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Probably a singularity would, at a proper depth defined by the speed of subspace interactions. But we don't have to assume that, say, Nero's ship reached that depth yet.

It's a bit of an apples-oranges situation here: singularities are powerful natural phenomena, but they aren't particularly "expressive" ones because they are so collapsed unto themselves. It might be quite easy to outdo with a battery-driven backpack set a black hole's ability to jam an ordinary radio transmission!

As an aside, I doubt there was much "ordinary" about Nero's drill. It's a weapon apparently somewhat outperforming the best the capital ships of the time could offer (if we compare with similar drilling ops performed by the E-D). Only the environmentally conscious Feds might devote the resources to make such a piece of technology so emission-free that it didn't black out cities within a thousand-mile radius...

Timo Saloniemi
 
The original show has been elevated to an outrageously high standard, that people such as yourself will never be satisfied with anything.

Of course The Original Series has been "elevated to an outrageously high standard" by me, I've been a fan since I was five years old. Nothing will ever equal those larger than life characters as viewed through the eyes of that little boy.

But... I've been a fan to varying degrees of every other Trek series that has hit the airwaves.

But my love for The Original Series didn't hamper my enjoyment of this film. The fact that the writers wanted me to buy into so many coincidences did. The fact that they used the pop-culture caricature of Jim Kirk instead of building their own unique version did. The fact that I watched Jim Kirk hang from a cliff at three different points in the film did. The fact that I got a rather weak reworking of The Wrath of Khan did.

I use to blame the short-comings in this film on the writers strike, I thought that had they had the time to rewrite we would've gotten a much more coherent film. But after viewing films in the Transformers series and Cowboys and Aliens has convinced me that Star Trek 2009 is very indicative of the type of work Orci and Kurtzman are capable of. Which is disappointing.

As in all things, your mileage may vary.
 
You're obviously reading the movie the wrong way around. Nero only wanted to hurt Spock; he had other goals, but only as a consequence of this. Killing a few billion people was his way of achieving his main goal, not a military operation on its own right (because he wasn't a soldier).

I read the film just fine.
Regardless of what ever objective he had he clearly didn't intend on dieing due to his own ineptitude as part of the course.

Only if you remove Nero and place yourself as the villain of the story, with a completely different set of motivations and goals.
Goals which he can't decided on how to execute effectively.

Certainly there is no sense in thinking that a villain must kill everybody within his reach, save (most) henchmen.
All of the characters mentioned were direct threats to his objective to which he consistently allowed to live. Untill you come up with something else other than you interpreting in circles is a Plot Hole, after plot hole.
Definitely. But Nero does seem to think that he has either already done things to make the future better, or is on the path of completing that quest.
What you think the character thinks isn't admissible as part of the story. That you have to interpret that is the very revealing of the plot hole. The story teller failed to outline the character's personal reality.
I can't argue with somebody who doesn't type English, sorry. Try entire sentences next time.
If you can't identity English when you see it that's not my problem. I afford you all I'm willing to impart in that sentence for what you gave me.

A plot (unless it is a very primitive one) doesn't consist of a single cause and its effects 1 through n. It consists of multiple causes, multiple effects and multiple consequences, some of these amounting to story arcs, some not. Thus, there's nothing wrong with all our characters engaging in seemingly random a priori actions that define their characters and lead to plot developments.
Plots are decided from the objectives between the antagonist and the protagonist.


You argue that both of them are plot holes, which is unnecessary and just plain mean.
Not my concern. It is what is. A plot hole.
I am not required to chose which way is right or wrong thus both are wrong. That's the responsibility of the writer. That's how contradiction works.


Destroying things was obviously a goal, but just as obviously it wasn't a sole or primary goal.
I don't care what his "primary goal" was.
I merely behold the contradiction.


You're just trying to claim that it would be, because that creates "artificial plot holes" regarding Nero's treatment of Spock. But you're not entitled to that.
You're interpreting;Unlike you I don't assume to know what his "primary" goals are unless he says so and have made absolutely no claims to what goals are priority. It's your preoccupation which you are projecting onto myself.

Apparently not. Nothing I have postulated before has been derived from things that wouldn't have been visible or audible in the movie. It's quite possible that the movie had even more data the authors wanted the audience to "get", but certainly it had a sufficient load to cover a vast majority of your so-called "plot holes".
Interpret rather than derive.
That's how you're assiduously avoiding the plot holes.

Warp drive and transporters contain zero "thought", "reason" or "known scientific data", too. Beyond, of course, the thought that went into making them dramatically effective. A galaxy-endangering supernova in no way differs from the lot.
That was extremely sad...
Defense by hostage. It's so desperate and cowardly at the same time. Sorry they aren't alike. It's not like he modifiied it with the word subspace shock wave nova... You're just dense cause you can be. We know a Supernova will never threaten the entire Galaxy...it's not merely a plot device its a known quantity.

It's like saying a hurricane will threaten the world. It's just as stupid. Making up plot devices is one thing like warp fields and transporter...but that's not what he did. He said something stupid and you are desperately trying to defend it to my amusement...:guffaw:



You are no longer even being childish, you're getting infantile.
You were there long before I arrived.

The heroes face an enemy who points a big gun towards them, with everybody (including you) aware that if the gun goes off, the heroes die. And you think the movie fails to properly establish that the heroes can't start firing on the villain's weak point at that time?
Then die.
Die saving millions because the hand drill won't work anymore....(boo hoo) That the story mechanics he made and thus another plothole. Whatever happened to that FEAR in the FACE OF CERTAIN DEATH....

Timo your reasonings are you own don't expect me to share in your peculiar justifications of the tripe in the film.


And your argument is that there's a difference?

Of course there is. The Kelvin is rendered just as helpless as the Enterprise with the first volley!
Which highlights the problem quite well and further last longer than the 20 year newer ships.



You are quite entitled to childish bouts of rage.
I feel nothing...



You should really stop to think before you type in rage, as it would then be obvious to you that Nero can both "want prisoners" and "kill witnesses". It's even possible for the character to "eat" and "sleep" both! (Hint: he just doesn't do those at the same time.)
I still feel nothing....wait...
No still nothing.
This was your defense, Timo. It's so far removed from making sense I just don't care how you rationalize it. But I know it always starts with some interpretation which I have no use for

And that's a plot point rather than a plot hole: nuSpock is being an emotion-driven idiot. This is a key element in driving the plot forward, as oldSpock then prompts Kirk to strike back at Spock through this fact. So where's the problem?
You are so confused, Timo.:rommie:
I didn't say it was a plot hole...not ever...
You are so driven to defend this film beyond rational standards. You joyfully leaped to this task. The words just ...blurr together for you. You must just be incest with the idea that someone has shot up your favorite film and left it to bleed out the stupidity. You need me to be enraged because that makes sense to you as to why I don't heap glowing approval and praise on your BELOVED....Get a grip man....It's just a movie.
Oh, okay, I get what you mean. But the stupidity doesn't detract from the plot,
I didn't say it detracted from anything other than it's intelligence.


Nothing prompts them to go, either. Vulcan is already destroyed. So your objection makes no sense - there isn't a scene where we should see Spock struggling towards the outpost but don't.
I beg to differ, your objection makes no sense.
Freezing temperatures is more than enough reason.

Why do you say it didn't work? Because it didn't work in your head? It worked in the movie just fine.
Yes, but it shouldn't have.
Throwing out your engine which is keeping you away from being swallowed is stupid.


(* save for the remarks and insults, but consider it a process of civil de-escalation: there's a lot less there than in your previous post, and I hope to keep reducing even further if I get a comparable response.)
Timo, your replies are sad. really sad. Granted you go through a lot of effort to come to them but your confusion and obsessiveness is over the top. But I'm giving you the rope and you decide when you're done choking.

I'm not a huge fan of popular movies mis-educating people when it comes to basic scientific principles.

That's what it comes down too...
MIS-EDUCATING PEOPLE...
 
Timo, your replies are sad. really sad. Granted you go through a lot of effort to come to them but your confusion and obsessiveness is over the top. But I'm giving you the rope and you decide when you're done choking.
I am befuddled by this statement and your tirade as a whole. Your actions bare striking similarity to those of which you've accused Timo.

You censure Trek09 for doing the exact same things you praise in past films. This seems a lot like obsessive confusion to me.

I gave up the wall of text tango long ago, but someone has cued the band and pointed me in your direction. I'm tempted to grab a rose and have a go.

But if you'd rather just stay home and play Hangman, we can do that too. There's still plenty of rope left.
 
Timo, your replies are sad. really sad. Granted you go through a lot of effort to come to them but your confusion and obsessiveness is over the top. But I'm giving you the rope and you decide when you're done choking.
I am befuddled by this statement and your tirade as a whole. Your actions bare striking similarity to those of which you've accused Timo.

You censure Trek09 for doing the exact same things you praise in past films. This seems a lot like obsessive confusion to me.

I gave up the wall of text tango long ago, but someone has cued the band and pointed me in your direction. I'm tempted to grab a rose and have a go.

But if you'd rather just stay home and play Hangman, we can do that too. There's still plenty of rope left.

Does it really matter?
Will explaining it further really change your mind? Doubtful. Don't worry about. I don't. But those that have a problem with the critique are welcome to try and isolate any mistakes. But so far no one has made used of the oh so inconvenient definition but I. It's strangely missing from all their arguments. I however posted and I standby it...
 
Does it really matter?
Does what matter? Oh, wait. Let me guess. You're being profound?

Will explaining it further really change your mind?
Is there something wrong with the one I have?

Don't worry about. I don't.
Worry about what? My car insurance? Global Climate Change? Joe Mauer's batting average? :confused:

But those that have a problem with the critique are welcome to try and isolate any mistakes.
You mean aside from the assortment of chocolate-covered gaffs already provided by several of our prestigious members? Confections are good for the soul. Accept them with delight.

But so far no one has made used of the oh so inconvenient definition but I.
So, like, I've TOTALLY read this 47 times and I'm still righteously confuzzled! What does that even mean, yo?

It's strangely missing from all their arguments. I however posted and I standby it...
Again, what the hell are you standing by--a drunken mime playing shuffleboard with a woodchuck?

I think you're confused by the state of the thread, so let me recap:
I called you a hypocrite. You retorted with a nonsensical collection of cyphered "words" arranged in "sentences" for which I apparently lack the proper decoder ring.

Despite warnings, I came looking to direct this cacophony of fart noises back into something resembling the chorus of [semi] intelligent debate. Instead I've been delegated to troll grunting back behind the percussion. Thanks.

I shall heed the concerns of others next time. C'est la vie.

Though I cannot leave without bestowing some advice.

You must just be incest with the idea that someone has shot up your favorite film
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Okay. Bored now.
 
Kirk: S-S-Spock, why didn't you jump in?

Spock: I was trying to understand the meaning of the words.

McCoy: AHH! It's a song you green-blooded - Vulcan. The words aren't important. What's important is you have a good time singing!
 
Saquist said:
He's waited 20 years and did absoultely ...nothing...

(Because he's not sane)

No, because he did not yet have the red matter. If you missed that part of the plot it doesn't bode well for your stance against the film.

Saquist said:
SO...if NERO's motivation for revenge was loss of familly then given the opportunity to change the past and stop that cause from killing his family is the logical character direction.

Which he announces his intent to do in explicit dialogue, so that's not a problem.

Saquist said:
That's why I said this movie seems to have been lost in the details. Very simple corrections could have filled in the gaps...just slight changes in dialogue...It's like they knew the errors were there but because of the Strike they had to go with what they had especially when time was running short.

But the situation with Nero and Hobus is not any kind of error in need of "correction", just an instance where you didn't get the focus that you wanted.
 
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No, because he did not yet have the red matter. If you missed that part of the plot it doesn't bode well for your stance against the film.

If it serves your argument to believe I missed the obvious so be it. However I know that I did not. But if you were attempting to be accurate rather than rattling colloquial understandings of what "absolutely nothing" means then you'd understand the statement.

Saquist said:
SO...if NERO's motivation for revenge was loss of familly then given the opportunity to change the past and stop that cause from killing his family is the logical character direction.

Which he announces his intent to do in explicit dialogue, so that's not a problem.
He never says he wants to save his family and more to the point he never does anything toward that goal.


But the situation with Nero and Hobus is not any kind of error in need of "correction", just an instance where you didn't get the focus that you wanted.

Thanks for giving a bold declaration rather than any explicit explication. But the first thing you should do is overview what is a plot hole.

A plot hole, or plothole, is a gap or inconsistency in a storyline that goes against the flow of logic established by the story's plot, or constitutes a blatant omission of relevant information regarding the plot. These include such things as unlikely behaviour or actions of characters, illogical or impossible events, events happening for no apparent reason, or statements/events that contradict earlier events in the storyline.

1. (n.) A rough spot in a storyline; a storyline that doesn't quite work, like a pothole is to a road.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PlotHole
Plot Holes are those annoying gaps in a story where things happen without a logical reason. When a Plot Hole involves something essential to a story's outcome, it can hurt the believability severely for those who are bothered by it. Hitting a Plot Hole at high speed can damage your Willing Suspension of Disbelief.

*Characters suddenly having knowledge that was never passed to them, or vice versa; characters not knowing something they knew last week, or something that anyone in their position must know.

*Characters acting completely out of character.

*An event does not logically follow from what has gone before.

*Characters ignoring or avoiding obvious solutions to their problems, provided those solutions are obvious to the characters, and not just the viewers.

*An event occurring that, given other details present in the work, is not possible.

Note that a Plot Hole is inherently a contradiction. A Plot element that is merely left unexplained is not a Plot Hole unless its occurrence is impossible according to the setting's rules.
 
Saquist said:
If it serves your argument to believe I missed the obvious so be it. However I know that I did not.

Right.:rommie: You said he did nothing for "20 years" because he was not sane, and you failed to mention the real reason. Now why would anyone assume that you missed something?

Saquist said:
Thanks for giving a bold declaration rather than any explicit explication

How does one make "there is no error" any more explicit? The point is that you failed to identify any actual error in the Nero/Hobus material - it's apparently all about something you wanted to see but didn't, which is not an error.

Saquist said:
He never says he wants to save his family and more to the point he never does anything toward that goal.

This is becoming increasingly nonsensical. It's too late to save his family in the Prime, but he does indeed say that he intends to prevent the destruction of Romulus in the Abramsverse, which would save the eventual Abramsverse version of his family, for whatever that's worth. And he has 130 years to do it, so it's not something he would have to do within the timeframe of the film, while we see him acquire the red matter which would be crucial toward that goal.

These include such things as unlikely behaviour or actions of characters, illogical or impossible events, events happening for no apparent reason, or statements/events that contradict earlier events in the storyline.

Exactly none of which apply to the Nero/Hobus situation.
 
Right.:rommie: You said he did nothing for "20 years" because he was not sane, and you failed to mention the real reason. Now why would anyone assume that you missed something?

No reason was ever given that I'm aware of.


Saquist said:
Thanks for giving a bold declaration rather than any explicit explication

How does one make "there is no error" any more explicit? The point is that you failed to identify any actual error in the Nero/Hobus material - it's apparently all about something you wanted to see but didn't, which is not an error.
That's up to you to fully develop your case.
If that's all you think you need to say then it ends there.



This is becoming increasingly nonsensical.
Dismissed.
It's too late to save his family in the Prime, but he does indeed say that he intends to prevent the destruction of Romulus in the Abramsverse, which would save the eventual Abramsverse version of his family, for whatever that's worth.
Where?

Exactly none of which apply to the Nero/Hobus situation.

I understand that's your belief.
 
It's too late to save his family in the Prime, but he does indeed say that he intends to prevent the destruction of Romulus in the Abramsverse, which would save the eventual Abramsverse version of his family, for whatever that's worth.
Where?.
Nero wife (and family?) were blown apart with Romulus.

When Kirk was sent to an alternate universe during TOS he made finding a way back his top priority. When Kirk's timeline was changed, he traveled back in time to before the change to set it right and then return to his own time.

Nero's apparent position is that "Well my families dead, I'll just get a new one?" Even though he knows for a fact that the red matter he possesses has the potential to send him back in time prior to the diversion in the timeline (Kirk in COTEOF), this would put him in a position to destroy the star that would supernova, thereby saving his actual family.

Once back in the prime universe, any "revenge" he enacted in the alternate against Vulcan and Earth would be meaningless, because Vulcan and Earth would continue to exist unharmed in the prime universe.

:)
 
But going back further would just create another division. His mere presence would alter the flow of history. It would be another alternate reality.
 
Really Nero doomed his family to never have existed.
Once he attacked the Kelvin his family likely did not follow the previous flow from the Prime universe.. The Romulans were known to the Federation by appearnce. He double doomed his family.

He could have saved his family by literally having little to do with this time. Find Spock, deliver the package to the Hobus star and he and Spock find a way back to the Prime Universe. Alls well it ends well. (since Spock should at least remember Sling Shot Time Travel.)

(Nero having the ability to know when Spock would arrive gives him far too much intelligence than a common Romulan miner)
 
He could have saved his family by literally having little to do with this time. Find Spock, deliver the package to the Hobus star and he and Spock find a way back to the Prime Universe. Alls well it ends well. (since Spock should at least remember Sling Shot Time Travel.)

Too bad though that he stumbles over the Kelvin.


(Nero having the ability to know when Spock would arrive gives him far too much intelligence than a common Romulan miner)

25 years of (perhaps) trial and error and advanced computer abilities and calculating and... waiting... don't count?
 
We've seen the kind of schooling Vulcan children get. Why assume even a Romulan miner can't be well educated too? From the movie we get:
-He calculated Spock's arrival point and time (expanded upon in deleted scenes, where we see his detailed notes)
-He's a student of Earth's history (he recognized Kirk and read him his Prime biography)
-He was keeping track of the changing timeline (he knew George Kirk died during the Kelvin incident)

So really we have only Saquist's assumption that Nero "should" be less intelligent than he is. Because he's a miner and all miners have to be stupid.
 
He could have saved his family by literally having little to do with this time. Find Spock, deliver the package to the Hobus star and he and Spock find a way back to the Prime Universe. Alls well it ends well. (since Spock should at least remember Sling Shot Time Travel.)

Too bad though that he stumbles over the Kelvin.


(Nero having the ability to know when Spock would arrive gives him far too much intelligence than a common Romulan miner)

25 years of (perhaps) trial and error and advanced computer abilities and calculating and... waiting... don't count?

&

So really we have only Saquist's assumption that Nero "should" be less intelligent than he is. Because he's a miner and all miners have to be stupid.


Exactly. Not to mention the rest of his crew. The fact that Nero's ship is a mining vessel does not, in one single way, shape or form, mean that neither he or one of his crew would know any of this stuff. I really hope Saquist doesn't think this way about people of different trades in real life, that would be kind of insulting. "Hey, because you chose to do this for a living means you know nothing else but this!"
 
We've seen the kind of schooling Vulcan children get. Why assume even a Romulan miner can't be well educated too?

We assume this because he refers to himself as a simple or just a minor himself. Romulans have not shown the discipline in this film of a high average standard. Since we're not told we do not assume in contradiction to his own self description.


From the movie we get:
-He calculated Spock's arrival point and time (expanded upon in deleted scenes, where we see his detailed notes)
-He's a student of Earth's history (he recognized Kirk and read him his Prime biography)
-He was keeping track of the changing timeline (he knew George Kirk died during the Kelvin incident)

This is about plots Daniel. That means I can only infer what has been included in the medium that everyone that saw the film was privy to...the most general and unilateral understanding of movie.

I haven't seen deleted scenes
I haven't bought DVD's....
If these scenes were deemed necessary to the plot (logically by the editors) they would have INCLUDED them.
But since they didn't, it's not actually part of the story-telling process, nor or different mediums like the books or the story-tellers after thoughts or pre-thoughts. We can only judge the completed project of what he offered to everyone, not the further interest of officiants and such.
 
Even without the deleted scenes we have Ayel saying, "We've arrived at the coordinates you calculated." Therefore the point is still 100% valid.
 
Saquist said:
We assume this because he refers to himself as simple or just a miner himself
No, he says "I chose a life of honest labour" and "In my time, this is a simple mining vessel". You're confusing the two.
 
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