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Nemesis: Revisited

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Lieutenant
Red Shirt
This is my version of what Nemesis should have been.
I do not own the rights to any of the characters depicted in this story, save for those of my own creation.



What follows is a teaser of sorts.

Transporting between parallel universes was not at all similar to beaming from one ship to another, but, of course, Sela hadn’t expected it to be. However, it was completely unlike anything she could have anticipated. Instead of the familiar soft fade of static and the cool, numb feeling of a standard Romulan transporter, she experienced a most unpleasant grinding and scraping sensation, like being pushed between colliding tectonic plates. But in a few seconds it was gone and she stood in a dank hallway, flanked by her two trans-universal partners in crime.

Security on the outlying planets in the region of space formerly known as the Cardassian Union had become quite lax during the postwar Reconstruction, and Sela and her companions had been able to slip onto a small M-class undetected. Intelligence they had gathered on the mirror universe had indicated that this planet’s counterpart was a penal colony run by the Cardassian-KIingon Alliance, and was rumored to house a certain prisoner who would be Sela’s ticket back onto Romulus, and, perhaps, into the senate itself.

Sela nodded to her comrades, one a Klingon, named Duroq; the other a Cardassian who called himself Raalick. They were both dressed in some approximation of Alliance uniforms, while Sela wore not but a large, uncomfortable bag, with holes for her arms and head and legs, so as to look a prisoner. She had completed the disguise moments before transport by punching herself repeatedly in the nose, much to Raalick’s surprise and Duroq’s amusement, until her face was sufficiently moist with green blood. At her command, the two hulking aliens each grabbed on of her arms forcefully.

“Let’s go,” she said, with what she would later admit to herself was a slight hint of apprehension. The three of them walked down the hall and turned left, and came upon a guard shack that looked as if it had been shoved into the hallway as an afterthought. The frustrated looking Cardassian guard peered up from his station behind a force field and regarded them blankly.

“We’ve just caught this Romulan,” blurted thick Duroq. The guard looked around at the walls and ceiling, and then back at Duroq quizzically.

“Did you capture her inside the prison?” the guard said sarcastically. Duroq was clearly confused. “Are you new here, or just stupid? The prisoners are captured long before they find their way he--” He was cut off by Duroq’s disruptor beam through his chest, but he only half dissolved, as the disruptor was old and in need of repair. Sela ripped herself free of their giant hands and sighed in annoyance.

“So much for plan A,” she said to Duroq, gesturing to her bloodied face, as if to say “I did all this for nothing”.

The bear-like Klingon squirmed, then finally spat, “Cardassians have no honor.”

“Hmm, indeed,” said Sela. “Kill him, Raalick.” She turned away from Duroq.

“With pleasure,” Raalick beamed as he shot poor, dumb Duroq into oblivion.

The Romulan and the Cardassian had shot many more guards when they came at last to cell #1187Q. Sela gestured, and Raalick deactivated the force field with a pilfered keycard. The gaunt, spidery figure huddled in the corner of the dark, closet-like cell quivered as he lifted his bald, pink head to see the two of them. He looked at Raalick first and, not realizing he was an impostor, shouted defiantly, “There are FOUR lights!!”

“Jean-Luc Picard,” Sela smiled and stepped forward, catching the impossibly skinny, naked man’s attention, “We’re here to rescue you.”
 
Interesting. A bit confusing due to a lack of backstory, but hey, it's a teaser, right? :) More, please.
 
I think I'll be posting stuff in small chunks as I write it.


They had to carry the man named Picard, an impossibly slender arm slung over each of their shoulders, most of the way back to the transporter they had come in on, as he had quickly fainted from what were clearly the effects of malnutrition. Sela and Raalick stopped at the glowing, red alcove and slumped him onto the pad. The Cardassian removed a small, patched-together looking device from a pouch on his belt and attached it to the transporter’s control pad.

Ten seconds later they were in Raalick’s shuttle, back in their native universe. The pink, crumpled human at their feet had been jostled out of weary sleep by the effects of the unusual transport, and he looked up, again seeing Raalick first. Suddenly he bolted to the front of the small shuttle, and almost sat on the brown control console. He stared at Raalick in defiance once more, and puffed “There are..four.. lights...” then colapsed into a rolling, padded chair.

Sela stepped off the green transporter pad. “Raalick, my friend,” she said, smirking, as she turned towards the Cardassian, “it has been a pleasure working with you.” Her hand barely left her hip as poor Duroq’s ancient dispruptor pistol shot a hole through Raalick’s stomach the size of a large dinner plate, which almost caused him to break in half as he fell to the bulkhead, Cardassian blood gurgling out of his shocked mouth. “You’re safe now,” said Sela as she joined Picard in front of the unpolished console.

Picard studied her face as she sat on the conole, facing the back of the shuttle. “Vulcan?” he ventured.

“Romulan,” she corrected. He grunted in disbeleive.

“The Romulans are all extict,” he said with what must have passed for laughter after spending ten years in the Cardassian-Klingon penal system.

“Not in this universe,” said Sela.

“What?” Picard wondered to himself as Sela sat on a grey stool and pressed some switches, starting up the shuttle. Lights all around them came on, joined by a rising, artificial hum. Picard saw that there were branches layed thick across the front viewport, but they sloughed off as Sela took the shuttle up and out of a yellow forest. The trees and hills dissapeared bellow as the shuttle broke atmosphere and went to warp.


Three Month Later

“Engage,” said Captain Picard to a rise of knowing laughter from the several dozen seated wedding guests. Upon this tounge-in-cheek command, William Riker bent to kiss his new bride, Dianna Troi.

Later, at the reception, which was held at the largest of the Giunan’s chain of resuraunts, Ambassador Worf sat awkwardly on a bar stool, lamenting the dire security situation on the ever receding Romulan-Klingon border.

“..and I fear that Chancellor Martok will take advantage of the Romulan’s weakening grasp on their teritories closest to the Klingon border,” he huffed.

“Worf,” said Giunan, “there are only two rules at my place: Have a good time, and don’t discuss politics. And you’re breaking both of them.” Worf shifted in his formal Klingon ambassadorial attire. “Here,” said the bartender, with a freshly replicated beverage in her hand, “have some prune juice.” She handed it to Worf and he downed half of it in one swallow.
 
Excellent story!

The only quibble is - is Sela now alone w/Picard with her henchmen dead or just one is kaput?
 
Across the vast ballroom of a restaurant, Dr. Beverly Crusher stood on the dark green carpet, an island among conversing wedding guests. She took small sips from a glass, and brushed idly at the shoulder of her blindingly white Starfleet dress uniform.

She spied Jean-Luc through the crowd. Their eyes met, and then quickly parted. They had both been avoiding talking to each other, as Beverly was due to start at Starfleet Medical after the wedding party had returned from Betazed, and neither one of them wanted to acknowledge her departure from the Enterprise. Beverly had informed him of her new position via subspace memo, which she regretted, and she realized now that they hadn’t actually talked since then.

“Doctor,” said a familiar voice. She turned to look, and it was Miles O’Brian, the transporter chief from the Enterprise D.

“Chief,” she said with a smile and a nod. “How are you these days?”

“Oh,” said Miles with a chortle, “I’m terrific. How about yourself?”

“Good,” she said. “I’m good. Let me ask you something. I understand you’ve been teaching at the Academy, is that correct?”

“Yeah.”

“How is tha... Do you like it?” said Beverly with a small, polite wince.

“Why, certainly,” said Miles. “I mean, at first the cadets got on my nerves a bit, but then I just thought back to my Academy days, and remembered my old professors and how they dealt with us. And it’s just something you get used to, I suppose.”

“How was it for you adapting to civilian life after being in Starfleet?” she asked, and realized it made her sound like she was conducting an interview.

“Well,” said Miles, “like a said, it takes some getting used to, but I have Keiko and the kids with me, so it’s fine.”

“It’s just,” Beverly hesitated, “I’ve just accepted a position at Starfleet Medical.."

“Oh. Well, congratulations,” said Miles.

“Thank you. Anyway, I’ve just accepted this position, and I.. never mind. Are Keiko and the kids here?”

“Oh, yeah,” Miles turned and looked over at his wife, flanked by their two children, just a few meters away talking to Mr. Mot. “Say hi to doctor Crusher, kids.” Kirayoshi waved rapidly and greeted Beverly loudly, while Molly did a subtle hand gesture and hid behind her mother. “Come on, now, Molly, say hello.” Molly disappeared further behind Keiko. Miles grunted bemusedly and turned back to Beverly. “Teenagers, you know.”

“Yeah.” Beverly suddenly thought about her own child, Wesley, who was certainly much older than a teenager at this point, although she wasn’t sure if age applied to... whatever it was he had become when he had gone off to explore the universe with the Traveler.

Back at the bar, Lieutenant Ro Laren was helping Worf break Guinan’s second rule.

“..and I’ve heard reports from Bolarus that the Breen are sniffing around the upper region of the Neutral Zone, and perhaps even farther into Romulan space,” she said, a glass in her hand and a bent elbow on the bar top.

“Unfortunately, the Romulans have been refusing to communicate with the Federation or the Klingon Empire,” said Worf.

“Or anyone, for that matter.”

“I imagine the Breen would be equally reluctant to talk, as well,” Worf said with a sigh.

Ro regarded the Klingon. “Well, mr. Ambassador, it sounds to me like this job is starting to take it’s toll on you.”

Worf grumbled in denial. “I will admit,” he said, “I did not fully consider all the, duties that I would be bound to. I am a member of the House of Martok, therefore the Federation expects me to talk the Chancellor out of what ever they see as negative for the quadrant, while at the same time Martok expects me to side with him on every issue. This situation with the Romulans may be...” he shook off his doubt. “It is trying, but what is life without challenge?”

“I’ll toast to that,” Ro smiled, and their glasses clinked. She had recently been made Chief of Security and Tactical officer on the bridge of the Enterprise, upon special request from Captain Picard. He had found her ten months after the end of the Dominion War, working on an Orion pleasure cruiser, “providing security,” she had insisted. The cruiser had fired upon the Enterprise, instigating a battle that ultimately brought about the Orion vessel’s destruction, but not before Ro had managed to stow away on Picard’s ship. He had taken pity on her, and, amid protestation from then Commander Riker, offered her a position on the bridge after she had reentered Starfleet, which was made possible by two key factors: another former Maquis, a Captain Chakotay, had a good rapport with a highly regarded and influential Admiral; and, in the aftermath of the War, Starfleet was taking just about anyone they could get to fill empty positions.
 
“Captain. Counselor,” said Picard as he approached the newlywed couple. Captain Riker smiled broadly. He and Deanna both opened their mouths to speak.

“Captain,” they said together on accident, then looked at each other and laughed merrily. Picard allowed himself a chuckle.

“So, Number One, the Titan,” said Picard, gesturing towards his former executive officer with the glass in his hand.

“Yes, the Titan. First of her kind,” Riker said.

“So I’ve heard. Are you sure you can handle an NX?”

“You know me, Captain. I’m ready for anything.”

“Indeed. Have you found a first officer?”

“Not yet. I was just promoted two weeks ago. And I haven’t even seen the ship yet. It’s all happening a bit fast, I suppose.”

“You know, Will, I know of a certain Betazoid counselor who holds the rank of commander, and, conveniently enough, you happen to have your arm around her,” Picard said. All three of them laughed.

“You know, I hadn’t considered that, to tell you the truth. But now that you mention it, I can’t think of anyone better suited for the job,” said Riker as he lowered is face to kiss Deanna. Picard smiled, then caught Beverly’s gaze across the crowd again, and again they quickly parted eyes. Deanna looked at him, and then across at Beverly.

“Captain,” she said, putting on her counselor hat now. “You’re having a difficult time with Beverly’s move to Starfleet Medical.” Picard pointed to his nose quickly. “Have you told her how you feel?”

“I will handle it in my own time,” He said, wanting very much not to discuss it.

“You know what’s best for you,” said the counselor. Then, with a hand on Picard’s arm, “you should talk to her. Waiting won’t make it easier.” Picard turned away and took a swig from his glass.

“Mr. Mot!” he said with a sudden smile as he walked away. Deanna put on a concerned face and looked at her husband.
 
The next day, somewhere between the Gorn Hegemony and the Tholian Assembly.


“Thomas, your program is on,” said Tok. The Ferengi turned to look at his human associate, who had now entered the bridge of the formerly derelict Breen scout ship they had stolen from a Cardassian ship yard some years ago.

“Excellent,” said Thomas as he took a seat and looked at the viewscreen, which was displaying the image of a Bolian anchor for the Federation News Network.

“I’m going to run a systems diagnostic on the warp coils,” said Tok, exiting to the rear of the ship. He never understood why Thomas insisted on watching the FNN report every day. At first he assumed it was to keep track of potential profit opportunities, but that didn’t seem to be the case.

There was a story on a thwarted terrorist attack by anti-Federation Bajoran militants at the decommissioning ceremony of the USS Galaxy, an update on the mayoral elections on Cardassia, and an interview with a Vulcan diplomat, who talked about the strange lack of contact with the Romulan Star Empire over the last two months.

“In lighter news,” the anchor said, “Captain William Riker, commanding officer of the newly completed USS Titan, the first in the state-of-the-art Titan class of starships, was married yesterday to Commander Deanna Troi.” Thomas’ hands became fists. “The ceremony began on Earth on the northwestern continent, before the wedding party departed on for Betazed, as the bride is a Betazoid.”

They cut to a short clip of Riker being interviewed. “I can’t wait to get back and see my new ship. It’s still waiting for me at Utopia Planitia, if you can believe that!” The news anchor appeared again.

“I am Brim Wilot, wishing the happy couple a safe journey and all of you a good night.” Thomas, who was standing now, hit the control console with both of his tight fists and the transmission shut off. He spun around and leaned on he edge of console rigidly. He thought for a long while, staring stricken at the rusted bulkhead under his feet his feet.

“Tok!” shouted Thomas, raising his head. His associate came to the front of the ship quickly.

“What is it?” croaked the Ferengi.

“We’re going to the Sol system,” said Thomas, with a look of purpose in his eyes that made Tok uneasy.
 
Say, I'm liking this. In a more polished form, the idea behind this would have been MUCH better for Nemesis... MU fans would have gotten their mirror movie and DS9 fans would have gotten a little interest there too.

Keep going!

:rommie:
 
Just a quick note- an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I can see some interesting future meetings between some characters.
 
Thank you everybody for reading and liking my work. I will post some more soon. I know that the next scene I want to write involves Data and Geordi, I just haven't decided what they'll be doing/talking about.
 
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