Interesting criticism all around.
In total agreement that the writing and pacing was a little clunky at times. Some of the one liners left me feeling a little uneasy but this show is attempting to break new ground - the first canon non-Skywalker story as it were. My first and foremost concern is still Ezra (watched Sparks four times now) and that maybe it wasn't such a good idea to use someone so boring as a lead. I'm sure they did months in not years of focus testing for him. White male - teenager. Again.
Zeb or Sabine as the lead would have been outstanding. I would love the idea of an alien lead, but maybe that was too risky for Disney?
Thinking back to other series' first episode efforts, overall I think this was a strong start in that: they needed 44 mins to introduce all the leads, establish the timeline, establish the motivation for all the characters, establish two locations which have never been seen on screen, introduce the new ship and leave us wanting more. Oh, and introduce two new villains. Was that accomplished in this two parter?
I'd read reviews for two other episodes this season, the next one (Droids in Distress) and episode 5 I believe (Rise of the Old Masters) and those seemed to provide a much more organic story and considerably more impact each. I think this entire season will cover a lot of ground and so far I'm really encouraged.
Wasn't there near universal repulsion from The Clone Wars series' theatrical premiere in popular opinion, which I'd maintained for years would have been better suited to the following Grevious arc with The Manevolence. It's didn't really introduce Ahsoka but it was much more entertaining to watch. I feel that theatrical feature actually did more harm than good to TCW.
If the dialog between Kanan and Hera improves and Ezra can drop his "street rat" flavor for something more heroic we will be halfway there.
PS. Ezra tricks some troopers by telling them that The Emperor is 'his uncle' to escape detention. I suddenly wondered if at this point in the Star Wars timeline, Vader may not even be known to the general population. If only Obi Wan knows that Vader used to be Anakin Skywalker, wouldn't Vader have a strategic advantage operating in the dark as an absolute unknown? I'm asking because I'm wondering if the showrunners have a plan to deploy Vader as an unknown. Think about this - he's been spending the last 15 years hunting down the Jedi, and up until now there hasn't really had a reason to throw his weight around, show up in an ATAT and stomp people's homes into dust. Anyway - just a thought. And if anyone knows for certain that Vader is a household name in this time please let us know. I think it makes more sense to use Vader in this show than The Emperor anyway. He was in TCW continuously (albeit mostly as Palpy).
I'm hoping to hear something about Kanan escaping the temple when Anakin massacred all the kids, though it's more likely he was offworld at the time there is a potential revenge connection to Vader it may foster in Kanan.