The Haiku Thread
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My opinion is
Haikus don't work in English
They just sound stupid
Haikus don't work in English
They just sound stupid
Haiku elegance
eye of the beholder, is
judge me by size, hmm?
eye of the beholder, is
judge me by size, hmm?
Haiku are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
Fasten seat belts tight.
Your seat cushions float gently.
Headsets, five dollars
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
Fasten seat belts tight.
Your seat cushions float gently.
Headsets, five dollars
Time is wasted here.
Better here than elsewhere, right?
No, probably not.
Better here than elsewhere, right?
No, probably not.
The time that you waste
is replicated into
all your broken dreams
is replicated into
all your broken dreams
Haikus are goofy.
Sonnets require more brains,
And get you more girls.
Sonnets require more brains,
And get you more girls.
A
Amaris
Guest
Slowly, Time's wasting,
Sallowed emotional face,
Covered by It's hands.
=-
Fickle people laugh,
muttering odd sympathies,
silent spaces black.
=-
Strawberry ice cream,
short, sticky little fingers,
melted asphalt dream.
Sallowed emotional face,
Covered by It's hands.
=-
Fickle people laugh,
muttering odd sympathies,
silent spaces black.
=-
Strawberry ice cream,
short, sticky little fingers,
melted asphalt dream.
A little known fact:
My first post here was haiku.
Circle, now complete.
Haiku brevity
Ideal expression for such
Networks as Twitter?
My first post here was haiku.
Circle, now complete.
Haiku brevity
Ideal expression for such
Networks as Twitter?
A
Amaris
Guest
What he wants to be,
his dreams and aspirations,
still dies in his sleep.
=-
Looking at the stars,
shining baubles mystery,
lifespan not enough.
=-
Warm and windy day,
dewdrops on the grassy lawn,
time takes the sunlight.
his dreams and aspirations,
still dies in his sleep.
=-
Looking at the stars,
shining baubles mystery,
lifespan not enough.
=-
Warm and windy day,
dewdrops on the grassy lawn,
time takes the sunlight.
Circle not a trap
When the circle is complete
Start a new circle
When the circle is complete
Start a new circle
It's always a trap!
Mon Calimari shouts out
Bothans died in vain
Mon Calimari shouts out
Bothans died in vain
I hate all of you
Have to say it in haiku
Back to work, slackers
Have to say it in haiku
Back to work, slackers
My face was swollen
When I woke up this morning
The boss sent me home
(Went to the dentist
Had allergic reaction
To the numbing stuff)
Misunderstanding?
Departure not intended.
colon closed bracket
If this were Facebook,
I would grace this fine snippet
With a "Like." Or "Share."
Shall I compare these
To a sonnet? Nay. Brev'ty
Be the soul of wit.
This food tastes funny
Stomach growling like tiger
Toilet here I come
Stomach growling like tiger
Toilet here I come
