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Production Order Group Viewing 2018

Production Order Week 5
Star Trek Episode 1x04 The Enemy Within
First aired: October 6, 1966
5th episode produced, 5th episode released.

A transporter malfunction splits Captain Kirk into two people – one good and one evil, and neither capable of functioning well separately.
 
The Enemy Within

"Decontaminate that uniform." If it was contaminated, it would be too late for you, Scotty. I wonder what sort of protocols they have for dealing with potentially hazardous materials besides just beaming right up and strolling about the ship.

If only the Enterprise had these smaller ships that would be docked in some kind of landing bay that could leave the ship and pick up a landing party without the need for the transporter. They could call them...shuttles or something.

It would be better to beam up the landing party, stun and imprison their evil halves than leave them on the planet to freeze to death.

Okay, what if the Enterprise fired its phasers onto the planet near the landing party and heated up the area?

Actually, have we seen the Enterprise fire phasers yet? I guess not. Nevermind, we don't know they have ship's phasers yet.

First Phaser 2 sighting?

First neck pinch?

I don't think the landing party would really survive -117 temperatures and certainly without losing digits and limbs. They don't even have coats. I think the writers exaggerated a bit. You don't have to make it that cold to sell the threat.

I have thought that landing parties aren't really very well equipped. I've often thought that O'Neill's SG-1 teams were better equipped when visiting other planets. At least they had jackets.

First "he's dead, Jim!"

Oh, that final barb from Spock. Ouch.

Not one of my favorites, but we get a treatise on what makes a man a man.

Throughout the series Spock pets a weird dog thing, a Tribble, and a cat. He's an old softie.
 
There is a lot to love in this one but a lot of flaws too. Sulu gets some great dialogue and I always love to see a Rand episode. I don't really get why they couldn't send down shelters and maybe some hats and gloves. They could have heated rocks inside the shelter and saved power too.

I think the uniforms have built in temperature control which would have helped, albeit not mentioned until later seasons.

I love that Kirk has a ton of makeup in his quarters .
 
Hi there, I've been meaning to make a comment in this topic, as it's similar to my own run-through. I am also watching through TOS, for the first time in production order. I started late last year, and have watched it in batches of episodes at a time (with other shows marathoned in between batches). To make it a faster run through, I've strung stretches of episodes together on a daily basis, rather than watch one episode per week, although from this I've concluded that the show works best with a week long passage between episodes. In the spirit of more modern shows with smaller seasons of 10 or so episodes, I've grouped episodes together into "mini-seasons" of TOS.

Some of these mini seasons have been of variable length. The first one was the two pilot episodes plus the period where Janice Rand was a semi-regular, and this was the longest stretch of episodes. All the other mini seasons have been ten episodes or less (most of season two worked well in chunks of 5 episodes, which resulted in a pattern of starting off with a good or strong or likeable episode, and ended with an important episode (like Amok Time or Journey to Babel, important for Spock's character),

To comment specifically on the Janice Rand sequence of episodes, it was interesting to see how much was not established that early on, and how some dialogue hints at very different background details (EUSPA as "headquarters" Spock as a Vulcanian, a race of people who were conquered in the past, ect.) Unfortunately, one real negative of that sequence of stories is the treatment of Rand. I liked and was impressed by Rand as a self-aware and experienced individual, particularly in Charlie X; but I felt really troubled by the way she is treated by Charlie in that story, and uncomfortable with what she goes through in The Enemy Within, an episode that I want to like, yet can't.
 
Hi there, I've been meaning to make a comment in this topic, as it's similar to my own run-through. I am also watching through TOS, for the first time in production order. I started late last year, and have watched it in batches of episodes at a time (with other shows marathoned in between batches). To make it a faster run through, I've strung stretches of episodes together on a daily basis, rather than watch one episode per week, although from this I've concluded that the show works best with a week long passage between episodes. In the spirit of more modern shows with smaller seasons of 10 or so episodes, I've grouped episodes together into "mini-seasons" of TOS.

Some of these mini seasons have been of variable length. The first one was the two pilot episodes plus the period where Janice Rand was a semi-regular, and this was the longest stretch of episodes. All the other mini seasons have been ten episodes or less (most of season two worked well in chunks of 5 episodes, which resulted in a pattern of starting off with a good or strong or likeable episode, and ended with an important episode (like Amok Time or Journey to Babel, important for Spock's character),

To comment specifically on the Janice Rand sequence of episodes, it was interesting to see how much was not established that early on, and how some dialogue hints at very different background details (EUSPA as "headquarters" Spock as a Vulcanian, a race of people who were conquered in the past, ect.) Unfortunately, one real negative of that sequence of stories is the treatment of Rand. I liked and was impressed by Rand as a self-aware and experienced individual, particularly in Charlie X; but I felt really troubled by the way she is treated by Charlie in that story, and uncomfortable with what she goes through in The Enemy Within, an episode that I want to like, yet can't.
Rand is a favourite of mine. She was the female lead and, in production order you can see how her character was developing. You can even see how she might have been more involved in landing parties after Miri (and most subsequent yeoman appearances were in landing parties) but Grace was on a more expensive contract and was cut from quite a few scripts because her appearances would have been expensive but brief. If she hadn't been sexually assaulted and fired, she might have been downgraded to a day player in fewer episodes as the show went on, perhaps a similar number to Chapel. That would have been far preferable to no Janice at all.
 
Yeah, I quite liked Rand, too. I didn't care much for the Charlie X episode, but one of the saving, erm, graces is Rand as a character with some interesting personal history hinted at, her self awareness, and the potential strength of her character. When I got into the post-Rand episodes, I tried to find information about where her character would have continued. So the random female character who gets Trelane's special attention in The Squire of Gothos, and how Ruth from Shore Leave would have been Rand! That would have gone far beyond the unrequited. I like to think in an alternate universe, replacement and fill-in characters are Rand; there's a version of Trek where more of her potential is realized. A sister-universe right next door to the series we have, a closer parallel compared to say the JJ Abrams Kelvin timeline (not a knock, I like those movies).
 
Yeah, I quite liked Rand, too. I didn't care much for the Charlie X episode, but one of the saving, erm, graces is Rand as a character with some interesting personal history hinted at, her self awareness, and the potential strength of her character. When I got into the post-Rand episodes, I tried to find information about where her character would have continued. So the random female character who gets Trelane's special attention in The Squire of Gothos, and how Ruth from Shore Leave would have been Rand! That would have gone far beyond the unrequited. I like to think in an alternate universe, replacement and fill-in characters are Rand; there's a version of Trek where more of her potential is realized. A sister-universe right next door to the series we have, a closer parallel compared to say the JJ Abrams Kelvin timeline (not a knock, I like those movies).
I assumed that every random yeoman in season one would have been Rand, and probably the records officer in Court Martial but Rand as Ruth? Yikes! Where did you read that? That would have been as creepy as evil Kirk's advances. Best not jump the Gun though. Kirk has plenty of form with Robo-wenches to come.

Rand did appear briefly in the Abramsverse comics as a security trained yeoman. Featuring her as Kirk's bodyguard seems way more fun.
 
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I assumed that every random yeoman in season one would have been Rand, and probably the records officer in Court Martial but Rand as Ruth? Yikes! Where did you read that? That would have been as creepy as evil Kirk's advances.

Rand did appear briefly in the Abramsverse comics as a security trained yeoman. Featuring her as Kirk's bodyguard seems way more fun.

I read it on the memory alpha entry, though perhaps I'm overthinking it. I assumed it would be in a positive way, not in a negative, creepy way, although early Trek struggled with it's track record. The entry says that Rand's absence is replaced by the presence of Ruth and Yeoman Tonia Barrows, broadly speaking. Perhaps the romantic aspect wasn't there when it was Rand, but played up or made more overt with the new character of Ruth.

Rand as Kirk's bodyguard sounds way cool. I keep re-thinking going back and collecting the Abram's based comics. I didn't get started with them because some of the early stories were just too close to the original episodes they were drawing from, or at least it seemed that way when I looked at them. The 80's novels are my jam right now, maybe later I'll collect the Kelvin-based comics.
 
I read it on the memory alpha entry, though perhaps I'm overthinking it. I assumed it would be in a positive way, not in a negative, creepy way, although early Trek struggled with it's track record. The entry says that Rand's absence is replaced by the presence of Ruth and Yeoman Tonia Barrows, broadly speaking. Perhaps the romantic aspect wasn't there when it was Rand, but played up or made more overt with the new character of Ruth.

Rand as Kirk's bodyguard sounds way cool. I keep re-thinking going back and collecting the Abram's based comics. I didn't get started with them because some of the early stories were just too close to the original episodes they were drawing from, or at least it seemed that way when I looked at them. The 80's novels are my jam right now, maybe later I'll collect the Kelvin-based comics.
John Byrne's New Visions set throughout TOS and largely post season 3 were good fun too.
 
No happy ending for Janice. Unrequited love of Kirk, a horrible experience with splitKirk, and Charlie's embarrassing crush.
I hated the Rand-Kirk crush thingy not as much as I hated the Spock-Chapel thingy but still I rate zero chemistry between Kirk and Rand.
I liked Rand in Charlie-X. She's sassy but still has compassion for Charlie after all he did. Also in Corbomite Maneuver she's not afraid to talk back to cranky Kirk. If they had made the crush-thing smaller just a whimsical thing I think I would have liked the character better and have some empathy for her feelings. Otherwise I just find the relationship inappropriate given the differences in rank and personality. Frankly I was sort of glad she went - not for the actress of course - it was terrible what happened to her (someone should have been jailed). If Rand and Chapel had more meatier roles than just crushing on Kirk and Spock then I would have had more respect for their characters.
Rand could have become Kirk's administrative side-kick - organising the lower ranks. Doing the sort of non-sciency things that Spock seemed to unnecessarily do (like organising shore leave) . I'm not that keen on her being Kirk's bodyguard - as that was part of Shatner Kirk's personality to get involved in fist fights. Although I have no problem with her mucking in in a fight to save the day or when Kirk's got himself in trouble. Didn't someone say they read that Rand and Spock were intended to be friends. I thought that would have been excellent. I could see them having meals together rolling their eyes at Kirk's antics.
Much has been said of Spock's remarks to Rand at the end of "Enemy Within'. Of course it was a terrible thing to say but I think we've made a bigger deal out of it than was intended. I'm not excusing it but Spock showed no such misogyny for the rest of the series.
 
I feel like in some ways , the Enemy Within is the first meaty character episode. We've seen something of what makes Kirk tick in the last few episodes but this one takes a good look at how the mix of ruthlessness, compassion, daring, and fear mix to make the whole greater than the sum of the parts. Mudd's Women hints that Kirk is lonely and that plays out here too.

All four leads get to show some depth. Spock doesn't behave completely logically, hinting to his friendship with Kirk. In particular, we see all three facets of Rand on display: professional Rand, who stands up to drunk Kirk, senior non-com Rand displaying some authority over junior crewmen, and Moon-eyed Rand who's just happy to know Kirk fancies her. It's a shame they didn't add a scene where Rand calls the bridge after her second encounter with evil Kirk to show she's not so dumb. It isn't explained how they find him.
 
Evil Kirk is just great to watch! Shatner embraces the “bestial” side of his character without going too over the top hammy.

This week’s plot is caused by “a yellow ore that had highly unusual properties”. Take THAT, technobable! :techman:

Much is often made of the fact that Scotty lets Kirk ride up in the Transporter BEFORE a full check can be made, just the machine itself says it’s OK. This indicates a pattern behaviour that we will see later on, that people of the 23rd century are completely beholden to their intricate machinery and reluctant to distrust or let it go.
However, when beaming up Kirk he does use a different pad than the one Wilson arrived on, suggesting that Scotty believed any harm was limited to just that one (and why he asks Fisher to fetch a synchronic metre to double check). TOS tech-talk in later episodes suggests that each pad generates its own “beam” so this may have been in the mind of the writers when they concocted this situation.

Evil Kirk’s attempted rape on Rand is extremely harsh and visceral. On a family show, no less! Unfortunately, how she is treated following the attack is EXTREMELY 1960s and dates the show worse than any of the costumes or special effects. I think Spock’s remark to her at the end of the episode was supposed to be indicative of their close friendship (another concept will never be developed) but as it stands doesn’t present our First Officer in the best light.

We are starting to get an indication of where everything is on this USS Enterprise. Crew quarters (or certainly senior staff) are on Deck 12 – Kirk’s cabin was here last week as well. Sickbay is on a different deck (Kirk and Spock take the turbolift there). Engineering is in “the lower levels” (unless Kirk was suggesting TWO different locations for his doppelganger to hide in?)

Speaking of sets; that Engine Room is beautifully lit to be suspenseful and moody. They do decent job playing hide & seek around what are essentially two large stage blocks to convey the impression of a “maze” within the ship’s engineering facilities. We also finally see one end of the curved corridor set and witness the functionality of the rotating wardrobe in the cabin set (specifically, Rand’s)

Even though it was only last week that saw the first bit of banter between McCoy and Spock, he apparently has been pranking the Vulcan since. “Our good doctor's been putting you on again…I'll tell him you were properly annoyed”. And speaking of Spock, we get the first explicit statement of his two warring halves and how he lives his life day by day. Good, meaty character stuff, to be further expanded upon in future episodes.

If only the Enterprise had these smaller ships that would be docked in some kind of landing bay that could leave the ship and pick up a landing party without the need for the transporter. They could call them...shuttles or something.
It's possible that the high winds would make shuttlecraft rescue impossible (they're not really outfitted for severe atmospheric flight). However, given what we've seen so far I'm not convinced that the Enterprise HAD any working shuttles at this stage in the series. The ones they had may have been destroyed or cannibalised for parts in WNMHGB and while replacement kits were probably issued when McCoy and the new uniforms came on board, this crew use the Transporter for everything, so why worry?
Now, there isn't enough time to assemble the shuttle kits before the landing party freeze to death.

It would be better to beam up the landing party, stun and imprison their evil halves than leave them on the planet to freeze to death.
Agreed - except that by the time Spock & Kirk capture the "imposter" (which was their primary focus, to protect the ship) the Transporter system has been knocked out of commission. These events seem to happen pretty fast (perhaps only within an hour or two) and Kirk's ability to make fast, effective command decisions is degrading throughout.

Okay, what if the Enterprise fired its phasers onto the planet near the landing party and heated up the area?

Actually, have we seen the Enterprise fire phasers yet? I guess not. Nevermind, we don't know they have ship's phasers yet.
They used main phasers to destroy the cube in The Corbomite Manoeuvre. Maybe they are not precise enough to risk doing that with the crew so nearby? Or perhaps the terrain is particularly rough and the "nearest area" would not be accessible before the crew froze to death on the way. Good points though.

Finally - more dialogue at the end supporting how much Kirk loves his ship. We got that in WNMHGB when debating how to deal with Mitchell, from Balok when he compares how similar he and Kirk are, from Mudd when discussing the captain with Eve and now, Evil Kirk's biggest worry is that his other half wants to "destroy the ship".
Do you get the message yet? ;)
 
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This week’s plot is caused by “a yellow ore that had highly unusual properties”. Take THAT, technobable! :techman:
:lol:

It's possible that the high winds would make shuttlecraft rescue impossible (they're not really outfitted for severe atmospheric flight). However, given what we've seen so far I'm not convinced that the Enterprise HAD any working shuttles at this stage in the series. The ones they had may have been destroyed or cannibalised for parts in WNMHGB and while replacement kits were probably issued when McCoy and the new uniforms came on board, this crew use the Transporter for everything, so why worry?
Now, there isn't enough time to assemble the shuttle kits before the landing party freeze to death.
I'm sure the real world reason is no one decided yet the Enterprise had shuttlecraft. But this is a good in-universe explanation.
 
Or they planned a shuttlecraft...they just didn't have it ready, so skipped mentioning it.
 
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The huge flight deck doors at the back of the secondary hull would suggest small craft ops were always part of the thinking process, even if it just for loading supplies (a Matt Jefferies sketch points to the secondary hull as where their stores are kept).
But not mentioning it in the story is a good way to avoid the lack of such a prop! :techman:
 
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