Finally finished The Last Best Hope earlier today. This must be the longest time it’s ever taken me to finish a Trek novel. At times I thought about giving up on it, but I would nibble a bit, and kept nibbling, until I finally got hooked enough to finish.
Now that it’s done, I think it turned out to be a better set up for PIC’s first season than I initially thought it would be. I found the second half of the book, especially the last third, “The Last” to be the strongest and I’m glad I toughed it out to get there.
My issues with the book weren’t the writing. More so the pacing and the lack of action, many memorable/likable new characters, and Picard and especially Geordi acting out of character. Arguably McCormack is the best when it comes to handling Trek politics. I enjoyed Brinksmanship a lot and her post-Dominion War Cardassian novel wasn’t bad either. One of the standout characters in Hope was the opportunistic Councilor Quest. It would be nice to see this character in live-action or to see her resurface in future PIC novels or comics. What I liked best about Quest was she wasn’t an outright villain, certainly she was antagonistic and opportunistic, and with an edge of xenophobia, but she also had some legit, or legit enough arguments, concerning the Federation neglecting its smaller member worlds, especially the ones along the Romulan Neutral Zone. I also liked that book provided more grist for why Clancy and Raffi both had issues with Picard.
I thought the depiction of Geordi, early in the book, didn’t feel right. He didn’t talk like that on TNG/movies, and I also felt that Picard also felt too at times, not sure how to describe it, too gooey and romanticizing when it came to Zani and his Verity crew. I had to keep in mind that this book isn’t a TNG novel but one that sets up PIC and the changed circumstances and characters for that series. So, the idea that Picard would seek out Zani as opposed to Dr. Crusher, or even that they wouldn't have him seek Troi out more for counseling (I’m guessing they didn’t want to tip their hand her about the PIC episode “Nepenthe”) didn’t sit right with me but seeing the first season it works better for PIC and the immense disappointment some had endured at Picard’s hand. I still find it hard to buy that Picard would not reach out to Zani or others in 14 years (even the end of the book, which just dump in Laris, Zhaban, and Number One, who is a gift from unnamed friends, undercuts that Picard was such a hermit, sulking over his colossal failure). I wish we had gotten more of Laris and Zhaban and that the novel had lined up with the Countdown comic better.
While I appreciated how McCormack handled the politics and provided some balance to the pro-relief mission and anti-relief mission sides of the argument, I thought the book was too lacking in world building. I don’t blame McCormack there. Not sure how much the show creators/CBS would allow her to explore, or even if they had fleshed it out themselves.
I was left wondering what happened with the Remans or any of the other subject species (I’m glad the Countdown comic touched on that)? I also wish we had gotten more info on how the other powers were reacting. I was happy that Picard mentioned suggesting reaching out to the Klingons and Cardassians toward the end of the book. It was a bone, but a welcome one.
The Maddox/Jurati scenes were a chore often, but by the end, I grew to better appreciate Maddox’s obsession. I do wish the option to use holograms had been discussed, at least once in the novel or on the show. I also thought the Dr. Safadi scenes were mostly superfluous; the Nokim Vritet scenes felt more germane to the story. I wasn’t a fan of Estella Mackenzie who was too abrasive. I wouldn’t have minded seeing a familiar Trek engineer like Torres, O’Brien, or one of the several that were on the Enterprise-D in this role, that is until the end. I thought McCormack did a good job having Geordi’s grief for those lost on Mars, as best symbolized by his friendship with Mackenzie.
I will never care for Raffi calling Picard “JL”, and while I liked the relationship that McCormack developed between the two, the informality still feels artificial to me.
I am glad we got a bit with Spock, I was wondering what had happened to him. I do wish we had gotten another scene with him working on the Jellyfish (hopefully they will keep the Countdown idea that Geordi built it).
I did like the peek at Romulan culture we got. I had read Chabon’s notes on Romulan culture a while back and I wasn’t expecting that the some of that would be in the novel so that was neat.
Overall, I felt the novel lacked some much needed action. I also wish there had been more physical descriptions. The ‘northerner’ label is used but that’s not even described. I’ve read the Countdown comic, but I wish we had gotten a better description of the Verity in the novel. I also wish more of the Verity crew had been introduced/fleshed out.
In the third of the book as I inched toward the conclusion, I started to grasp that Last Best Hope was a major tragedy (rare for a Trek novel). I thought the resignation scene was handled quite well. Picard was too self-righteous, too arrogant, too idealistic, and too out of touch, but his compassion for the Romulans was also noble and to abandon them was an abdication of Federation values. I don’t know if the tragedy could’ve been prevented, but if Picard had had a defter touch at politics or diplomacy along the way perhaps there would’ve been fewer people opposed to scrapping the mission, then again, perhaps the winds of change (which don’t always blow in a positive direction) were against him and there was little he could do about it. And he also had every right to be upset that he was the mission was being shut down after Starfleet Command had asked him to leave the Enterprise-E, to upend his life, for it.