No Spoilers here... from me.
But, I'm sorry this a STAR TREK book...I agree with
@Avro Arrow
The language was uncharacteristic and COMPLETELY UNNECESSARY to the story. I'm truly sorry. There were too many 17 S--Ts and 19 F---Ks for my taste. The language wasn't limited to Clancy's character at all.
It reminded me of a Wiseguy story. I hate saying this honestly. I hated it in 1990 when someone actually counted the swear words in Goodfellas. That was stupid. It is a crime and mafia movie. What did anyone expect?
Also using JL is annoying. Picard always commanded respect and JL makes Picard sound like foolish. Q could rib Picard.
Honestly, most of this novel should have been SHOWN in the first few episodes. If you watch the first three episodes closely you could pick up most of the story in Last, Best Hope.
I'm sorry I'm not trying to be a Gooder or a Snob. But Trek is Trek
I didnt buy Picard giving up HIS RANK and the Enterprise so easily and stupidly. Riker kept the Titan as his flagship, Picard could too. The Admirality rank felt forced and neutered without power at all. Rank should have its preveileges after all. The Admirality lied to Picard about giving up the Enterprise as his flagship anyway. Admirals in Starfleet are mostly seen as JERKS that interfere with Captain's anyway.
But regardless, Ianguage aside. I hope its a success, and never want anyone to fail at all.
It completely pulled me out of the story, instead of engrossing me into the story after all. I wanted to know more of the Picard series story.
I'm still a Trek fan, but this is beyond weird as far as language and prose go.
Now excuse as I go all hardcore before going to the Laundrette as Simon Pegg said in the movie "The Fantastic Fear of Everything"
Honestly, I hope you enjoy it more than I tried to.
Sorry,
-Koric