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Shards and Shadows review thread (SPOILERS)

My reviews of each story and their ratings:

Nobunaga- An interesting way of telling the story. It certainly left some lingering questions, considering the fact that this story begins almost a decade after the end of the previous MU ENT story that came out in 2007. Overall I liked it, even if it was very vague about the actual truth, and how much Tucker was hallucinating. Obviously the end cleared most of it up, but all I can really assume (especially from what we know happens later) is that Archer is defeated in his attempt to destroy the Empire, probably from Tucker giving up the prefix code sometime after this story ends.

Grade: B-

Ill Winds: I am going to say right now that I have never seen the TAS episode that features Robert April. I don't know if any characters other than him and his wife from this story were involved previously. I certainly didn't recognize any others besides April. I thought the story was pretty good, not particularly amazing, but good enough. Part of the problem for me is that I didn't really know any of these characters, whereas in all of the other stories I do. Therefore, it is hard to care about most of them, even when the one captain dies at the beginning. I am also assuming that the weapon the Klingons were testing was something very similar to the Genesis Device? It seemed somewhat like it.

Grade: C

The Greater Good: I thought this was a tightly packed and interesting look at one of the Mirror Universe major characters who has not been covered as much (Kirk). We also see, for I believe the first time, Mirror Pike. I liked the use of the connection of 'The Managerie/The Cage' from TOS to this MU story. I thought it was nice to see where the name of the 'Tantalus Device' came from, since it was never explained in 'Mirror, Mirror'. However, I should have known that the Tantalus colony was somehow involved. This story gives some good insights into the ruthlessness of Kirk, such as the mention of his deliberately sending the USS Farragut into the vampire
cloud. It also didn't surprise me that unlike Pike, Kirk turned the ship around and blew away the Talosians.

Grade: A

The Black Flag: This has to be my favorite of this collection so far. The first 'Vanguard' MU story works even better than the previous TOS MU story, and manages to make a LOT of references to the series as it has played out so far. It was funny to see Reyes and Ganz practically best friends, when in the normal universe they are on opposite sides of the law. Rana Desai was about as opposite as you can get from her standard universe counterpart. I liked seeing the crew of the Endeavour back to play a major role in the story. I wasn't especially surprised to see T'Prynn play the key role in the story, as she seemed to have her hands in everything in BOTH universes. I am surprised that the Tholians would believe the word of an Imperial and actually show up to stop the Shedai creature after it consumes Vanguard. Considering how ruthless the Empire has been
to the Tholians in the past (see: 'In a Mirror, Darkly I+II'), it seems somewhat unlikely. Well done.

Grade: A++

The Traitor: I wasn't all that impressed with this one. It actually does not focus on the MU Stargazer crew as much as I thought it would. It mostly revolves around MU Guinan and MU Picard (or so we think). I thought that the story didn't flow that well, and was overly confusing and unclear. I also didn't get the troubled relationship in the MU between Guinan and Picard, and I have read all of the MU books up to this point. This comes off as a missed opportunity overall. Plus, two DIFFERENT species of shapeshifting aliens show up to make things even weirder.

Grade: C

Sacred Chalice: An improvement over the last story. However, there are MANY unexplained things, such as how the Trois' descendants survived the Terran Empire's purge of all telepaths. There are reasonable explanations for this that I can come up with, but none of them were provided. I did find it funny that the MU Lwaxana Troi was not all that different from the regular universe's. The main difference was that she was forced into a survival situation, and needed to keep hosts of secrets for herself. I would have cut out the opening few pages where a Cardassian Gul lands on the remains of Betazed with his (closeted) gay son. Why? Because after a few pages, these characters become irrelevant and are forgotten. Meanwhile, this takes out time that could have been used to build up the tension of Troi and Picard trying to get a hold of Lwaxana's cache of Alliance secret files. Instead, they get a hold of it 'offscreen', so to speak. It seemed pretty anti climatic. I do have to say that I enjoyed the fact that the Duras Sisters can never seem to get away from Picard, in ANY universe. That was a nice touch.

Grade: C+

Bitter Fruit: A well-done Voyager-centric episode. Another follow-up to a previous story, it once again focuses on Kes. I feel like it is another one of the stories in this collection that actually works in its small format. Many others have felt rushed or incomplete, but this one works a lot better. B'Elanna struggles with her new telepathic abilities, which leaves her vulnerable to influence by Kes. There are also a bunch of good character moments between Kes and Tuvok, especially after Kes finds out that Tuvok has no intention of letting her see Neelix, which was her primary reason for accepting his mission in the first place. This has consequences, as alluded to at the end of the story.

Grade: A

Family Matters: KRAD's contribution to this collection, it takes a different approach in storytelling than the others. The story consists of a series of communication logs between ships, personal letters between Alliance officers, and other recordings. It mostly reads like a transcript, but the concept actually works. Many major Cardassian and Klingon characters that have not been mentioned in the MU so far show up, including Kurn, Klag, Martok, Kargan, Damar, Macet, and Dukat. Regent Worf has cameos at the beginning and end. Interestingly, Macet and Klag in particular are almost identical in their ways to their normal universe counterparts. Both are honorable men, whereas many of the others we hear from are not so much. I was happy to see a story that mostly focused on the Alliance Klingons, rather than the Alliance Cardassians or Intendant Kira. My only complaint would be that the mystery in the story is rather obvious to solve.

Grade: A

Homecoming: This may turn out to be my favorite story from the collection. PAD's follow-up to the New Frontier MU novel in the last collection continues the story of M'K'n'zy of Calhoun and his Excalibur. This story introduces MU's Selar, who poses as a Romulan in order to get on board. We also see the first appearance of MU Jellico, who joins up with the Excalibur crew as a lower officer (oh, the irony...). There are plenty of comedic moments, especially during the opening scene where McHenry telepathically tries to eavesdrop on Soleta and Mac having sex. The end certainly bodes well for the Rebellion, as the Romulan fleet decides to follow the commands of the new CAPTAIN Calhoun, and fight the Alliance. This in the wake of the decimation of Romulus by a thalaron bomb that they had been building for the Alliance (which, of course, it turned out the Alliance was going to use against Romulus all along). A funny story with some good character moments, it reminds me fondly of the earlier books in the New Frontier series, before things started to get wacky.

Grade: A+

A Terrible Beauty: The continuation of the previous MU DS9 story, 'ATB' primarily delves into the background of Mirror Keiko, who had shown up as a newer character in the previous story set in the DS9 universe. Once again, as in the majority of these stories, we see how the Memory Omega organization gets involved in aiding the Rebellion. However, so far these have been relatively minor victories, especially in the wake of the capture of MU Bashir and Zek. We briefly get to know MU Tasha Yar, who shows up on the Korvat colony as a messenger for Memory Omega to Keiko. Unfortunately we get to see little of her, as she dies rather fast in the process of the slave revolt on Korvat. The ending, like many others, hints at things to come, but it does not reveal much. A decent character story, this was one of the middle of the road entries.

Grade: B

Empathy: Chris Bennett's entry, which is the first to feature MU Titan characters, shows some interesting sides of this universe that we have not seen before. The Irriol bear some similarities to the Caeliar and the system-sized entity from "Greater than the Sum" (also written by Chris). I would like to see if the Irriol exist in the regular universe (unless they already do and my memory is shot). I was not all that surprised to see a darker Dr. Ree, who was already a character with the potential for a lot of violence. The most interesting changes were MU Riker and MU Christine Vale. At first it appears that Vale is actually working undercover for the Rebellion, but soon betrays her 'comrades', proving to be a double agent all along. She has an interesting perspective as a slave, that being that she would rather be enslaved with her master (Jaza Najem in this case), than 'free' to be on her own in the universe. She also expresses a lot of anger towards humanity's past actions as a result of the Terran Empire. What was not clear was whether these opinions were brainwashed into her by her master, who had even more hatred of Terrans than her, or if it was genuine. I would assume the latter after reading. The other major difference was Riker, who was probably the most bloodthirsty human we have seen since the days of the Terran Empire in this universe. He was absolutely immoral and ruthless, and had plannned to take over Captain Ian Troi's ship by mutiny before the captain was killed in another incident. He brutally assaults (and I believe rapes) and murders Christine following her betrayal of the landing party. I think this story may be the most violent Titan entry since the first book. However, the ending, where Tuvok shows Jaza the error of his ways towards Bajor, by telling him of the regular universe Bajor's troubles, was a fitting ending. Well done.

Grade: A

For Want of a Nail: I'm not entirely sure where this story fits in. I would say TNG, because it primarily involves TNG characters Duras, Gowron, Nechayev, Reg Barclay, and K'Ehleyr. I found this story to be well done, although I really wish that we would have seen the beginning of the Memory Omega telepathic rebellion against the Alliance in this collection. Sadly, we do not. Despite this, 'FWoaN' has an interesting perspective of some well-known and peripheral TNG characters. K'Ehleyr shows up on a planet as a commando, tasked with recovering technology crucial to Memory Omega's existence. Quickly we find out that Alynna Nechayev is also a member of Memory Omega, although she has turned on her former comrades because she believes that Memory Omega's rebellion will fail to defeat the Alliance. Thankfully she gives up her information to a Rebellion collaborator, who happens to be Duras (a traitor in any universe, apparently...). Reg Barclay is eventually forced to move from his 'desk' job as the tactical operator for K'Ehleyr so that he can save her life and complete the mission. I found that of these four characters, only K'Ehleyr was much different from her normal universe counterpart, because she goes from being a diplomat in 'our' universe, to a warrior in this one. Other than that, the others stay pretty close to their counterparts. Gowron makes a cameo as his typical backstabbing self in this universe. I honestly would have liked to see a different portrayal of these characters, especially Reg. He seemed almost identical to the Reg we know so well from TNG and VOY.
This story ends up in the middle of the road.

Grade: B-

Rankings:

1. The Black Flag (Favorite)
2. Homecoming
3. Empathy
4. Bitter Fruit
5. Family Matters
6. The Greater Good
7. A Terrible Beauty
8. For Want of a Nail
9. Nobunaga
10. Sacred Chalice
11. Ill Winds
12. The Traitor (Least Favorite)
 
Empathy: Chris Bennett's entry, which is the first to feature MU Titan characters, shows some interesting sides of this universe that we have not seen before. The Irriol bear some similarities to the Caeliar and the system-sized entity from "Greater than the Sum" (also written by Chris). I would like to see if the Irriol exist in the regular universe (unless they already do and my memory is shot). I was not all that surprised to see a darker Dr. Ree, who was already a character with the potential for a lot of violence. The most interesting changes were MU Riker and MU Christine Vale. At first it appears that Vale is actually working undercover for the Rebellion, but soon betrays her 'comrades', proving to be a double agent all along. She has an interesting perspective as a slave, that being that she would rather be enslaved with her master (Jaza Najem in this case), than 'free' to be on her own in the universe. She also expresses a lot of anger towards humanity's past actions as a result of the Terran Empire. What was not clear was whether these opinions were brainwashed into her by her master, who had even more hatred of Terrans than her, or if it was genuine. I would assume the latter after reading. The other major difference was Riker, who was probably the most bloodthirsty human we have seen since the days of the Terran Empire in this universe. He was absolutely immoral and ruthless, and had plannned to take over Captain Ian Troi's ship by mutiny before the captain was killed in another incident. He brutally assaults (and I believe rapes) and murders Christine following her betrayal of the landing party. I think this story may be the most violent Titan entry since the first book. However, the ending, where Tuvok shows Jaza the error of his ways towards Bajor, by telling him of the regular universe Bajor's troubles, was a fitting ending. Well done.

Grade: A

Thanks! The Irriol are part of the main-universe Titan series; Orilly Malar is a crew member in the first few novels, and she and her people are examined in some depth in Orion's Hounds. Although in OH her world is only described in Orilly's conversations; I thought this would be a good chance to actually go there and explore its ecosystem in more detail.

As for Ree, I don't consider him darker. There are aspects of his species' morality that would seem shocking to us, like a willingness to kill sentient beings if those beings regard themselves as viable prey. But that's combined with a strong sense of courtesy and fairness and other traits that are admirable. I made sure to portray Mirror Ree as being unfailingly friendly and reasonable with Jaza, despite Jaza's distaste for his methods. So I wasn't doing Evil Ree, just exploring his alienness in a different context. Ree is more or less the same person in both realities, but here he's in an environment that's encouraged him to embrace the fiercer aspects of his nature, while as a Starfleet doctor he's encouraged to tone them down.

As for Vale and Jaza, I wanted to explore the psychology and beliefs that perpetuate slavery in societies that possess it. It's too easy to reduce it to evil slavers and oppressed slaves, but there's no way every single person in a slave-owning society is evil and abusive. With Jaza, I wanted to get beyond the caricatures of evil Alliance members and explore why a basically good person would support the Alliance and its use of slavery even when he saw its injustices, blaming the suffering of the slaves on the misuse of the institution rather than its very existence. And slaves throughout history have adapted to their situation in various ways other than surrender and rebellion. Sometimes, like Christine, they take it for granted that slavery is their lot in life, but do all they can to work the system to their advantage and gain as much security and comfort as they can for themselves and their families.

As for Christine's views on Terrans, remember, in this universe, the Terrans did in fact have a brutal empire and exterminated and enslaved hundreds of worlds. So no brainwashing is required. Mirror Universe Terrans have done little to prove to the galaxy at large that they're capable of anything more than savagery. To many, a Terran-led rebellion wouldn't look like a fight for freedom, but more like an uprising of a barbarian horde that had previously been tamed. Christine sincerely believed that her species was savage and that she'd been given the chance to become something better, more like the noble Bajorans. There's some social conditioning there, but no more than anyone gets from the society they're raised in.

So I guess basically I was trying to subvert the usual expectations of who the good guys and bad guys were in this conflict. Or at least to show that there were good, bad, and in-between people on both sides, as there always are.
 
Just a minor pitpick, which I sure KRAD will do just as well when he shows up (unless he beats me to it, which is entirely possible):
Many major Cardassian and Klingon characters that have not been mentioned in the MU so far show up, including Kurn, Klag, Martok, Kargan, Damar, Macet, and Dukat.
We have actually seen many of these people before. Kurn worked with Intendant Kira in Saturn's Children, after which she elevated him to General (in Duras's place). Martok took over as Regent after Worf's capture and held Kira as a slave for a while, as seen in Saturn's Children. Dukat also showed up in Saturn's Children, as Ro's political sponsor, responsible for putting her in place as Kira's replacement as Intendant. He was presumably killed with Ro after the failure of their counter-op against Kira. And Macet showed up as Kira's chief Cardassian contact in Warpath (alongside Kurn).
 
^ Actually, Macet showed up alongside Klag, not Kurn, in Warpath. In fact, that scene was what inspired "Family Matters" in the first place. Warpath gave the impression that Macet and Klag were comrades, so I decided to tell the origin of that friendship.
 
Aww...sounds like there's some really great stuff in this compilation. I haven't seen it in any of the Chapters that I frequent yet and am hoping that it will ship soon, maybe when A Singular Destiny ships next week! I love the Mirror Universe!
 
Thanks for a very interesting collection; I also really liked Greater Good, Empathy and the Black Flag; but all of the stories were enjoyable.
 
I just finished "Ill Winds" and it was pretty good. Overall I enjoyed it, it was well written, with interesting characters, well written dialouge and some good action. My only real issue with it was the same that LutherSloan had, there really weren't many familiar characters in it, other than the Aprils. I can somewhat understand that since we really haven't seen alot of that era, but I think it still would have been more enjoyable if there had been someway to tie in more familiar faces.
So it was a good story, but not anything absolutely amazing. 8/10
 
I just received my copy from Amazon, but haven't read it yet. So I guess what I'm saying is, I have nothing to say.
 
Don't know if this has already been answered, but does Nobunaga elaborate any more on MU Hoshi's son first seen in Sorrows of Empire? How does he fare?
 
Don't know if this has already been answered, but does Nobunaga elaborate any more on MU Hoshi's son first seen in Sorrows of Empire? How does he fare?
No such offspring was seen in The Sorrows of Empire. Are you perhaps thinking of the Hoshi-focused story Age of the Empress in volume one, Glass Empires?
 
I just finished Nobunaga a last week, and Hoshi only plays a supporting role in the story. It's focused pretty much entirely on Trip.
 
^^By the way, there's a typo in the Historian's Note to "Nobunaga." It says it's in 2156, but the story says it's a decade after Hoshi became Empress, which would be 2165.
 
I just realized I haven't been posting my reviews as I've been finishing stories, so here goes. In the past 3 days I've finished too more stories, The Greater Good and The Black Flag.
The Greater Good
I really enjoyed this story, it was well written, and I like the way that MWB tied The Cage, and The Dagger of the Mind into the events of the story. I honestly never thought to put to gether Tantalus Field and The Tantalus Colony, so that was pretty good connection. 9/10
The Black Flag
Another great story, lots of fun Imperial Evilness, especially Reyes. Overall the story was well written, with lots of interesting developments, and some fun twists with the MU versions of the characters, like Ganz and Reyes working together, and Desai torturing Quinn. My only real complaint was that it was pretty much just a one time thing, well at least with all of the characters together. 9.5/10
 
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