Oddly enough, I think "The Killing Joke" has the best ideal of how I always saw Anakin's fall: ""All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy."Hey what happened to this thread? It started out as a joke about an extremely minor SW character and now it's gotten interesting!!!
Hmm, not sure about all that. I have no issue at all with SW delving into adult issues like rape - far preferable to Lucas' tendency to keep everything boring and sanitized for the kiddies (insisting that the bad guys in the Clone Wars must be disposable robots so the noble Jedi won't have to slaughter humanoids, I guess Luke blowing up a bunch of hapless Empire draftees in the Death Star doesn't count) - but I prefer SW to hang onto as much mystery as possible. For Anakin to literally have no father is weird and I like it. Some things should be left unexplained.My personal hope before the other two prequels played out was that Anakin was not conceived by the midichlorians at all, but at some point in her life as a slave on Tatooine Schmi was rendered unconscious and artificially inseminated with Palpatine's Sith-Sperm to give birth to a child that would fool the Jedi into believing the prophecy had been fulfilled so Palpatine could use that to his advantage in destroying them (because he had foreseen Anakin's eventual discovery by the Jedi) and to give him more time to find the true Chosen One himself.
I like the idea that the Force has its own agenda in all this. It wanted Anakin to be a Sith, and that was the intent all along. It's not the Force's fault that the Jedi are pigheaded and insist on interpreting "balance in the Force" in an utterly self-serving way, meaning all Jedi and no Sith. Interesting definition of "balance" there.If the Jedi hadn't been such power-hungry, self-deluded fools, they would have killed Anakin on sight and saved everyone a lot of trouble (not that that would have been anything more than a minor speedbump for the Force).
The PT was just retarded in every way, but you're right that it demonstrated the morality of a womp-rat. For instance, it still gets me that the high and mighty Jedi saw nothing wrong with taking a bunch of poor clones and turning them into cannon fodder just because it was convenient. Blergh. When the clones were ordered to slaughter the Jedi, I cheered. Take that, you priggish elitist hypocrites!While the OT has its faults, the PT is just unremittingly morally retarded--the subjects of slavery, genocide spousal abuse, and child murder are employed just as terribly, and just as offensively, as the subject of rape.Maybe not the reaction Lucas was going for...
I agree with most of this (Anakin should have been at least 16 or 17 in the first movie, he should have been a smart, charming, funny guy, and a widely admired war hero) but you've set up a situation that I think is beyond the powers of any writer to pull off (unless you have something in mind that you can describe?)
A perfect guy just isn't going to turn into a monster who blows up planets. Anakin has got to have one fatal flaw that will set up his fall. He can be perfect in all other ways, and we can love him for it, but the flaw has to be there from the first or the fall is implausible.
I think it should be very simple - lust for power, maybe because he's impatient with the inefficiency of democracy (I can't reconcile the idea that Anakin cares about the Republic politically with his destruction of it) and thinks everyone would be better off if they just gave all the power to him and Palps, combined with the fact that the dark side is just flat-out more fun, probably a lot like a drug, and the Jedi are a bunch of boring old nannies that he's thoroughly sick of, plus it wouldn't have hurt if Lucas would have acknowledged the hypocrisy of the Jedi more directly. Why not overthrow and slaughter them, since they don't live up to their own so-called ideals? Easy to rationalize.
The problem wasn't that it wasn't a surprise (that horse left the barn decades ago) but that the tragic story of a whiny punk isn't worth bothering with. The tragic story of a great guy, a real golden boy who had just that one fatal flaw, that's something else entirely.
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That sort of sums of the whole ideal: Anakin was a good man. Maybe not Jesus/the "chosen one", but a good honest man. Then something just went horribly, tragically, wrong. He was fighting in a war, it wouldn't be out of the realm of possibility that some one he loved was killed in a battle, or he thought the kids were killed, etc, etc. And he just says "fuck it" and turns on...well every one cause the way he sees they all were at fault.