious about what they'd do with the book, especially when I read the promising premise.

With their sun about to go nova, the people of Epictetus III face utter annihilation. Although the "U.S.S. Enterprise" TM has come to lead the rescue operation, there is no way to evacuate a population of over one hundred million, leaving Captain Picard to make an agonizing decision. Should he try to salvage the planet's children, its greatest leaders and thinkers, or its irreplaceable archeological treasures? No matter what he decides, millions must be sacrificed -- unless another solution can be found.
With time running out, Data proposes a revolutionary scientific experiment that could save all of Epictetus III, or doom both the planet and the "Enterprise" as well.
Happily, I wasn't disappointed.

Epictetus III is a Federation colony world with a largely human population, a hospitable ocean world (92% of the surface) with beautiful landmasses, an enchanting ecology, and the fascinating mystery of a vanished and accomplished indigenous civilization that has left vestiges of a very advanced all over the planet's surface. By the time that the Enterprise arrives on stardate 46003.6 (early January 2369), the planet has been settled for 150 years and is home to 20 million people who've built a thriving civilization. Most unfortunately, it turns out that Epictetus III's sun is set to go nova, as the ancient indigenous civilization's mechanisms for stabilizing an apparently unstable star finally break down. (Or something.)

A Fury Scorned is a Trek novel that's explicitly concerned with ethics, appropriately enough for a novel concerned with the fate of a planet apparently named after the Greek philosopher who was concerned with finding ways to lead an ethical life and avoid suffering. How does anyone behave ethically in the context of the impending death of a world? How do you show sympathy? Who and what do you evacuate? What is the best way to meet your world's end? These questions keep coming up as the Enterprise-D crew--including a native of the planet in question, Ensign Ganesh Mehta, an interesting character who's a friend of Worf--try to deal with an impossible situation. The character of Captain Picard is of particular note as an individual concerned with the ethics of how to behave, but other characters--Worf, Troi, Mehta, various Epictetans like the planet's chief minister's Mariamna Fabre and archeologist/politician Samas Rychi--also share this concern. This concern engages with different situations featuring in the novel. What are people to think of the few thousand Epictetans who took the planet's few sublight craft and tried to flee? How important is it to save vestiges of the planet's past? Just how do you pick three thousand people to evacuate out of a planetary population of twenty million? How do you deal with the sort of despair that makes suicide--even mass suicide--more palatable than waiting helpless for the apocalypse?

Fortunately for Epictetus III, there always was a solution. (Did you really think that there wouldn't be?) Data saves the day, coming up with the idea of using the ancient Epictetans' sun-stabilizing technology to tap vast volumes of energy from the planet's sun to let the Enterprise generate a wormhole that could deposit the planet in a suitable orbit around another stabler star. (We'll come to the Trekverse mechanics of this later.) Interesting, in A Fury Scorned ethical problems feature as highly as the technical. While the Enterprise crew do end up deciding that it's better to risk everything with the hope of saving the entire planet--the wormhole generation might fail, and the ship could be left without warp drive in front of the nova--than to play it safe, save three thousand people, and let the world die, they're under orders from the Federation Council to remain silent about the plan until they're sure they can implement it. (Better not to tell the desperate people of a doomed world that there's a high-risk solution that could save their world, the Council judged, in case the plan can't be implemented and the Federation and Starfleet look like liars. Even if the mass suicides are ongoing.)

The awesome plan is implemented, despite the challenges, and they do an awesome job of showing what happened. I have to give props to the authors for coming up with the idea of shunting an endangered planet via wormhole from one system to another. The authors did a good job of vividly describing the planet's features before, but they do a great job of showing what happens: the slicing-off of ocean and ocean floor carved off the planet by the wormhole when it started prematurely to contract, the strange distortions of time inside, the massive earthquakes and tsunamis besetting the planet, even the final fluttering and death of beautiful colourful ephemeral insects under a oddly rippling black wormhole sky. The planet and its people don't come off lightly, with massive damage worldwide and hundreds of thousands of dead, while Picard especially is left wondering what he could have done differently. At least the Epictetans are left with the luxury of deciding what their world should be called now that it's the second planet out from its new sun.

A Fury Scorned is a very good novel: I'd give it an 8 out of 10, easily. The scenario--the planet and its people and the threatened catastrophe and its risky solution and the final resolution all --is interesting, both the established crew and original characters are characterized well. I really like the way that Sargent and Zebrowski's describe Data in their novel, depicting him as a meticulous and unflappable being who's able to come up with an audacious plan, get it approved, and implement it, showing him able to deal with Picard's concerns as an equal. The Epictetan characters are all memorable, concerned in their own ways with trying to figure things out (Mehta how to behave on this mission to her threatened homeworld, Fabre with govering her planet, Rychi with figuring out what happened to the natives before it was too late. Worf and Troi also stand out, Worf for his rigourous and not unhelpful approach to the catastrophe and Troi for taking the initiative to negotiate with hostage-takers and taking charge generally. A Fury Scorned is easily one of the best TNG novels published before the current line, and I'd hope it like so many others could also be grandfathered into the current continuity. (I just hope that Epictetus III survived 2381. What a terrible irony it would be if it didn't!)

The biggest problem with the novel is that it features the Enterprise-D creating a wormhole big enough to fit a planet through. I don't think it's insuperable. In the Trekverse, artificial wormholes were created at least as early as the V'Ger encounter, when the unbalanced engines of the NCC-1701 accidentally created a wormhole. Just a few years later, the DS9 episode "Rejoined" starting on stardate 49195.5 featured a Trill science team under Lenara Kahn trying to manufacture a stable wormhole, one that would be as suitable for regular passage to and fro as the Bajoran. It's not unreasonable to imagine that the Enterprise-D might have had the equipment necessary to create a wormhole that would be stable for just long enough to permit safe passage to Epictetus III and the ship itself, especially with the MacGuffin of an alien technology that was able to tap and transmit vast quantities of energy from the core of the dying star.

What say you all?
 
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^ I sure wish the admins would move on those annoying spam bots that reply to every new thread lately.

rfmcdpei, maybe you could add the standard poll and change the thread title to "TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)"? With a fine review like that it sounds like a good opportunity for a proper review thread.
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Re: A Fury Scorned [SPOILERS]

^ I sure wish the admins would move on those annoying spam bots that reply to every new thread lately.

rfmcdpei, maybe you could add the standard poll and change the thread title to "TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)"? With a fine review like that it sounds like a good opportunity for a proper review thread.

Well, at least they're polite spambots. :lol:

I remember reading this novel back in the late 90s and it is one I can actually recall so it couldn't have been that bad. Perhaps a rereading will be in order based off of your glowing review. :)
 
Re: A Fury Scorned [SPOILERS]

rfmcdpei, maybe you could add the standard poll and change the thread title to "TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)"? With a fine review like that it sounds like a good opportunity for a proper review thread.

I added the poll, but I can't figure out how I can change the title of a thread already posted. Could a moderators please change the title?

(Is there an online resource pointing out this kind of stuff anywhere? Or am I missing something obvious?)
 
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^ Thanks!

Title changes can be done through normal post editing, but the option to edit goes away pretty quickly. I'll bring it up with a mod when I next talk to them, unless they see it first.
 
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I remember reading this novel back in the late 90s and it is one I can actually recall so it couldn't have been that bad. Perhaps a rereading will be in order based off of your glowing review.
Having renowned SF writers write Trek novels is a good thing, clearly!
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

Like Bok1234, it has been a while since I've read this one but I do remember enjoying it:)
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

Ditto. If it's the book I'm thinking of, it also has one of my favourite exchanges in all of Trek:

GEORDI
If I knew the end of the world was coming, I'd want to be with my family.

DATA
Really? I would want to be stopping it.

Played for laughs, but it's always struck me as a perfectly "Starfleet" response. Better to die trying to make a difference.
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

Ditto. If it's the book I'm thinking of, it also has one of my favourite exchanges in all of Trek:

GEORDI
If I knew the end of the world was coming, I'd want to be with my family.

DATA
Really? I would want to be stopping it.

Played for laughs, but it's always struck me as a perfectly "Starfleet" response. Better to die trying to make a difference.

One thing I really liked was that this showed the crew of the Enterprise to be brilliant people who could deal with very significant challenges in a rational and ultimately successful manner.

You know, the novel ended noting that in 14 years the Epictetans would see their old star 14 light years away go nova. Going by the stardate conversion, that would place this signal date sometime in early 2383 ...
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

My only memory of this is that it had nothing to do with the Furies in Invasion! like I wanted it to.
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

Does this book contradict any other stuff?

I don't think that there are any outright contradictions, no. The events take place in the space of less than a weak in early January 2369, after stardate 46006.3 as I mentioned. There may be some time conflicts there, I don't know.

A Fury Scorned is self-contained and doesn't make references to any other novels, although it's possible--I think Sargent and Zebrowski had written at least one other Trek book by this time--that the authors connected this book back to a previous one. There are no mistakes in the depiction of the characters, as established in the series or later in the current continuity.

As I mentioned in my review, the big issue is with the Enterprise-D's creation of an wormhole capable of transporting an entire planet to a stable orbit in a system 14 light-years from its system of origin, almost entirely intact. I don't think it's that big of an issue, pardon the pun. Wormholes were created a century ago by the original Enterprise by accident and attempts at stable wormholes made just a few years later so that's not an issue, the Epictetans' wormhole in question was not stable and lasted only long enough for the planet and Enterprise-D to pass through almost entirely intact, and the process made use of an advanced and non-reproducible alien technology that died. YMMV but I think that no contradiction with the current continuity exists.
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

I don't think that there are any outright contradictions, no. The events take place in the space of less than a weak in early January 2369, after stardate 46006.3 as I mentioned. There may be some time conflicts there, I don't know.

That would put it between the consecutive episodes "Time's Arrow" (46001.3) and "Realm of Fear" (46041.1). I don't see a conflict.


A Fury Scorned is self-contained and doesn't make references to any other novels, although it's possible--I think Sargent and Zebrowski had written at least one other Trek book by this time--that the authors connected this book back to a previous one.

No, this was their first Trek novel, and their only TNG novel. And it was published during the era when continuity among novels simply didn't exist.
 
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Excellent review of a book I haven't read since it first came out. I vaguely remember the story but because of this thread I have pulled it off the shelf and will be reading it again.
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

]A Fury Scorned is self-contained and doesn't make references to any other novels, although it's possible--I think Sargent and Zebrowski had written at least one other Trek book by this time--that the authors connected this book back to a previous one.
No, this was their first Trek novel, and their only TNG novel. And it was published during the era when continuity among novels simply didn't exist.

I'd heard, somewhere, that some writers did manage to sneak in passing small things past the editors. If this was their first novel, that would have been impossible.

I did notice that they dropped in a Lieutenant Bulero--the Buleros were the arguable protagonists of Macrolife! Different continuity, though.
 
Re: TNG: A Fury Scorned Review Thread (Spoilers!)

A Fury Scorned is self-contained and doesn't make references to any other novels, although it's possible--I think Sargent and Zebrowski had written at least one other Trek book by this time--that the authors connected this book back to a previous one.

No, this was their first Trek novel, and their only TNG novel. And it was published during the era when continuity among novels simply didn't exist.


George Zebrowski did coauther (with Charles Pellegrino) TNG #50 Dyson Sphere (1999). So A Fury Scorned was his first of two TNG novels (Pamela only worked on Fury).

Pamela Sargent and Greg Zebrowski wrote together TOS #83 Heart of the Sun (1997, #88 Across The Universe (1999), and Garth Of Izar (2003).

And I just read for the first time A Fury Scorned within the past 3 weeks, and I must say that I have to give the book a -5 out of 10. It was totally unbelievable, plus, Data creating a wormhole that was stable enough for a planet to go through---before the events of Emissary (DS9). From what was said in The Price and Emissary it sounds as if the Federation had had very little contact with even unstable wormholes to allow for really good studies of them. (Sure there was the incident in Star Trek The Motion Picture with the wormhole, but the biggest thing that got pulled into that was an asteroid, not a whole planet, and it was caused by an engine imbalance.)

And when the section of Epictetus III (that is a terrible name to pronounce, and I noticed that numerous times the authors just wrote "Epic III") was shorn off by the wormhole, the authors wrote it as if on the area with the research lab had been the only 'small piece' of the planet to be left behind. Just the size of the piece didn't seem to be the right size to have been shorn off, since I would've expected it to have been a bigger piece, especially since Geordi and Data said that the wormhole had moved down while the planet was entering.

Plus I also found that the plotting of the story wasn't going anywhere fast, and I just found that it felt like the authors had cut off the beginning of the story in order to make it fit within a certain page length.

Anyway, terrible, terrible book. Just from that area of the numbered series (#40 to #50) I've now read #'s 43, 44, 45, 47, 48, 49 and 50; 43 and 45 have been the worst of that batch of books so far. #50 Dyson Sphere I read shortly after it came out and I was very impressed with it and I was expecting A Fury Scorned to have been at the same level of writing as that book; unfortunately it wasn't!
 
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