The main thing is that the nose is longer. The six big "fins" are actually just aft of center, which the Foundation model doesn't get right.
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Narrative-wise, McCoy's introduction (along with Illia's arrival and all that light-hearted stuff) should take place before the Rec Deck briefing.Lastly, I really like the edit suggestion above regarding the McCoy's transporter scene. The intensity is lost after the Rec Room scene and yet you do need to show how McCoy joins the team.
I would suggest losing the bridge scene and jumping directly from the Rec Room to the transporter engaging and McCoy beaming up to the Enterprise. That scene could then play out as is. I wouldn't mind losing Kirk's "I need you" to McCoy. IMO, it only makes Kirk seem strangely weak and overly needy though I guess that's the reason it's there.
I agree with your conclusions however I'm not sure how this'd be possible; there needs to be some indication that the transporter is fixed so the bridge scene must be retained, and if I move that to before the rec deck McCoy would be absent from the briefing. Another problem would be not enough time passing after the accident... not really sure how to "fix" this as it seems to be an inherent problem in the film that can only be minimized, only way would be to remove the accident entirely however that introduces its own host of problems.
"The more they overthink the plumbing the easier it is to stop up the drain."
I think you're creating problems that don't need fixing re the order of these scenes.
I agree - with both of you! And it would certainly be lovely to see my thought-movie take physical form. This is place for experimenting, isn't it?"The more they overthink the plumbing the easier it is to stop up the drain."
I think you're creating problems that don't need fixing re the order of these scenes.
You're probably right, but I'm still interested to see how it works out. Won't take too long to throw together a test.
I wouldn't be surprised in the least if that was done on purpose to keep overzealous faneditors from rebuilding the SLV. Sort of like how in 5.1 music remixes the vocals are never completely alone in the center channel...-On the Blu-Ray, the deleted scenes are hard encoded as telecined 29i frame rate, this makes them unusable for my purposes as they have a lot of combing artifacts.
I offered to help a few pages back and instantly got clobbered with lots of overtime at work. Again, I have decent 3D and compositing skills so I'm happy to have a go at anything you'd like. I can certainly try the deleted Tram scene but you mentioned a slight change of angle. Do you have a sketch or simple storyboard of what you'd like to see?
How about some touch up on the ultra form fitting uniforms. I'd be interested in seeing any version of the movie where I don't have to awkwardly avoid looking at Decker's unit.
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