It's good to know that Bob Orci genuinely cares about the interests of the fans.
But then, he's been there for us for the first one, too, to be frank. I personally LOVED Trek XI--and this is a Canon Purist speaking, who understands and approves of the alternate timeline.
Personally? I don't complain about the Beer Factory Engineering. I mean...the TOS Engineering had pipes and valves, for goodness sake!
However, I could go for Scotty overseeing an upgrade of the chamber, so it keeps the "down-to-earth" element, but looks more "in line" with the high-tech nature of Trek.
As for Kirk...I would say he's pretty much earned his captaincy, having saved the whole freaking FEDERATION from certain destruction by taking command and taking charge!
However...that being said...I would enjoy some more "earning" for Kirk--showing him prove his worth.
And...Yelchin should tone down his accent a bit--make it sound more subtle, more "natural". I'm sure it's supposed to be more "authentic" than Koenig's...but to be blunt--it sounds goofy, exaggerated, parody-ish. Chekov's supposed to be funny, yes--but not a clown. And that's what he sounds like in Trek XI, I'm sorry.
Show us more Sulu! The coolness factor was there--especially with the swordfight. So...more swordplay!
And PLEASE, Bob--if you're reading this--PLEASE give us Yeoman Janice Rand! And if it's not too much trouble...have her and Kirk help each other out in their emotional conflicts, and give us the romantic relationship between the two that always should have been....