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Star Trek 2009 Line by Line 3.0

Hannity: All other ships are out of warp Sir, and have arrived at Vulcan, but we seemed to have lost all contact.
 
Sulu: Arrival at Vulcan in 5 seconds. 4......3......2.....

Enterprise comes out of warp in large debris field
 
Pike: All stations! Engineer Olson, report. (some crazy shots of the debris and Enterprise)..... Full reverse, come about 90 degrees...drop us down underneath them Sulu.
 
Port nacelle grazes a large piece of saucer section debris.

On the Narada...

Romulan: Sir, there's another Federation Ship!
 
Cooleddie jumped the gun! We missed a huge chunk out! Getting back on track...

Nero: Destroy it too.

(upon a quick glance i thought you wrote a gazelle grazes on a large...)

British Thug Romulan: Fire torpedoes!

(Enterprise)

Spock: Captain, they're locking torpedoes!

Pike: Divert auxiliary power from port nacelles to forward shields!

(Enterprise is hit. Half of sickbay is blown up.)

Pike: Sulu, damage report!

Sulu: Shields at 32%. Their weapons are powerful - we can't take another hit like that!

Pike: Get me Starfleet command.

Spock: Captain, the Romulan ship has lowered some kind of high-energy pulse device into the Vulcan atmosphere. It's signal appears to be blocking all communications and transporter abilities.

Pike: All power to forward shields, prepare to fire all weapons!

(shots of crew loading weapons)

(Narada)

Romulan: Sir, there's another Federation ship!

Nero: Destroy it too!

(I really hope I haven't overdone it!)
 
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You almost got it.

Cooleddie jumped the gun! We missed a huge chunk out! Getting back on track...

Nero: Destroy it too.

(upon a quick glance i thought you wrote a gazelle grazes on a large...)

British Thug Romulan: Fire torpedoes!

(Enterprise)

Spock: Captain, they're locking torpedoes!

Pike: Divert auxiliary power from port nacelles to forward shields!

(Enterprise is hit. Half of sickbay is blown up.)

Pike: Sulu, damage report!

Sulu: Shields at 32%. Their weapons are powerful - we can't take another hit like that!

Pike: Get me Starfleet command.

Spock: Captain, the Romulan ship has lowered some kind of high-energy pulse device into the Vulcan atmosphere. It's signal appears to be blocking all communications and transporter abilities.

Pike: All power to forward shields, prepare to fire all weapons!

(shots of crew loading weapons)

(Narada)

Romulan: Weapons Ready.

NERO: WAIT!!!!!!!!

The hull!!! Magnify!!!

Romulan: Yes Sir.
 
Pike: You've declared war against the Federation, withdraw and i'll agree to arrange a conference with Romulan leadership in a neutral location.
 
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