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STAR TREK: KHITOMER

Apologies, I've been very busy and somehow missed a chapter. But I got to read two in a row, which was very nice. Very nice indeed, by the way, as this series just gets better and better, well done! Okay, so many things worth commenting on, but let me just mention Neema, wow, I like her alot, but then I've always had a thing for Daxes. Well, the females, anyway. And Ripa's dream (vision?), lol, nice touch, you just couldn't resist, now could you. :D

"OK, note to myself: We never name a ship 'Chameleon' again." :lol:

Now, as for the Chameleon, 2.797 billion light years? Holy crap!
 
Don't apologize, ET. It's quite normal. Besides, it was a 2-parter anyway.

Yeah, I like Neema. She has a very interesting role as the series progresses, and you have a clue about that. Ripa's dream IS a vision, as that will be established later, but maybe not the kind of vision she would have hoped for ... And the nudity was a special request. :D

Yes, the Chameleon is a little far, but I guess it will come back a little faster than 21775 years 127 days 9 hours and 24 minutes ... approximately.
 
Probably under 20000 ...

I'll need to make a list of the plotlines, I'm afraid I have a bit many.

Which does not mean that I am prepared to end any of them, on the contrary ... :evil:
 
Oh they will evolve, rest assured. I just don't want to forget any ... like:

• Why did the Kai want to talk to Sabrina?
• Who sent the vision to Ripa and why?
• Where is Kara Grem? Did she take the Orb of the Emissary? Why?

Are those three plotlines related or completely independent?
Are they important?
 
Hmmm ... The story is now taking a completely unexpected turn. I really had no idea it would do that.

I may need a little longer to make it come out though.
 
At last.

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

June 24, 2400

"Captain ... Sir ... something wrong? Captain! Benjamin!"

"Major?"

"Are you all right?"

"I was there."

"Sir?"

"B'hala. It was the eve of the Peldor Festival. I could hear them ringing the temple chimes."

"You were dreaming."

"No, I was there. I could smell the burning bateret leaves, taste the incense on the wind. I was standing in front of the Obelisk. And as I looked up, for a moment, I understood it all. B'hala ... the Orbs ... the Occupation ... the discovery of the Wormhole ... the coming war with the Dominion."

"You could see the future as well as the past?"

"And for one moment, I could see the pattern that held it all together."

"You had a pagh'tem'far — a sacred vision."

"I don't know what I had. But it felt... wonderful."

"The Prophets chose well when they made you their Emissary. So how does it all fit together?"

"I wish I knew. Someone woke me up."


***

Sabrina woke up in the middle of the night, wearing only her pajama pants. That's how she slept when Annie wasn't there, and her friend was on the Bridge at the time.

Only this wasn't the Captain's quarters.

Her bed had been carried in some kind of vast, very vast grass field with a few trees here and there. The grass was emerald green, the sky was so blue, almost azurite blue. The weather was reasonably warm, enough for her naked torso anyway, but the grass was cold and moist. "Probably the morning dew", she thought.

And then she thought again.

"Why am I feeling the grass?"

But before she could start thinking about it, she noticed something on her left. She walked to it. There, under the tree, was a table. On the table, a chess set. Not the 3D version popular since the late 22nd century, no, the old, classic version, which was played on an 8 by 8 two-dimensional chessboard. It was made of wood, and so were the pieces, of the classical Staunton design. The game had not started yet.

Sabrina knew how to play that game. She had been initiated by Boothby, who had "adopted" the lonely, shy little girl at her arrival to Starfleet Academy. Boothby had been her first father figure, until she had met Wilkins. In fact …

Yes! It was Boothby's set! She recognized the little scratch in the corner, not on the surface itself, but on the side. Boothby had told her that it had happened when he had thrown it at Picard's head, after he had won a game against him — the only game Boothby had ever lost during his tenure at Starfleet Academy.

Sabrina was so lost in her thoughts that she had already forgotten the cold of the grass under her bare feet, and had not noticed the characters coming to the table.

The human was not hard to identify. Black skin, bald as an eagle, goatee, Starfleet Captain's uniform, it could only be …

"Captain Sisko?"

The man looked at her, smiled and sat down on the white side.

Now the second guy was quite different. For one thing, he was not human but Cardassian. He wore the standard military uniform, and his posture betrayed a high ranking officer. He looked briefly at Sabrina and just said:

"The Sisko is of Bajor."

"Who are you?" Sabrina asked him.

"The Sisko is of Bajor."

"Yeah, I know Captain Sisko's family history, but …"

"The Sisko is of Bajor."

As the Cardassian said this, Sabrina felt herself tied by her wrists and suspended to a horizontal beam floating in the air. She was taken away from the table yet, strangely, she still could look at it very closely, as if her eyes were at the table.

Then the scenery changed, as all now were in some kind of large jail cell. Around the walls were suspended all kinds of tools, leather and metal alike. In the corner was someone, whom Sabrina couldn't identify, for he was wearing some kind of monk outfit, with a large hood covering his face.

The Cardassian, who was playing with the black pieces, moved first.

"You may not do that, Dukat."

As Sisko was saying that, Sabrina felt the multiple bites of a cat o' nine tails tearing her back. But she didn't scream. Somehow she couldn't. Yet the pain was excruciating.

The Cardassian Sisko had called Dukat had taken back his pawn. But he was not happy. He turned to Sabrina, who was trying to stay calm, and repeated:

"The Sisko is of Bajor."

Sabrina looked again, and lo and behold, Sisko had played his first move, a very classical Pawn to King 4. Then he looked at Sabrina and smiled. She tried to talk, but no sound came out of her throat.

Dukat played the Queen Pawn. But instead of simply moving it forward one or two squares, he moved it two squares forward and one square in diagonal, taking Sisko's pawn. Immediately the whip burned Sabrina's from the side of her breast, all around across her chest. She tried to scream, but the intense burn stopped her breath.

Sisko moved his Queen Pawn alongside Dukat's. As he let it go, the black pawn turned white. Again Sisko smiled at Sabrina.

"Those are very weak pieces", he told her.

Then Sisko stood up and came to Sabrina, who was trying to understand what was happening to her. He showed her another chess piece, unlike any she had ever seen. It looked like an hourglass, but clearly it wasn't one, as there was no sand and it was so small.

Sabrina was about to guess what it represented when Sisko added:

"You are of Bajor."

At that moment, Dukat jumped out of his seat, pushed Sisko apart and, as the Starfleet Captain fell down, he seized the cat o' nine tails and started furiously beating Sabrina's chest and belly with it. Again the poor girl tried to scream but couldn't, even as the whip ploughed through her flesh, burning every of her nerve endings as harshly and painfully as molten lava.

And then the scenery changed again.

***

The Mogai had just emerged from the Great Cordon. But something was not right. Now Teroth was taking a good look at T'Shiya, who was looking at the star charts, trying to find out the answer to the question her captain had asked here three hours earlier.

Teroth was ordinarily a very patient woman, but she liked to torture her so young Science Officer. So she was there, breathing in her neck, trying to make her uneasy. Was it possible to make a Vulcan feel uneasy?

"So, Lieutenant, have your cogitations produced any ray of light on our current situation?"

"No, Captain."

"So you cannot explain what happened?"

"No, Captain."

"In other words, you do not know? Please say it."

The little lieutenant lowered her head.

"I do not know what happened, I do not know what is in front of us or why it has that appearance, and I do not know where we are, Captain."

Teroth smiled.

"I did not think that I would live old enough to hear a Vulcan say that. Relax, Lieutenant, obviously this is a situation that requires more than logic. So your Romulan cousins will help you."

"Th … Thank you, Sir."

"Please recapitulate what you know."

"The space in which we are now seems to bathe in some conditions giving it the strange aspect we see in the viewer. As if the light was polarized and inverted. We cannot form a warp field. Our sensors catch nothing. Finally, we cannot find the thermobaric barrier that we just finished crossing."

"And which took us four days to come out of."

"Yes, Captain."

"What is the logical conclusion then, Lieutenant?"

"When you have eliminated all which is impossible, then whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. That is what Surak teaches us."

"And what remains?"

"We started on one side of the Great Cordon, but arrived where the other side should be and did not find it. Therefore, either we have been diverted somewhere else during the crossing or …"

"Or?"

"The Great Cordon has only one side or …"

"Or?"

"We are still in it."
 
Oh yeah, Khitomer lives! And just as a new turn has started in Chapter 17, another one is coming in Chapter 18, as a very old friend will now visit the Samurai ...
 
47, you must try to explain what's happening with the Borg? This is a Borg story, so you can't ignore them.
 
Borg story? Whoever said this was a Borg story? The Borg are there, yes, but they are in no way the main protagonists of the story. For now, they are more like the wild card. The main struggle is between what's left of the Federation, the Klingons and the Romulans on one side, and the Dominion-Reman Alliance on the other.

But you are right, things are happening to the Borg ... Too bad the crew of the Mogai is so hellbent on fulfilling their mission of contacting the Qalans, for they could tell us volumes.

Just as a reminder, the original announcement:

Khitomer …






A name synonym with peace and conciliation …






Wolf 359 …






A name synonym with one of the most brutal defeats in the history of the Federation …






Cardassia — gone.






Romulus — gone.






Earth — gone.






Surrounded by two most implacable enemies, infiltrated by nefarious agents of a mysterious third power …






The future of the Federation is resting on the frail shoulders of a few children, unaware of the critical role they will play and of the sacrifices they will have to agree to …






Star Trek: Khitomer






Soon on a monitor in your neighborhood.
 
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN

June 24, 2400

The old man was NOT happy.

He was being escorted by a young, very young cadet. The girl couldn't be more than seventeen, and she was so small, so fragile-looking. Yet she was carrying his heavy bags like they were empty, and walking just fast enough to let him walk at his own rhythm.

"Hmm! Those new ships, they have no soul … Mine still has blood, guts and soul, it's alive, it speaks to me. This one is just a machine. It has no life. How can you live in this heap of crap?"

"Sir, the Samurai is a warship, we're at war with the Borg and the Dominion, we cannot afford to build ships like before …"

"Don't call me 'Sir', I work for a living. Well, I worked, now I'm dying because of those damn tin cans … What are they waiting to go back to Earth and rebuild it?"

"We lost almost all our ships in the war, Sir … I mean …"

"Aaaaah, forget it. At 136, I can't afford the time to fight. Call me however you want, I'll call you young lady."

Now the "young lady" was embarrassed. She couldn't find in herself to call the old man just by his name, and yet that was clearly what he wanted. She decided to adjust her way of addressing him anyway.

"Where are you bringing me? Is the Bridge that way?"

"No S… I'm bringing you to your quarters."

"That can wait. I want to see him now."

"I'm sure the Admiral will come to your quarters as soon as …"

The old man looked at his young escort and raised an eyebrow.

"I want to see him now."

The cadet froze and answered almost sheepishly.

"Yes, Sir. This way, please."

***

Sabrina was still hanging to the floating beam, her blood was still running from the numerous open wounds the cat o' nine tails had ploughed in her naked flesh, and still she couldn't utter a sound.

It looked like some kind of city. No one was in sight, not even Sisko and Dukat. It was magnificent, clearly Bajoran in style. The temperature was comfortably warm, even if it didn't mean much for Sabrina, tortured by her wounds remaining wide open due to the weight of her own body.

The beam was moving around, and stopped in front of a bantaca spire. Sabrina looked at it, but her Bajoran was limited to a few words. As she was looking, she didn't notice the young woman coming to her. It was … she was dressed as a Vedek … no, she was … she was Kai Onara!

"Welcome to B'hala, my child", she simply said with a smile.

Again Sabrina tried to answer, again she couldn't utter a sound.

"You are suffering a great pain, my child. It could not be avoided. You need to understand."

The beam turned around. Sabrina now had her back facing the spire. The Kai came around and faced her.

"Look at the horizon, my child. The sandstorm is coming, and with it the locusts. You must endure it alone, for alone you are now."

The Kai simply disappeared, as the extraordinarily strong, hot, dry winds brought the horror of the sandstorm, accompanied by extremely strong thunder and lightning, and the torture of locusts on Sabrina, whose flesh and bleeding wounds were still exposed. The sand incrusted itself deeply in the lacerations ravaging her flesh, hitting her face, her feet, tearing her pants off and incrusting her legs like thousands of whips lashing her at the same time. And then came the locusts, which hit her even harder, like being caned. It lasted several piercing, agonizing minutes, and then …

The scenery changed again.

***

The old, angry man finally reached the Bridge.

"Mister Wilkins!"

Not just Wilkins, but everyone, at the exception of Tomalak and Karov, winced at the sound, and quickly turned around toward the intruder.

"You?"

"Ha! You still remember me, I see! Well, Mister Wilkins, what have you done with my little girl?"

"I … I beg your pardon?"

"You know what I mean!"

Wilkins wasn't sure, but he had suspicions.

"Maybe we could talk in private?"

"Hmm! Maybe that would be better. Hi, B'Elanna!"

B'Elanna smiled at him.

"Hi, Boothby!"

"I won't be long. We need to talk."

The old man followed Wilkins to his Ready Room. He rejected the seat the Admiral was offering him.

"I may be old, I'm not dying yet. What happened to the Chameleon, Mister Wilkins?"

"Is that what this is all about?"

***

The young girl was watching the old man, in awe. The old man had noticed and that made him smile.

"Do you know what I am doing?"

"Replanting the flowerbed, Sir. I guess some people are not very careful for the beauties of nature."

She fell on her knees and started helping the old man.

"You know what to do?"

"Surely I am not the expert you seem to be, Sir, but I can make the holes and care for the flowers on a basic level."

"Hmm. Call me Boothby."

The girl looked up and smiled at him.

"Call me Sabrina."


***

"You bet, Mister Wilkins! That, and other things which are all a symptom of what is going wrong right now!"

"What? Have you heard? There's a war around here. People have been lost, people will be lost."

"Beginning with you, I'm afraid."

"Possibly."

"Not possibly, it's already done. I don't recognize the cadet I met in — what? 2368?"

"Yes."

"You were yourself then, Mister Wilkins. Or have you forgotten what you learned at Starfleet Academy?"

"I have not."

"Where is the man of heart, the man of action who graduated third of his promotion, nominated and elected by his peers as 'most likely to become the James T. Kirk of the 24th century'?"

"I was young then."

"You're still young, boy! I'm three times your age, and I feel more like Kirk than you do! What are you doing here? Why are you not looking for that girl?"

"There's a war here! I have responsibilities!"

"You must get her back, Sir! You must and you will!"

"Who will lead the war?"

"The war? What war? Are you seeing an enemy fleet somewhere? They say the tin cans are back wherever they came from, and the lizards are nowhere to be seen! Where is your war?"

"But …"

"I hear only the Klingons have a fleet now, and your engineers are busy sharing technology with them. Is there anything else you have to be there for?"

"If they come back …"

"If they come back, your little ships will join the Klingon fleet and help them fight the enemy. Klingons do have Admirals, don't they?"

"Yes, of course. But I can't take one of my ships out of the fight to …"

"You won't have to. You can have mine."

"Yours?"

"The one I brought from the moth balls and had retrofitted to current specs by your future engineers. She's a ship with a soul, Mister Wilkins, an old soul! She'll bring you closer to your true self than you have ever been!"

***

Sabrina was exhausted. She had lost lots of blood, and her pale milk chocolate skin was now all incrusted with sand pellets, as the gale of the sandstorm and the beating of the locusts had opened new wounds all around her legs, chest, belly, sides and face. Her body was now covered only by pajama pants so shredded that they barely amounted to a loincloth.

She knew that place. She had seen it in countless simulations, she had crossed it a few times before the Dominion invasion. It was the Wormhole. It was … so cold. She was out in the vacuum of space, yet she could breathe, and she felt no pressure which would make her implode anytime soon. But it was soooo cold, she didn't dare open her mouth, and she breathed cautiously.

Coming to her was … Sisko again?

"I threw him out", he just said.
 
coolness due to baby havent had time to read it till now. boothby has a ship? facinating... what class was it before it was refit?
 
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