Well, Jeri Taylor was the mastermind to these ideas, and I didn't think the lifespan idea was silly at all. I would've preferred the brainstorming wasn't so linear to Earth time but something the Great Janeway and the Doctor didn't fully understand. I was hoping the Ocampa lifespan was some form of reincarnation, where the nine years was a lifespan in multiples of 9 to the 9th power. Like a caterpillar becoming a butterfly, an alien who has the secrets of life beyond the universe. The God particle is real folks!!! IMO there was sooooooooooooooooo much I could've done with the character of Kes because I thought she was so unique, but as the series went along Jeri Taylor was invested in making Janeway the greatest Captain ever, instead of a Captain who should be stumbling in the beginning and by season 4 she's the best Starfleet has ever had because no Captain had ever had to start off her career in this fashion, going to strange new worlds and seeking out new life as the "Starfleet handbook" is thrown out of the window! Mulgrew's Janeway does not jibe with the concept.
I have to correct you in what you wrote in an earlier post. Voyager wasn't Janeway's first command. According to Memory Beta, her first command was at the ship
Billings in 2363. Two years later, in 2365, she was the Captain of the
Bonestell which was her first command with Tuvok as security officer, this can be found in the book "Pathways" written by Jeri Taylor. So she did have some command experience when she became Captain on Voyager.
As for Kes, well as you probably have read in many of my posts, I have no interest of any mumbo-jumbo like that silly lifespan or energy being rubbish. She would have been at her best with some mental abilities like she showed up in "Persistence Of Vision" and "Cold Fire" but nothing more. What made Kes interesting was her personality which could have made her an excellent counselor, a good doctor or a good officer among the senior staff.
There are some things that could have been made better. Torres became tame too quickly. I would have seen that change take place during 3-4 episodes and not only during the second episode of the show. The same with the Kes-Neelix relationship which should have broken up during 2-3 episodes in season 2 after "Cold Fire" but Berman and his staff were terrible when it came to write about relationships (I'm lousy at that too and therefore I try to stay away from such stories but if I had to, I would do it better than Bermans gang). They couldn't write about realistic relationships in TNG either.
I would also have liked to see some of the problems with the Maquis and the Starfllet crewmembers being solved during the 2-3 first episodes, to get a realistic picture of that development. Why not have a scene with Chakotay and Parsi in the mess hall where Tom could have explained that he never betrayed Chakotay's crew, that he was actually leading a Federation ship
away from Chakotay's ship when he was caught (as it is described in "Pathways"). I really like season 1 but some events were too rushed in the first episides, just to get the ship and crew as perfect as possible as soon as possible.
But what ever misgivings I have with Voyager, especially the later seasons and some events there, I'm happy that it didn't turn out like Stargate Universe which looked like a mirror universe version of Voyager with a bickering crew, obnoxious characters and as exiting as watching paint dry.