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My Review: "Enterprises Of Great Pitch And Moment"

JeremyW

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So, after a lengthy time to wait, and more 404 errors than you can count, I finally managed to download the other day KRAD's entry in the TNG Slings And Arrows series, entitled Enterprises Of Great Pitch And Moment. The premise to the book is simple: the Federation has elected Min Zife of Bolarus as their President, and his first order of business is to normalize relations with the Klingon Empire and to do that, one has to convince Gowron that peace between the two powers is better than war, especially with the Dominion on their backs. (There are other reasons as to why peace with Qo'Nos was better than war; I invite those who are interested in reading the Decline and Fall of the Zife Administration to read A Time To Kill, A Time To Heal, A Time For War; A Time For Peace, and for a nice epilogue, read Articles of The Federation. For those of you that have, it's old news) Anyways, so with this first mandate, Picard's summoned to the house of the Federation Council and is met by Koll Azernal and ordered to meet Gowron, since Picard was the one who, under his authority as Arbiter of Succession, installed Gowron as Chancellor of the Klingon Empire. He was also told he'd be working with Captain Sisko of Deep Space Nine, a man that Picard had a history with, considering that as Locutus of Borg, Picard killed Sisko's wife, Jennifer, at Wolf 359.

On Deep Space Nine, Sisko is given similar orders because it was Sisko and his covert team that found and destroyed the Founder impersonating Martok at Ty'Gokor, so Gowron has a level of trust and respect for these two men. Sisko also learns he has to work with Picard, and isn't overly thrilled about it. The Enterprise arrives at DS9, the two crews brief, they head to preliminary meeting, and are told to meet Gowron in the Badlands, and to come in a shuttle, not the Defiant, the captains consent and make the rendez-vous, and then Something Really Bad Happens, and it's up to Worf and Data to save their captain's lives, while exposing the truth behind this meeting. In the end, you know things will turn out okay, but how you get there is all the fun in reading this book.

All in all, I enjoyed this short book. I will concede that I had thought ...Great Pitch and Moment would have been written in a style consistent with Keith's other works, and in particular, I expected something akin to A Time For War; A Time For Peace. However, when I realized how short the work was, I saw that it was a dumb hope, and shame on me for thinking so. Nevertheless, this book still rocked! Keith keeps the action going, and there's enough here to make it worth the time to read it (for the record, I read it in just under an hour). The pacing of the story is akin to that of a DS9 two-parter. The first part builds to where Something Bad Really Happens, and the second part would have been the resolution. The dialogue was on the ball, and Keith did a great job matching the characters on television to their literary counterparts. Reading Worf one could hear Worf (this was an obvious one), and Keith's had experience with Picard, so it was nothing to be surprised about there. This is a TNG story, but Keith did a fantastic job with the DS9 characters as well. For the short time they were in the story, I liked Dax and Kira. (I won't lie...I'm completely in love with the character of Kira Nerys, and when I get to read about Kira, I get giddy) The interaction with Sisko and Picard was spot on in that it felt choppy, and one would imagine that after the interaction we saw of them in Emissary, this was an inevitability. The two of them walk on eggshells around the other, and it's brilliant. The part that was interesting was that it was Picard who offered the first olive branch. Personally, I always thought it'd be Sisko. But, once they made some kind of peace, the captains worked well together. The funniest part was when Picard insisted on Sisko calling him "Jean Luc", Sisko's reply of, "Well, you can call me 'Captain Sisko'..." was nice. It reminded me of Kirk and Picard in Generations, albeit funnier.

Back on DS9, with Worf and Data working to rescue their captains, this part of the story was short (as to be expected), and the mystery wasn't all that indepth. Deep Space Nine fans will notice the similarities in this story and the mystery in The Darkness And The Light, and how both are resolved. I won't spoil it here. In the end, all's well, and the nice epilogue that segues into First Contact makes the Picard/Sisko relationship that much stronger, and gives this story proper closure.

The cameos were great, from Koll Azernal to Admiral Hayes, and even to Miranda Kadohata who we see now in Q&A and Before Dishonour. We get to visit some exiciting places, both old and new, and only fitting that this being a KRAD e-Book, we start in none other than the Palais de la Concorde. LOVED IT!!!!

Worth a second or third reading by far, anybody who has NOT yet read this, please do so.

Respectfully Submitted,

Jeremy W. Woolward
 
^ Thank you so much for the kind words, Jeremy! It was a lot of fun to do a full-bore TNG/DS9 crossover, of which there have been precious few. (The only other ones I can think of that really made use of both full crews working together were in comic book form.)

And writing Picard and Sisko was an absolute joy. I really regretted that we never saw those two great actors work together after "Emissary," as the screen just lit up in the two scenes they had together in that episode.
 
^ Thank you so much for the kind words, Jeremy! It was a lot of fun to do a full-bore TNG/DS9 crossover, of which there have been precious few. (The only other ones I can think of that really made use of both full crews working together were in comic book form.)

And writing Picard and Sisko was an absolute joy. I really regretted that we never saw those two great actors work together after "Emissary," as the screen just lit up in the two scenes they had together in that episode.

Couldn't help but wonder what First Contact would have been like if it had been Sisko in the movie as opposed to Worf...THAT would have been interesting.

But now, KRAD the great, I MUST ask: When oh WHEN is SOMEONE going to write the story about how the whole Tezwa crisis came to be? Sure, we know WHY, and we know WHO, and we know WHAT would happen....it's intriguing to know HOW it all came to be.

Oh, and probably the only thing that was missing from the story: an appearance by Klag. :lol: That would have been sweet.
 
^ We pretty much got most of it in Kill/Heal. And I made sure to set it up in Enterprises... with Azernal's line: "And contingency plans are in place—we simply prefer not to use them." :)
 
[But now, KRAD the great, I MUST ask: When oh WHEN is SOMEONE going to write the story about how the whole Tezwa crisis came to be?

David Mack wrote the story of how the Tezwa crisis came to be in 2004's A Time to Kill.

Sure, we know WHY, and we know WHO, and we know WHAT would happen....it's intriguing to know HOW it all came to be.

We know how. The Federation developed nadion pulse cannon weapons for use against the Borg during the Amitra and Jaresh-Inyo Administrations. Some time before the Klingon Empire and Federation re-allied with each other in mid-2373, Federation President Min Zife, Presidential Chief of Staff Koll Azernal, and Federation Secretary of Military Intelligence Nelino Quafina engaged in a criminal conspiracy to transfer a number of such nadion-pulse cannons into the custody of the Tezwan government led by Prime Minister Kinchawn, with the Orion Syndicate serving as the intermediaries. This was done as part of a plan to lure a large Dominion fleet to Tezwa to its doom should the war go badly.

Really, it wouldn't make for all that interesting of a story by itself. At best, it might make for interesting supplemental material to a future edition of A Time to Kill/A Time to Heal.
 
[But now, KRAD the great, I MUST ask: When oh WHEN is SOMEONE going to write the story about how the whole Tezwa crisis came to be?

David Mack wrote the story of how the Tezwa crisis came to be in 2004's A Time to Kill.

Sure, we know WHY, and we know WHO, and we know WHAT would happen....it's intriguing to know HOW it all came to be.
We know how. The Federation developed nadion pulse cannon weapons for use against the Borg during the Amitra and Jaresh-Inyo Administrations. Some time before the Klingon Empire and Federation re-allied with each other in mid-2373, Federation President Min Zife, Presidential Chief of Staff Koll Azernal, and Federation Secretary of Military Intelligence Nelino Quafina engaged in a criminal conspiracy to transfer a number of such nadion-pulse cannons into the custody of the Tezwan government led by Prime Minister Kinchawn, with the Orion Syndicate serving as the intermediaries. This was done as part of a plan to lure a large Dominion fleet to Tezwa to its doom should the war go badly.

Really, it wouldn't make for all that interesting of a story by itself. At best, it might make for interesting supplemental material to a future edition of A Time to Kill/A Time to Heal.

Maybe then I'm in the minority then...I read A Time To Kill and A Time To Heal some time ago, and yes, I'm fully aware of these things. Maybe not by itself it's not 'as interesting', but maybe I should have been a lot clearer. Maybe the more interesting story to tell is what drove the Federation to stoop to this level, and by just saying, 'The Dominion's stronger' is not a good enough excuse. Personally, I think there's a story to tell, but that's just me. Nevertheless, it doesn't detract from the reading of any of the stories. And I somehow missed Azernal's line there KRAD...maybe I should have put the disclaimer, "I may have read the book quickly (under an hour), and that was done at one o'clock in the morning." LOL...looks like I'm reading again. LOL
 
Maybe the more interesting story to tell is what drove the Federation to stoop to this level, and by just saying, 'The Dominion's stronger' is not a good enough excuse.

Well, I would suggest that what you'd want to see is not so much the details of how Zife and Company transferred custody of the guns to Tezwa, but, rather, how Min Zife managed to defeat Jaresh-Inyo in the 2372 Federation General Election.

Now that might make for an interesting story....!
 
Maybe the more interesting story to tell is what drove the Federation to stoop to this level, and by just saying, 'The Dominion's stronger' is not a good enough excuse.

Well, I would suggest that what you'd want to see is not so much the details of how Zife and Company transferred custody of the guns to Tezwa, but, rather, how Min Zife managed to defeat Jaresh-Inyo in the 2372 Federation General Election.

Now that might make for an interesting story....!

True that...I'll give you that one. In my own head, that's the thought. Sometimes, it doesn't come out all that clear when I write it, or I assume some people read minds (hoping to find the stray Betazoid here LOL). Apologies to all.
 
^ We dropped some hints about the election in Slings and Arrows, but we didn't get into major specifics, just the results. It might be fun to show that election and contrast it with the Bacco/Pagro race in A Time for War, a Time for Peace........ :)

Of course, the events of "Homefront"/"Paradise Lost" would play heavily in the campaigns of Jaresh-Inyo's opponents. :D
 
^ We dropped some hints about the election in Slings and Arrows, but we didn't get into major specifics, just the results. It might be fun to show that election and contrast it with the Bacco/Pagro race in A Time for War, a Time for Peace........ :)

Of course, the events of "Homefront"/"Paradise Lost" would play heavily in the campaigns of Jaresh-Inyo's opponents. :D

For those of us who don't have ebooks, could you summarize a few of the election clues you've dropped? :angel:
 
^ It wasn't really that much. Just a few mentions of the race here and there, with a bit more detail in Book 6, since it opens with Picard having a meeting at the Palais with Koll Azernal.
 
Hi,
I'm new in this forum, and I've been reading around and wondering where do you people post your stories? I've tried AC, Helium hubpages and what not. I absolutely hated them because they had poor fan fiction if you can call it that, and they pay miserably. I'm currently publishing all of my writing on Triond if anyone has herd of them I'd love some feedback. I'm not really a fan fiction writer, I just love to read it. heres a link to My Triond Profile. Take a look, I have some really funny stuff there. Anyways what I'm trying to say is that I make some great money from writing for Triond, they per page view and get me great promotion. What I would really like to see is the fan-fiction section filled with your stories.
Thanks
 
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Hi,
I'm new in this forum, and I've been reading around and wondering where do you people post your stories?

Most of the authors here have their stories published in New York by Pocket Books, a division of Simon & Schuster, one of the world's largest publishing companies.

I've tried AC, Helium hubpages and what not. I absolutely hated them because they had poor fan fiction if you can call it that, and they pay miserably. I'm currently publishing all of my writing on Triond if anyone has herd of them I'd love some feedback. I'm not really a fan fiction writer, I just love to read it. heres a link to My Triond Profile. Take a look, I have some really funny stuff there. Anyways what I'm trying to say is that I make some great money from writing for Triond, they per page view and get me great promotion. What I would really like to see is the fan-fiction section filled with your stories.
Thanks

This isn't a fan fiction forum. This is specifically for published, licensed Trek novels.
 
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