Well, as the lone person who gave this a 1, I would like to change my vote. Mods, Can I change my vote?
It was a lot better the second time around, but I think I was in the right mood and watched it based on it's own merits rather than preconceived notions. I still wish there was a connection to Discovery in this short, maybe a simple sentence, or a picture of the crew or something. My feeling last night and now have not changed in that this could have taken place anywhere and anytime. It only takes place on Discovery because that's in vogue at the moment. I don't even need to know how the Ship has survived in tact for that long, just some kind of connection to the series, even if it was small, and I would have been happy.
As it was, it was a beautiful little story that was like the movie Her meeting the movie Wall*E. Also, and I think this would have brought it up to a higher score for me, instead of Betty Boop, how about an episode from the Star Trek franchise, say maybe Data's Day or something like that. That's your connection to Star Trek right there.
Anyway, on a second viewing I would probably give this a 7. In terms of the short story experience, this one flowed better than Runaway did, as in that one I felt the editing jumped around a little too much. This one felt smooth and took better advantage of the short format. Still, one connection either to the series or the franchise as a whole and I would have liked it better.
Again Mods, if I can change my vote, I would like to. I know in some polls on Xenforo you can, and I wish in these polls you can as well. That's the power of rewatching something. It's better mood, better frame of mind, and you have the benefit of hindsight.