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Spoilers S31: Disavowed by David Mack Review Thread

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Making a few replies I've been meaning to post...

Sci, lovely post! I'm not sure how to respond due to time - but I get what you are saying. And for as long as I've known you on these boards you have been stridently strongwilled and optimistic about how we should view the world - which I applaud.

Aw, thank you! You're too kind.

I'm not sure I agree in how you interpret S31 as fascist - in that case organisations like militaries, intelligence services and even things like civilian organisations tied to state identity like the Boys Brigade or Orange Order as 'neo-Fascist'.

Well, I think you bring up a valid point here. And my response is that security organizations, such as police, the armed forces, and intelligence services, inherently carry the potential for fascism. They are, by necessity, authoritarian organizations -- they have to be. You can't be egalitarian when you have to order people into combat. Moreover, they are authoritarian organizations that serve, and must therefore venerate, the state.

What makes these organizations morally legitimate and non-fascistic is that they serve the liberal democratic state but do not seek to undermine its liberal democratic ethos -- thus they are answerable to the democratically-elected government and abide by a liberal constitutional order, with its due processes and individual rights and so forth. This endows the security organizations with virtue.

The key thing that distinguishes Section 31, in my view, is that it not only actively resists accountability to the legitimately-elected democratic government and actively violates the liberal system of individual rights -- but that I suspect it of seeking to subvert the fundamental liberal democratic social order, to transform the Federation from a Rechtsstaat into an Unrechtsstaat.

I base this conclusion on their consistently seeking autarky, on their agents' participation in the Khitomer conspiracy, on their role in the Min Zife affair, on their attempts to raise a private army of Jem'Hadar loyal to them as gods, and on their 23rd century Abramsverse counterparts' openly stated desire to provoke a war with the Klingons so that their leader could "lead the Federation" to victory. (I implicitly interpret Admiral Marcus's goal as being to become the de facto military dictator of the Federation, given his line to Kirk about "who's gonna lead us.")

ON the fictional aspects of the story, we nothing about Control - until now he or she didn't exist - and we have no idea how he or she really works. I'd rather wait til we have more than a few lines before deconstructing how their role works.

Well, we know a few things. We know they're called "Control"--which sounds pretty darned authoritarian, if not outright megalomaniacal. We know that Control issues binding orders to their subordinates. We also know that Alexander Marcus, who was apparently the "Control" of the Abramsverse 2250s, wanted to lead the Federation to victory in a war against the Klingons he provoked.

Absolutely my interpretation could be contradicted by a later novel. But to me, given the larger context of Section 31's other activities, it all sounds an awful lot like Führerprinzip.

As for political theory - very interesting - but outwith my ken. Perhaps also being European - and from a country sans constitution - means I view things slightly differently.

Well, I think you should give yourself more credit here. Nothing I've argued is particularly unique -- it's basically just a slimmed-down version of ideas found from European political philosophers of the 17th through 19th centuries. John Locke, Immanuel Kant, Rousseau, John Stuart Mill, etc.

And God knows there are plenty of Americans out there whose ideas about political legitimacy boil down to, "Jesus gave George Washington the Constitution and Declaration of Independence, so we should all be good Christians and obey our white presidents (when they're not dirty commies)." Which is essentially just a white nationalist version of the divine right of kings.

We Americans may have a constitutional order based on the Enlightenment, but a lot of us are damn ignorant about it. Europeans have no monopoly on Completely Missing the Point. ;)

I would say that MO's actions I were thinking about - the most abhorrent - was not the Genesis device but the rather lovingly-formed telepathic rebellion murders - from Rise I always remember the bioweapon release most horribly.

Yeah, I don't necessarily view the goal of establishing a liberal democratic Commonwealth to have justified Memory Omega's massacres of Cardassian civilians. On the other hand, however, I think we should bear in mind that the perpetrators of those massacres paid for their crimes with their lives when Supreme Legate Damar ordered the deaths of all Vulcans within Cardassian space. And even if I were to agree that, say, Director Saavik should be indicted and tried as a conspirator to commit mass murder, that, to me, does not invalidate the right of Memory Omega to exist as an institution.

On the other hand, I don't entirely think Omega's actions vis a vis those mass murders were unjustified. All of Cardassian society was complicit to some degree or another in the enslavement and oppression of dozens of species--billions of individuals. And if Omega could conceive of no other way to fight back... I have a hard time condemning it, necessarily. This is a state of lawlessness and of oppression on a level that has only rarely been reached in human history, and it's occurring on a level that has never existed in real life. I'm not quite sure what I think.

The closest comparison I can imagine is this: What if, instead of Vulcans on Cardassia, it had been African Americans in the Antebellum American South? Would a systematic, large-scale rebellion of African Americans have been justified? Such an act would almost certainly have involved killing many thousands of white American Southerners -- their particular oppressors, captors, and abusers, yes. But likely also many thousands of innocents, both white and black, would have been killed in the chaos. And yet... I have a hard time saying that such a rebellion would have been morally unjustified, because the American system of slavery was so uniquely evil.

But thank you for addressing my points!

My pleasure. And I hope I've done justice to your very valid points.

This novel directly sets into motion Bashir and Sarina's attempts to take down Section 31 by any means necessary. As others have said, it's refreshing to see that the Section 31 operatives see completely through Bashir and Sarina's ruse and are fully prepared to handle. It certainly raises the stakes a bit. I hope that in Control we'll see more than just those two fighting against them. We know that there are plenty of other people who know about their existence and it seems to me it would be more plausible for a few others involved (it's a damn pity Vaughn is no longer alive to help).

I wonder if Sarina's S.I. handler is part of the "Kirk Cabal" organized against Section 31, of which Vaughn was a part?

Speaking of Control, Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy just happened to be the last novel I read,

SUCH A GOOD BOOK OMG.

*coughs*

Sorry.

I would argue that the whole point of answering to a higher authority in a set-up like the UFP is that said authority is itself answerable to the masses and takes responsibility before the people.

That is a very concise summation of the same idea I was trying to convey in my long-winded ramblings!

It is interesting that there has not been a lot of discussion of Bashir in this thread. What I liked most about the book is to see him humbled as well as realizing, finally, that this is not a "spy game", there is no game at all. This is deadly serious. Seeing him be a complete pawn in this story and realizing just how much in the end was really satisfying. Bashir needed that humiliation. Just because he is genetically enhanced does not mean that he is always a few steps ahead of everyone. Now that his arrogance has been tempered I think he will have a much better shot of having a damaging impact on 31.

Hm. I don't know, I didn't really get much of that. To me, Bashir already had that lesson in humility, of realizing that it's not a game, in the episode "Inter Arma Enim Silent Leges." It's that final scene, where he's realized how badly he's been played and that he's utterly helpless to do anything about it. Sloan appears to him; he calls Security, and then cancels his call. It's almost like he's realizing that there's darkness in the Federation after all.

If Disavowed had any flaw to me, it's that, to me, it didn't really feature Bashir going on a journey of fundamental emotional change, unless you count his willingness to subject himself to Mirror!Dominion authority and then his realization that the Mirror!Dominion genuinely believes in the rule of law rather than the rule of men. (Or of Changelings.) He began the story in a position of moral certitude vis a vis Section 31, and he ended it there, too.

Which is fine -- not every story has to be about fundamental change in the primary character. And maybe I'll re-read it and see an emotional journey I didn't get the first time. But after the major changes in his character Julian underwent in Zero Sum Game and A Ceremony of Losses, his relatively more emotionally static arc was noticeable to me.

Mack really brings the action and has set up a great story; he brought down the Borg, hopefully this will bring down Section 31.
We can but hope.

Well, they've been building to this for 13 years now, ever since Cloak was published....

Hmm. <Siegfried>Vill Section 31: CONTROL be followed by Section 31: KAOS?</Siegfried>
Come on guys... This is the TrekBBS, we don't DO that HERE.
Are you telling me not to, ahem, GET SMART?

I seriously considered making a reference to Kaos and Control from Get Smart in my initial post, but I decided not to. I thought it might be too obscure and no one would get it. Now others beat me to the punch.

I suppose you could say I... missed it by that much!

:D
 
Just finished reading it and think it was outstanding – which is not surprising given the other excellent books Mr Mack has written :bolian:. I have never really followed any of the books from the TOS era but because of Mr Mack I had started reading the Vanguard series and now am about half-way through the series. Can’t wait for Control to be released to see what happens next.

Quick question for Mr Mack (and apologies if it has already been asked), is Control a conclusion to your current Bashir/Section 31 story or are there plans for further chapters to this story?
 
Quick question for Mr Mack (and apologies if it has already been asked), is Control a conclusion to your current Bashir/Section 31 story or are there plans for further chapters to this story?
That hasn't been decided yet. Also, it looks as if Section 31: Control will need to be postponed, for reasons I am not yet at liberty to divulge. The vague explanation is that there is something else the publisher wants me to work on first, and I can't do both tasks because my schedule is limited by another upcoming project I've not yet announced.
 
The vague explanation is that there is something else the publisher wants me to work on first, and I can't do both tasks because my schedule is limited by another upcoming project I've not yet announced.
Ah, well. Better that you have too much work than not enough! :)
 
David, did you read The Case of the Colonist's Corpse, Rogue, and Shadow while researching for Disavowed?

As I recall, there's nothing particularly relevant to Section 31 in Case of the Colonist's Corpse except that we find out Cogley's bodyguard is a former a Thirty-One agent who'd been assigned to investigate him because the organization was freaked out by his civil libertarian leanings.

Shadow was mostly, IIRC, a techno-thriller about various traps designed to kill Seven of Nine that turn out after the fact to have been designed by a Thirty-One agent who'd been planted aboard Voyager and died as an unnamed extra in one of the season four episodes. Rogue was actually quite good, but was a standalone whose plot didn't really impact anything in Disavowed.
 
Our interview with David is here!
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https://trek-fm.squarespace.com/literary-treks/83
 
Bad news for those of us waiting for Control via David Mack himself on the Trek.fm Babel Conference Facebook group

Well, if you think 2016 is a long way away, I have bad news. CONTROL has been postponed until at least 2017, due to developments that occurred just after we recorded the interview.

Good lord. This "Control" person has WAY too much influence if he/she is able to control book releases in the 21st century... pretty scary. ;)
 
Bad news for those of us waiting for Control via David Mack himself on the Trek.fm Babel Conference Facebook group

Well, if you think 2016 is a long way away, I have bad news. CONTROL has been postponed until at least 2017, due to developments that occurred just after we recorded the interview.

Good lord. This "Control" person has WAY too much influence if he/she is able to control book releases in the 21st century... pretty scary. ;)

We need to get a team together, to stop him. Maybe some one genetically engineered?.....
 
I know David can't yet confirm what got in the way of Control, but my bet is that pocket wants one of their top writers tackling something juicy for the big 50th anniversary of trek. Maybe another big trilogy? Hopefully :techman:
 
I know David can't yet confirm what got in the way of Control, but my bet is that pocket wants one of their top writers tackling something juicy for the big 50th anniversary of trek. Maybe another big trilogy? Hopefully :techman:

Could also be David's original work as well. He talked about on the show that he was very close to securing a deal for his original work.
 
I'm saddened by the news. I understand the realities of everything involved, but 2017? That's like 2+ years!!!

For me personally, it's so hard to stay involved with the stories sometimes with such long breaks between them. Really hope the publishing window doesn't impact the elements of the storyline. Who knows what will have changed in 2 years, whether it be in universe or IRL.

At least with Mack writing, we KNOW it's worth waiting for. *Silver Lining*
 
I know David can't yet confirm what got in the way of Control, but my bet is that pocket wants one of their top writers tackling something juicy for the big 50th anniversary of trek. Maybe another big trilogy? Hopefully :techman:
Yes... they plan to make him blow up the other part of the federation who got unscathed from the ( Mack mess ) :P

and i just bought the book .. OMG i am already confused , what happened in the MU ?? I wasn't a fan of MU because it's a twisted universe but now seems i will have to read at least stuff happening after the fall of the terran Empire ? any ideas?
 
and i just bought the book .. OMG i am already confused , what happened in the MU ?? I wasn't a fan of MU because it's a twisted universe but now seems i will have to read at least stuff happening after the fall of the terran Empire ? any ideas?

Just start with the first of the Mirror Universe Anthologies from 2007, and just read the Mirror Universe stories that have come out since then.
 
i just bought the book .. OMG i am already confused , what happened in the MU ?? I wasn't a fan of MU because it's a twisted universe but now seems i will have to read at least stuff happening after the fall of the terran Empire ? any ideas?
To get up to speed on the Mirror Universe in a hurry, you could read the expanded, standalone novel version of my first MU tale, The Sorrows of Empire (which is much-expanded from the version in the first anthology), and then my sequel, Rise Like Lions.

If you're interested in getting the full sweep of Mirror Universe alt-history (which I think will lend greater resonance to Rise Like Lions and the stories that follow it), you'll want to read the entire MU arc from 2007 onward, in this order:
Star Trek Mirror Universe, Vol. 1: Glass Empires
• Age of the Empress
Star Trek Mirror Universe: The Sorrows of Empire
(expanded edition)

Star Trek Mirror Universe, Vol. 1: Glass Empires
The Worst of Both Worlds
Star Trek Mirror Universe, Vol. 2: Obsidian Alliances
The Mirror-Scaled Serpent
Cutting Ties
Saturn's Children
Star Trek Mirror Universe: Shards and Shadows
(short story anthology; read them all)

Star Trek Mirror Universe: Rise Like Lions
I also list on my website's page for Disavowed a few other books that precede it in the ongoing serial narrative of the Star Trek novels:Enjoy!
 
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