Crossroad by Barbara Hambly
This is a pretty good TOS novel. A little more grim than your typical TOS episode and much much bloodier in some scenes.
Positives:
- The possible future of the Federation was terrifying. What little we got to hear about it was very intriguing, Much more so than many of the Mirror Universe episodes.
- We get to see a lot more of Nurse Chapel than we usually do.
- The scenes featuring the Lovecraftian creature known as the yagghorth are very well done. Lots of suspense when Spock is being stalked.
Negatives:
- The villain of the story, Domina McKennon, wasn't as well developed as I would have liked. I would liked to have seen more scenes with her giving her side of the story. It would have fleshed out the character and created more of a "who can we trust?" mystery. Instead it's blatantly obvious that she is evil right off the bat.
- Occasionally my attention wandered in the second half of the story and I would have to go back and read a paragraph again. I didn't feel bored, but I kept losing the thread of the story. As a consequence the ending, while satisfactory, wasn't as thrilling as I'd hoped. Maybe that's my fault. Maybe it's the authors.
Overall, it was a much better than average numbered novel, imo. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more of the 26th century adventures of Arios and his crew and their rebellion against the Consilium.
Edited to comment on a couple of lines that I liked. The first one I find amusing because it foreshadows the last episode of Enterprise by 10 years:
"Mind you," she added roguishly, ... "some of the historicals, and the views of far-flung planets, get a little...less accurate. There's even a holo adventure which takes place on the original Enterprise. I'd be curious to see how closely it matches..."
^Trip Lives!
The paragraph below caught my eye because of the author's unexpected Raymond Chandler-esque use of simile:
He took a deep breath. Like taking the first step with a gut wound. Like saying the first words to a woman after finding the tracks of the other man. "So the rebellion is centered in the Fleet?"
^ If we ever get a Dixon Hill novel, I think we know who needs to write it. Since the author clearly loves H.P. Lovecraft it would probably turn out like a Holodeck version of the old HBO movie Cast a Deadly Spell.