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The Great Chronological Run-Through

I would think that "transporter codes" simply means access codes to authorize transport into a shielded area. So that ships that do use transporters would need clearance to be permitted to beam into the capital, otherwise they'd either be blocked by shields or be swiftly intercepted by the authorities. So it doesn't necessarily prove that Vulcans use transporters themselves, just that they have security in place to deal with others' use of the technology.
 
I would think that "transporter codes" simply means access codes to authorize transport into a shielded area. So that ships that do use transporters would need clearance to be permitted to beam into the capital, otherwise they'd either be blocked by shields or be swiftly intercepted by the authorities. So it doesn't necessarily prove that Vulcans use transporters themselves, just that they have security in place to deal with others' use of the technology.

Fair enough, but since Archer and T'Pau didn't have Enterprise at hand, what transporter would they have been using but one of Vulcan's own?
 
"Observer Effect"

This is a much better take on alien possession than "The Crossing". Immediately it makes the premise interesting by presenting the aliens as non-hostile and even likeable, showing us a legitimate "outsider perspective" from explorers of a different kind (which is what the Wisps claimed to be, but none of us were fooled for a minute, I assume). It also presents the temporary theft of bodies as a natural and non-malicious means of research for them, akin to listening in on someone at the keyhole - not exactly upstanding, perhaps, but hardly questionable or disturbing. Clearly as far as Organians are concerned they're not doing anything wrong or causing undue harm, so who cares? It helps make them alien and so adds legitimacy to their considerations of physical beings' responses. The possession scenes are fun and it's a relief that we're clued in from the very start rather than wasting time on a pretend mystery.

While some of the pair's often simplistic moralizing could have been annoying, I think the episode largely (not entirely, but largely) avoids that pitfall due to the Organians being of such truly alien origin. What they're saying comes from a vantage point beyond the corporeal experience and therefore potentially completely removed from anything Human, so we can't really make conclusions as to how far they've had to come or how complex and counter-intuitive their perspectives on what they discuss are. They're enigmatic, but in a way that raises interesting questions rather than being annoying. Again, contrast with the Wisps, who drove me half to distraction as I tried to comprehend what the "rules" were for their existence and abilities.

I like the use of an alien biohazard as a plot device, to underscore the dark side of interstellar exploration, where each new world is a danger as well as a wonder. Here, the threat is alien in every sense, because the pathogen isn't native to the biosphere it's discovered in. Making this site of contamination the focal point for alien study (even if it's a rather unorthodox study) is even better. It all contributes to a sense of the galaxy as a lived-in place, with all sorts of fascinating, low-key scenarios to explore where worlds and species and phenomena have acted upon each other. When Humans head out into the galaxy, we want a sense that the galaxy's been existing as a dynamic place long before they arrive.

The downside - really the only downside to what is otherwise a memorable and well-conceived episode - is the slight (rising to uncomfortable near the end) Humans-Are-Special vibe. The idea of the Organian observers having a lesson imparted to them is fine, the idea that they're surprised by Archer's actions and responses is great, but the suggestion that Humans are somehow different from everybody else leaves a sour taste for me.

To be fair on this point, there is at times the suggestion that the mindset Archer and co demonstrate is not so unusual after all, or wouldn't be had other subjects gotten to this stage, only Reed-Organian won't see it (Witness "the Cardassians showed similar compassion for one another", which he dismisses simply because of the final decision to contain the infection by abandoning the sick crewmen). The point is made that very few of the observed species ever got to this point so logically they wouldn't have had the opportunity to demonstrate such selfless compassion. Room for protest regarding the conclusions is implicitly acknowledged, I suppose. The Organians are clearly not inclined to speculate on such things unless they actually see it unfold, but still...

Still...

You never encountered a race with both the medical technology to detect this thing and the natural compassion or reckless heroism to do as Archer did (or something equivalently eye-opening)? You never encountered Xyrillians or Axanar or Trill or Denobulans, all of whom are clearly strongly social, compassionate and scientifically inclined? Not Deltans or Risians or other cultures like these where easing of distress and emotional comfort of all description are intrinsic to social interaction? Not Andorians or Tellarites or other races like these who never let little things like pragmatism or "common sense" get in the way of their passion, including their passion for one another? What of the Vissians, who routinely have married couples serving aboard their ships? What of the Xindi-Insectoids who collectively chose to suffocate so their eggs would be safe in "Hatchery"?

I suppose this incident might truly be the perfect storm - compassionate culture, suitable medical knowhow, ship with resources and facilities good enough to attempt containment and cure - but wouldn't those factors then have come up in conversation? Okay, I doubt Reed-Organian would note them because he's rather welded to his existing conclusions - "all physical species are the same" - (then again, he didn't seem that bad - dogmatic and inflexible, yes, but not a truly closed-minded thinker), but Mayweather-Organian would stress that the comparisons were laid across too many of these varying factors to be truly fair, surely? A point he might succeed in convincing his companion on, since the uniformity of the test is seemingly important to Reed-Organian.

There's also the fact that the whole thing is undermined a little by the fact, actually a plot point at times, that Archer's doctor is not only non-Human, he's using non-Human medical equipment.

Hooray for Humans! (Though a Denobulan and a Vulcan do all the hard work...)

On a similar note, no-one even bothered placing a warning beacon before? No-one? Was Archer really the first person to order that? The Organians wouldn't have destroyed any beacons left there - that would be interfering, and they're not hypocrites from what we see. Indeed, Reed-Organian even complains that they can't continue with these studies now that there's a beacon.

There's also a possible conflict thematically with earlier episodes that cover the issue of responsibility for those you have the power to help but whom you find yourself in a position of detached superiority relative to. After all, what would the Valakians of "Dear Doctor" say about Archer's decision to withhold the full possible degree of help from them? Are not the Organians just doing what he did in that situation - basing the amount of interference and aid they're willing to give on a difficult but considered judgement of the appropriate degree of responsibility to another culture, and the probable developmental pattern and considered maturity of the subject population, no matter how subjective that might be? It's not quite the same, of course - I'm not suggesting a direct equivalence - but there are definitely sizable overlaps. I'm not even criticizing the possible (probable?) hypocrisy, because this sort of multi-tiered perspective and the difficulty in applying a unified standard is often very rewarding to consider, and understandable in a universe where the division between species and nations works on different levels (warp powers look on non-warp powers as "ascended" races look on warp powers). Plus the whole idea of the silicon contamination in the carbon biosphere serving as a focus for Organian testing is even suggestive of the whole "outside, alien contact (contamination?) offering opportunities for learning as well as danger". I don't care if there's an inconsistency or a note of hypocrisy, but without room to address it, it makes me ever so slightly uncomfortable.

Still, don't get me wrong - this was a great episode, it really was; I just think it needed to tone down the Humans-Are-Great vibe to be truly at the top of its game. Emphasise more the "Organians have lost sight of a few things" angle rather than the supposed "Humans are better" angle (though the Organians were never vilified, which is nice). Still, good show.

First Appearances of Things That Are Important:

Organians, although the fact that they're Organians doesn't mean anything; they could have been any non-corporeal race. We don't learn much about Organians, other than that they're a species who were once corporeal, are now incorporeal, and that they interpret the change as positive development. When we meet the Organian mainstream, in a hundred years' time, we'll discover that Reed-Organian is actually somewhat of an eccentric himself, actively studying other species rather than ignoring them completely. Which is interesting - and will, perhaps, help us put Mayweather-Organian in perspective. The other hippies look on him as a hippie.

Silicon-based life, if a virus-analogue counts as life, which is questionable.

The Cardassians, previously implied for those in the know due to the interstellar market for tojal, are named for the first time. They're nobody important... yet.

Next Time: "Babel One".
 
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I never thought about the implications of the human-exceptionalist angle. It just felt so familiarly Trekkish. This was a pretty good classic-Trek-style story.

One thing, though: The aliens really, really should not have been Organians. Gene Coon's script for "Errand of Mercy" stressed six ways from Sunday that the Organians were complete isolationists who found the presence of corporeal beings to be distressing and repugnant. This was done because episodic TV in the '60s was supposed to avoid continuity and Coon needed to pre-load the episode with an explanation for why the Organians would never intervene in Federation affairs again. So the idea of Organians traveling beyond their homeworld and actively studying corporeal beings -- even possessing their bodies -- is completely misunderstanding the Organians. It's taking their name and applying it to something totally different. (I tried to gloss this over in The Buried Age by referring to these Organians as a breakaway group that the mainstream Organians were scandalized by.)
 
I never thought about the implications of the human-exceptionalist angle. It just felt so familiarly Trekkish. This was a pretty good classic-Trek-style story.

Of course, to me, there isn't any sense of classic Trek as a benchmark, because I grew up with the spinoffs. ;) But it is a good episode, I agree, and I get what you mean by "familiarly Trekkish". Given how much time I spent on this one complaint in my post up there, it might look like my objection was a far bigger deal for me than it actually was. It was really just a minor point of discontent; the episode is a strong one, and enjoyable. I'm just nitpicking.

There are a few other examples of suggested Human-exceptionalism in season four (among them some of Archer's comments to Gral and Shran in "Babel One" and/or "United", though at least Gral holds his own in those scenes), but they're different in that the only people making such implications or assertions are themselves Human and are faced by equal amounts of posturing from the aliens. I mean, I certainly prefer by far a positive depiction of humanity to the tired old self-loathing that humans seem to go in for with depressing frequently (and to my confusion), I just don't like the idea of implicitly staining everyone else. In-universe, coming from Archer and co, I don't actually mind the season's occasional (always mild) Human posturing, because I think it makes some degree of sense. Now that Vulcan has retired from its role looking over Earth's shoulder, the Humans are making a big deal of standing on their own - plus they're still getting over the Xindi attack, so even if they don't turn into xenophobes harassing Denobulans in bars, there must be some fallout and some effect on their sense of identity. And the Andorians, Tellarites etc. do more than enough posturing of their own, so why not show you can hold your ground? So I'm fine with a little mild Human chest-thumping from the Humans themselves; it's just that this episode has millennia-old aliens apparently playing to the "humans are exceptional" idea. To some extent. Almost inadvertently, and in service to a good story, so again, this doesn't mean as much as a complaint as it might seem.

In my post I mentioned "Dear Doctor", which I thought actually played the "alien commentary on Human compassion" very well (to my mild relief and surprise), because in that case I truly did get a sense from Phlox's behaviour and commentary (in that episode and in others) of how Denobulans were different. It wasn't that Denobulans are somehow unfeeling or callous, and Humans certainly weren't suggested to be "better" than Denobulans - but the episode did, I think, show us that the two races express and apply their compassion differently, which legitimated the idea that Phlox would feel the need to comment on the forms of compassion he observed. In "Observer Effect", while the Organians are also not vilified even when Archer scolds them and are always portrayed as likeable, it seems to potentially imply that few other races in would show selfless compassion, which on the scale the Organians are functioning on is, I think, unfortunate.

(I have to finish by noting that I have a classic line from Farscape in my head now - "I'm not deficient! Humans are superior!!!")
 
This is one reason I love the opening scene of "The Forge" so much. The conversation between Forrest and Soval adds a lot of nuance to the question of human vs. nonhuman attributes. Soval speaks of the other races in terms of stereotyped traits, and Forrest resists that, insisting that you could find the whole range of attributes in all the different sapient species. And Soval admits that the real reason the Vulcans find humans so alarming... is because we remind them of themselves. Which neatly undercuts the conceit of humans having special qualities that Vulcans lack.

It's interesting, then, that both "The Forge" and "Observer Effect" were written by Judith & Garfield Reeves-Stevens. Odd that their first episode would resist human exceptionalism while their second would reinforce the notion.
 
Organians, although the fact that they're Organians doesn't mean anything; they could have been any non-corporeal race.

Which isn't wrong in and on itself. After all, you mentioned yourself in previous posts that at least some aliens-of-the-week could've been named after established species.

It's laudable the Reeves-Stevens thought of that in this case, although the culture of the ENT-Organians clashed with the TOS-Organians as explained by Christopher. Fortunately, his solution in TBA turned the clash into a facet that made the Organians less monolithic culturally.

In regards to the "Humans are special" sentiment, I believe it is in line with the depiction of Humans in ST. Humans are special (which doesn't imply they're superior).

Example: Humans become the backbone of an interstellar, multi-species federation. Without Humans, the UFP would not exist (DTI: Forgotten History).

Only a few other species made the same development, including the Manraloth (TNG/TLE: The Buried Age), the Colloqium of Progress (DTI: Watching the Clock), the Confederacy of the Worlds of the First Quadrant (VOY: Protectors), the Vostigye Union (MyrU: Places of Exile) and, potentially, the Markonians (VOY: "Brief Candle").

Out-of-universe, the Humans would be depicted as special also because they're the principal species of all series (except GKN/KE).
 
Organians, although the fact that they're Organians doesn't mean anything; they could have been any non-corporeal race.

Which isn't wrong in and on itself. After all, you mentioned yourself in previous posts that at least some aliens-of-the-week could've been named after established species.

Indeed. :) My comment quoted here was an observation, not a complaint. And I agree that giving an established race what has to then be interpreted as a dissenting cultural offshoot is always welcome (even if it's only accidental).

Humans become the backbone of an interstellar, multi-species federation. Without Humans, the UFP would not exist.

A Less Perfect Union possibly disagrees. ;) (I say possibly, because Archer still lay the groundwork).

While we're discussing this, though, I should note that one of the things I appreciate about Enterprise is how it offers a reasonable explanation for how Humans became so central to the Federation despite being relative newcomers. Turning their status as the "new kids" to an advantage by playing Humans as neutral brokers allowing for a shift in relations between the other races is an idea well-played, particularly because it's placed within the larger context of Humans trying to assert their independence from Vulcan, a theme/plot that I always thought was handled very well (and possibly the best part of the show). Humans had to genuinely find their place, and as I noted in my posts for the Vulcan trilogy, that involved learning some wisdom and humility, coming to respect the Vulcans, as much as it did giving the finger to the stuffy old Pointies. By the time "Demons" arrives, it makes complete sense that everyone's gathering on Earth for a conference. It makes the eventual role of Earth as the capital of the Federation seem a natural development rather than a statement of some kind. Humans achieved something extremely important and impressive, but not by being unique and special, simply by making the most of the position they found themselves in, applying themselves with noble intent and showing measured determination. :) Maybe someone else would have done it had someone else been the eager new player; what matters is that it happened to be Humans and they ended up making it work. That's how I see it, anyway.

That said, I don't actually object to Humans having a unique quality that leads to their prominence or importance to the galactic community, so long as it's well defined and truly shown as unique to them, rather than a celebration of traits that at least half the species could or should be demonstrating. If Humans are uniquely creative or resilient or something than that needs to come across. Like I said, I don't at all mind Phlox's musings on Human compassion in "Dear Doctor", because the episode, and the show as a whole, had given me a genuine sense of how Denobulans are different - and without suggesting that Humans are "better" than Denobulans or painting Phlox as somehow lacking in empathy and benevolence. I also suspect that any quality that makes a particular race exceptional is more likely to be a blend of many qualities that defies an easy analysis or depiction, which of course makes me harder to please here. ;)
 
Example: Humans become the backbone of an interstellar, multi-species federation. Without Humans, the UFP would not exist (DTI: Forgotten History).

Only a few other species made the same development, including the Manraloth (TNG/TLE: The Buried Age), the Colloqium of Progress (DTI: Watching the Clock), the Confederacy of the Worlds of the First Quadrant (VOY: Protectors), the Vostigye Union (MyrU: Places of Exile) and, potentially, the Markonians (VOY: "Brief Candle").

Don't forget the Vomnin Confederacy (TTN: Orion's Hounds) and the Regnancy of the Carnelian Throne (The Buried Age). And on a smaller scale, the Rigelians (ENT: Tower of Babel). Man, I like multispecies unions, don't I?

But I think they're more common than you suggest, and they don't all come from me or Kirsten. The Typhon Pact is an example; it may not be especially stable yet, but it is an attempt to achieve the same kind of thing as the Federation and those other unions. Diane Duane's books mentioned such unions as the Inshai Compact (Spock's World) and the Lalairu (as seen in Dark Mirror), although the latter was more a trading coalition than a federal state.
 
"Babel One"

Obviously, the point of this one is to get the Tellarites involved. The Humans, Vulcans and Andorians have been linked together for some time now, and the seeds of their future alliance are quite firmly planted by this point. That leaves one founding race of the Federation (as confirmed by Daniels in "Zero Hour"). Thus far, the Tellarites have been portrayed as a practical people whose expansion into space is that of the working man - they've been seen or mentioned as transport captains, traders, freight haulers, maintenance engineers and bounty hunters. While Humans are explorers, Vulcans were the stuffy interstellar police and Andorians were basically anti-Vulcan, the Tellarites are the businessmen/labour force of local space. It's not surprising then that they enter the main story due to a trade dispute.

With the Vulcans withdrawing from their role as the local superpower, it's perhaps inevitable that things would flare up elsewhere. Everyone's making the most of it now that local space doesn't dance to the High Command's tune. Presumably with the threat of Vulcan invasion reduced now that the High Command has been dissolved and (as revealed next episode), the Vulcan fleet is partially in mothballs, Andoria is turning its attention to other concerns, particularly its trade disputes with Tellar. Apparently they've lost ships along their borders in recent years; presumably they'd have made a fuss of this before now had they not been focused on the bigger threat right next door. They're not the only ones who are striding forth to get things done: Archer's conversation with T'Pol strongly implies that Earth is seizing opportunities to make a name for itself now that it's standing on its own two feet. He wonders if they didn't bite off more than they could chew; presumably Earth jumped at the chance to earn points in the arena of interstellar politics by performing a second service for Andoria after the Weytahn treaty, without necessarily grasping the difficulty of the task.

It's amusing that just as the Andorians were reluctant to trust Humans due to their ties with the Vulcans, so the Tellarites are now wary of trusting Humans due to their established relationship with the Andorians.

The reveal that the aggressing ship isn't occupied and is being piloted remotely from afar is a good one.

First Appearances of Things That Are Important

This one takes us into the next "mini-era" of the setting. If the initial era of Humans-as-Vulcan-Protectorate-taking-baby-steps-into-the-galaxy came to an end in "Kir'Shara", then after a little "Future potential of Humans" teaser last episode, we're now into the era of Earth as one of several more-or-less equal nations facing the threat of paranoid Romulans, and trying to form a functional interstellar coalition. As such, this is our introduction to characters who will remain important for a while, including Gral (Gora bim Gral), Valdore (Valdore i'Kaleh tr'Ihaimehn) and Vrax.

Also, while Tellarites have appeared before now and were mentioned many times prior to that, this is the real introduction, as it's the first to portray representatives of the Tellarite government. Skalaar the bounty hunter was just a guy who happened to be Tellarite, not representative of Tellarites as such, and while we did learn some interesting things about Tellarite culture in "Bounty", this is where they're truly established.

Other firsts include mention of the neutral planetoid "Babel", and a glimpse of Romulus. Also, The Eagle: the Romulan imperial insignia. The raptor motif is out in force.

Continuity

The Evil Vulcans, revealed at the end of "Kir'Shara", are back and linked to the mysterious Romulans encountered in "Minefield".

The T'Pol/Trip arc continues; T'Pol receives word that, as promised, Koss has annulled their marriage. There's a nice callback to "Shuttlepod One" when Trip notes that Malcolm has been attracted to T'Pol in the past. In other mating news, Talas has received a promotion to Shran's Lover. That said, she apparently insisted. Well it's your funeral, Talas. I mean that quite literally.
 
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"United"

This one is about Shran. That might seem obvious, but I think this is really the first episode that truly revolves around Shran rather than just featuring him. "Proving Ground" came close, but that was really revolving around the Archer/Shran relationship, while this is about the character himself. The heart of the episode is Shran's insistence on the Ushaan. He justifies it as the need to respect Andorian tradition, which is certainly convincing enough, but it's clear that what's really going on is that he's losing too much and needs to reassert his control. He's lost Kumari, most of his crew, and now Talas, and is thrust into a situation where he's leading Andorians into cooperating openly with Humans, Tellarites and Vulcans, with no time to deal with those losses. No surprise that he winds up pulling back in a self-imposed backlash and insisting, "this Andorian thing, me doing this Andorian thing about Talas, has to occupy everyone's attention or I'll shut down the alliance". I think he needs to prove to his own satisfaction that he hasn't lost his right to serve as a representative of Andoria's finest (he himself notes that he believes no soldier could follow him again did he not avenge his crew). Plus, letting Talas go unavenged, or simply letting her go, would be a step too far in accommodating aliens. I note that he seemingly forgets about Naarg once the dual is done - it wasn't really revenge that was the issue, it was the need to find some appropriately Andorian means to draw a respectful close under Talas so he can, in good conscience, move on with his life, and into Andor's political future. What he's really killing is the ghost. He's more committed to this alliance than Archer might think, I'm guessing. He also called Archer his friend, which was great.

Shran might seem very selfish in this one - risking the alliance and jeopardizing the collective response to the threat due to his own personal honour - but I actually think he was being quite selfless in his way. He was willing to work with Archer on this alliance, which includes the Tellarites, so long as he was able to satiate his conscience as an Andorian, a commander and a lover with one ceremonial act. Which may be one of the strengths of this sort of honour system - it causes terrible headaches, but in its way it banishes harmful emotional hang-ups far quicker and more permanently than the Vulcan way. You draw a definitive line under things.

When Archer decides to risk his life in the Ushaan dual, T'Pol tries to talk him out of it by suggesting that he might be needed to "summon the future". I had wondered, as Archer worked to coordinate Enterprise, Vulcans, Andorians and Tellarites, whether he remembered Daniels' announcement of the Federation founders. He was very busy and stressed at the time. However, a later conversation - also with T'Pol - proves that he definitely does remember, and is anticipating the potential for a full alliance evolving out of his work here. At least part of his mind is focused on that future "alliance of planets". Which is interesting, because it makes his comment that "if there's one thing I've learned...it's that the future isn't set" a little ironic. Or not? Maybe he's so bemused in these scenes because he thinks he is going to set up the precursor of the Federation but die now anyway - there's no reason he can't do both in one. Fulfilling his role in history but not as he was "originally" supposed to. I see the humour if so. I might like a novelization of this one, to see exactly what's going through Archer's mind here.

I'm surprised more people don't use drone ships for defence. I suppose they're vulnerable to having the control base destroyed (witness the Cardassian weapons platforms at Chin'toka two centuries from now) and have limited range in most situations. Cheaper than manned ships, though, and those moves are very impressive.

First Appearances of Things That Are Important:

Remans make their first appearance. Not piloting the telepresence ship, though. Odd that.

The Evil Vulcans refer to themselves as Romulan (their space is Romulan space) so there's no doubt anymore. The senate is mentioned for the first time, so we get some insight into their government.

The Rigelian Trade Commission is mentioned. This will be confirmed in the novels as the de facto governing body of the Rigel worlds.

Continuity

Columbia NX-02 is in drydock, and still hasn't launched. Engine trouble, so it apparently should have launched by now.
Admiral Gardner has indeed replaced Forrest as Archer's point of contact with Starfleet Command.

T'Pau (Minister T'Pau, she's called here) has been decommissioning much of the Vulcan fleet, hence why Vulcan can contribute less than expected to the alliance; T'Pol also notes that many active ships don't have full crews at present. Realistically, then, Vulcan is still occupied with the aftermath of its recent regime change and philosophical upheaval.

The Romulans note that Vulcans would recognise a modified warbird for what it was, our first indication that Vulcans and offshoot Vulcans have interacted in the past (post-Sundering, I mean, obviously), though it's again not clear how much the Vulcans know, or whether they've connected "Romulans" with The Sundered.

The Rigelians operate heavily armed scout ships, with crew complements of around 17.

Next Time: "The Aenar". I believe that's a sound made by Captain Picard at a strip club. No, that's Avery Bullock, my mistake.
 
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The Romulans note that Vulcans would recognise a modified warbird for what it was, our first indication that Vulcans and offshoot Vulcans have interacted in the past (post-Sundering, I mean, obviously), though it's again not clear how much the Vulcans know, or whether they've connected "Romulan" with The Sundered.

VGR: "Death Wish" referred to a century-long war between the Vulcans and the Romulans. Beneath the Raptor’s Wing alludes to a mentor of Soval’s recalling the closing phases of the war, suggesting it was maybe in the 20th century or thereabouts.
 
The Romulans note that Vulcans would recognise a modified warbird for what it was, our first indication that Vulcans and offshoot Vulcans have interacted in the past (post-Sundering, I mean, obviously), though it's again not clear how much the Vulcans know, or whether they've connected "Romulan" with The Sundered.

VGR: "Death Wish" referred to a century-long war between the Vulcans and the Romulans. Beneath the Raptor’s Wing alludes to a mentor of Soval’s recalling the closing phases of the war, suggesting it was maybe in the 20th century or thereabouts.

The Vulcans have had quite a few adventures over the centuries. A hundred year war with the Romulans, a war with the Klingons - in Kobayashi Maru, Soval will even note that Vulcans have encountered (and are warily respectful of) the Breen. I can't help but wonder if the slow ossification of the Vulcans into a strictly conservative culture uninterested in expanding their horizons owes something to the number of hostile encounters they faced. T'Pol told Archer in "Silent Enemy" that there were far fewer warp-capable species around when Vulcans first made warp flights, but in the many centuries since then it seems the Vulcans have met a fair few determined foes. Perhaps that helped transform them from explorers into defensive, militarized most-definitely-not-explorers. The same thing threatened to happen to Earth in the wake of the Xindi; the traumatized Archer made his case to Hernandez in "Home" that the Vulcans may have been right, though of course he regained much of his idealism as he recovered. And in "A Less Perfect Union" we'll see an Earth that does continue down that path.
 
The Romulans note that Vulcans would recognise a modified warbird for what it was, our first indication that Vulcans and offshoot Vulcans have interacted in the past (post-Sundering, I mean, obviously), though it's again not clear how much the Vulcans know, or whether they've connected "Romulan" with The Sundered.

VGR: "Death Wish" referred to a century-long war between the Vulcans and the Romulans. Beneath the Raptor’s Wing alludes to a mentor of Soval’s recalling the closing phases of the war, suggesting it was maybe in the 20th century or thereabouts.
In "Dead Stop", T'Pol says that the Romulans are rumored to be a fierce and territorial species and that the Vulcan High Command has never made direct contact with them. And Kobayashi Maru says that T'Pol is ex-V'Shar. Also according to Memory Beta (this part I can't verify), Kobayashi Maru established that V'Shar agent Sopek went undercover in the Romulan Star Empire and discovered that they were descendants of those who left Vulcan during the Sundering. How do we reconcile all these pieces of information?
 
The Romulans note that Vulcans would recognise a modified warbird for what it was, our first indication that Vulcans and offshoot Vulcans have interacted in the past (post-Sundering, I mean, obviously), though it's again not clear how much the Vulcans know, or whether they've connected "Romulan" with The Sundered.

VGR: "Death Wish" referred to a century-long war between the Vulcans and the Romulans. Beneath the Raptor’s Wing alludes to a mentor of Soval’s recalling the closing phases of the war, suggesting it was maybe in the 20th century or thereabouts.
In "Dead Stop", T'Pol says that the Romulans are rumored to be a fierce and territorial species and that the Vulcan High Command has never made direct contact with them. And Kobayashi Maru says that T'Pol is ex-V'Shar. Also according to Memory Beta (this part I can't verify), Kobayashi Maru established that V'Shar agent Sopek went undercover in the Romulan Star Empire and discovered that they were descendants of those who left Vulcan during the Sundering. How do we reconcile all these pieces of information?

I assume it was a case of "no direct contact" in the same way that Humans never make direct contact with Romulans during the Romulan War, and indeed won't do so for another century afterward. Waves of Romulan ships might battle Vulcan fleets or strike Vulcan outposts on and off for decades, with a wide swath of space becoming a no-safe-travel zone, without any formal contact. As to the truth of who the Romulans are, the question is probably, again, the same as it will be during the Earth-Romulan War; some people know, but it isn't passed around or made public? I'm sure I'll be able to get a clearer picture of what's going on regarding Vulcan knowledge when I get to the Romulan War books. (This stretch, which started after Last Full Measure and will end with Rosetta, is probably the longest I'll go in this run-through without actually reading any literature!)
 
I love this thread so far, but I did have a question. Since it's almost assured that you'll outpace the next RotF installments, and from your speed so far you'll probably end up outpacing at least one or two TOS novels before you finish the entire timeline: when a new work comes out after you've already passed that period, will you pause and jump back to it, or just continue on without it?
 
I love this thread so far, but I did have a question. Since it's almost assured that you'll outpace the next RotF installments, and from your speed so far you'll probably end up outpacing at least one or two TOS novels before you finish the entire timeline: when a new work comes out after you've already passed that period, will you pause and jump back to it, or just continue on without it?

I'll continue on, though I'll refer "back" to the newer works if anything in them becomes relevant to something later in the timeline. I definitely feel that it's a shame I'll miss the third Rise of the Federation. Then again, there should be time for the next Mack Bashir book (after Disavowed), Beyer Voyager book, Lang Data book, and McCormack Cardassian-book, shouldn't there? :)
 
In "Dead Stop", T'Pol says that the Romulans are rumored to be a fierce and territorial species and that the Vulcan High Command has never made direct contact with them. And Kobayashi Maru says that T'Pol is ex-V'Shar. Also according to Memory Beta (this part I can't verify), Kobayashi Maru established that V'Shar agent Sopek went undercover in the Romulan Star Empire and discovered that they were descendants of those who left Vulcan during the Sundering. How do we reconcile all these pieces of information?

It was "The Seventh" that established T'Pol's time with the Vulcan Security Directorate -- and it established that she left the agency after her very first mission. So she wouldn't be privy to all their secrets.
 
"The Aenar"

This one is in many ways an obvious repeat of "The Forge". Once again, we have Captain Archer travelling down to the harsh and dangerous surface of an allied world in the company of his closest friend from the native race. The two of them enter a region where they're unable to communicate with Enterprise, braving natural hazards (this time ice bores rather than sehlats, gallicite deposits or sand fires) in order to find a reclusive group connected to recent attacks, but who are actually pacifists. I assume the mirroring is largely deliberate (or at least I think it's excusable), because Shran draws attention to the simultaneous contrast and similarities between the Vulcans and the Andorians - claiming that it's the ice, not the desert, that teaches one strength and endurance. The struggle against a harsh environment has shaped both of these peoples. It's ironic, perhaps, that the passionate, fiery race are native to the frozen world and the cool, stoic race hail from the volcanic desert. The Andorian antennae make sense if they spend a lot of time underground and/or in the shadow of a host planet; aids to balance and complex non-visual sensory capacity (with the ability to be focused both individually or together for triangulation, at that) are presumably useful. On that note, we might assume that the Aenar represent an adaptation to the extreme northern polar regions, a more specialized Andorian branch who have become so familiar with subterranean living that they've lost their eyesight entirely and developed their other senses to the degree that the electrical/magnetic/gravitational sensory ability of the antennae has been supplemented with telepathy and great sensitivity to one another's nervous systems. The skin pigment, or lack of, is presumably either camouflage or the reduced need or point of producing that vibrant blue in the absence of eyesight. Why are Andorians blue? It seems, we can speculate now, to be a visual cue, probably requiring a lot on the part of the body to produce and maintain, if it's unceremoniously lost when the eyesight goes. Is blue a warning colouration among Andorian life, as red, yellow and black are in Terran life?

As someone who has always been interested in dinosaurs, I'm thinking of the recent revelations regarding Spinosaurus; how it was far more specialized to an aquatic lifestyle than earlier Spinosaurids, and that its line seems to have died out with the most specialized form. Aenar seem to be a specialized-for-subterranean-living line of Andorian, which suggests, perhaps, that the planet has been cooling over the course of the species' evolution and that the subterranean lifestyle is relatively new, or has become more important over time?

As with Andoria and Vulcan themselves, there are some interesting distinctions between this one and "The Forge" alongside the similarities; this time, the insular pacifists are presented as the misguided ones rather than the favoured group.

Besides the Andorians and their Aenar offshoot, the Romulans also receive some depth this time round, mostly in the scene in which Admiral Valdore reveals his backstory. The Romulans define themselves as conquerors, as soldiers seeking always to expand their empire, and questioning this aspect of their cultural identity is enough to risk dismissal from the government. We also get a good sense of how reputation and social standing are determined in the Star Empire, and how essential they are to Romulan identity and esteem, both through Valdore's "born-again" commitment to expansion and Vrax's concern about the mission's failure and its impact on his reputation and security. Valdore's treatment also recalls the way in which the Vulcan High Command came to treat dissenters or objectors; we can see that Vulcan was indeed being transformed into a second Romulus.

First Appearances of Things That Are Important:

Our first visit to Andoria/Andor. Due to the need to reconcile the TV depiction with the books' version, the planet will change somewhat over the next few centuries, but in a way that makes sense. Andorians are already known for their terraforming capabilities (they made the D-class world Weytahn habitable), and the desire to increase their agricultural yield will see them warm the planet artificially in the coming century ("The Chimes At Midnight"), leaving it still icy but more hospitable (and prone to sudden floods in some regions). Storms and ionization will still be very common ("Paradigm").

This one introduces the Aenar, obviously (Gareb's brief reveal last episode doesn't really count), and Jhamel in particular. The Aenar will appear again, mostly in the context of Shran's involvement with them, which will in part lure them out of their isolation and get them at least superficially involved with the rest of Andoria and from there with the early Federation. They'll never recover their numbers, though, and by the 24th Century they'll be extinct.

Next Time: "Affliction".
 
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The big question about the Aenar is, if they're all blind and they rarely entertain visitors, how come their cities have lights?
 
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