Then They Came for Me (A New Twist)

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by Sector 7, Jan 18, 2012.

  1. Sector 7

    Sector 7 Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Good reasons to stand up for your beliefs and values, and to get involved.
     
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  2. Mr. Laser Beam

    Mr. Laser Beam Fleet Admiral Admiral

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    What's with all the asterisks?
     
  3. Sector 7

    Sector 7 Vice Admiral Admiral

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    They weren't there when I copied and pasted. I'll fix it. Good catch.
     
  4. Tora Ziyal

    Tora Ziyal Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Powerful update to an old favorite, Sector 7.
     
  5. RJDiogenes

    RJDiogenes Idealistic Cynic and Canon Champion Premium Member

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    Eh, kinda awkward, I thought. The original is more elegant and still works just fine-- and has the weight of history behind it.
     
  6. Bisz

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    I see what it was trying to do but it seems very forced and awkward.
     
  7. CorporalCaptain

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    The original also much briefer.
     
  8. ThankQ

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    I missed this story.
     
  9. Hound of UIster

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    Then I think you missed the entire point of the OP's post.
     
  10. ThankQ

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    Enlighten us.
     
  11. RJDiogenes

    RJDiogenes Idealistic Cynic and Canon Champion Premium Member

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    No, I don't think so. :rommie: