Noel Clarke's character??No, I'd agree the story was the big problem with STID.
BTW, it occurred to me recently, did they make the "suicide bomber" near the beginning mid-Asian looking to compensate for Khan not looking Indian at all?
I don't think so
Yeah, no. Noel Clarke's character is seems to be more of a sympathetic character, to try and show how far Khan is willing to push people, and the leverage that can be used to motivate someone to do something terrible.
Personally, I don't think the problem is with the story, so much as the execution of it. The fact that Khan had to be shoehorned in as the villain was not the best choice, despite Cumberbatch's excellent performance. It would have resonated so much more to have Khan be the inspiration to create Harrison as the perfect soldier, only for that soldier to reject its genetic engineering and become a maniacal dictator.
The story could have been better, but I certainly don't hold it out as the worse part.