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My own reading Marathon, Fall through Coda

NStephenH

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Howdy y'all, I've been reading the post-voyager/DS9/nemesis novel-verse for a couple years now and wanted to join in the community.
I started the voyager novels in late 2022, then most of New Frontier in 2023 before jumping into DS9. After the soul key, I hopped over to "a time to" and am now 2/3rds of the way through cold equations. Voyager I've read through the eternal tide, and new frontier I just have blind man's bluff and the returned left.

I don't know that I can write up good reviews as Stevil2001 has in his marathon thread, but I figure I can log this both for my own progress and in case anyone else wants to follow along or is making their own attempt.

I'm also a contributor to character entries over at https://startrekreadingorder.com/, and I'll be adding appearances as I go. Let me know if I miss anything!

I am, for the most part, following the flow chart that spawned out of charting the novel-verse: https://www.thetrekcollective.com/p/trek-lit-reading-order.html

My next reads will be:
  1. The Body Electric
  2. The Stuff of Dreams
  3. The Fall
 
I'm as shocked as I am when I'm watching Jeopardy!, and something absurdly obvious to me ends up being a triple-stumper. I caught the allusion before I'd even bought a copy.
 
I seem to recall Body Electric being 'you're in for a treat' and 'the stuff of dreams' being... who do Starfleet think they are (a certain quote by Admiral Clancy about hubris comes to mind), but also fairly good with some strong concepts for its short length.

Be interested to hear your thoughts!
 
"The Body Electric" is now finished, thanks to a slow day at the counter running a riftbound launch event. As a given (and once I have the ability to edit posts I'll likely edit my first post to state this) there will be spoilers in my posts in this thread and I ask that people don't spoil anything I haven't read yet.

As I said in my introduction, I don't know that I'll have particularly in-depth reviews, and I describe how I read to my wife (who is much more analytical) as letting the story wash over me. I'm also not sure how much of a review I can write compared to restating the plot, but I can bring my highs and lows out.

The Body Electric by David Mack (and some thoughts on the trilogy of the whole)
Published December 2012

Part 3 of the Cold Equations trilogy, and a follow-up to "The Immortal Coil". I admittedly did not read The Immortal Coil though I think I picked up everything I needed to know from context over the trilogy. I enjoyed the premise of this book, and also that all 3 of the books in the trilogy could even be said to stand on their own with self-contained episodic narratives. The thing that stood out to me the most was the b-plot with Chen, perhaps just because I like interpersonal "drama", but I found it interesting how it tied back into the story near the end.

The main plot of book 1 is Data's return to life, upon which he speaks about searching out The Immortal Flint/Vaslovik. This is partially due to his father's obsession (I found Soong to be a grating egotist, but I suspect this was the intent), but I believe it's also stated because he knows how to revive Lal, Data's daughter.
Book 2 starts with this quest but is sidetracked by Typhon Pact politics, which I found quite interesting. I was saddened by the murder if Esperanza, which again, I expect is somewhat the point. A character who's been at Bacco's side for quite a while now is suddenly snuffed out, which Bacco definitely feels.

One thing that bugged me throughout the book (and perhaps the previous one) was use of acronyms. By the end of this book, the one that kept coming up was MSD, which is "Master Systems Display" (I have now looked it up to confirm), and I gathered as much from context, it just bugged me a bit. Nitpicky, I know.

Returning to book 3, we get the main follow-ups with Flint and the AIs, and a converging plot of a large Machine Entity, effectively a cousin of V'Ger, who may destroy the galaxy. The crew attempt to reason with, and upon failing diplomatically, destroy it. The destruction attempt goes poorly, as I somewhat expected with no characters I recognized going on that mission.

Wesley Crusher returns again in this book from the travelers, and I didn't feel particularly strongly about it. He was there, and had some interaction with his mother and Picard about his nature and how he viewed humanity, perhaps it helped put things in perspective.

Data felt a bit swing-y in this book to me, but he was under extreme pressure in the book between being a captive and forced to torture flint, after which he internally is quite angry and his internal narrative talks about holding himself back from killing their captor. The captor seems to see the error of their ways and is just let go by Data at the end, which felt a bit lacking.

I also disliked the conclusion's trolley-problem style ending of Data being forced to choose between McAdams and Flint (and by extension Lal), with both yelling at him to save the other, but I suppose they can't all be happy endings (I don't have to like the ending for it to be a good story). His choice gives us a set-up for stories with Data and Lal, opening ground to explore that relationship and Data's newfound parental feelings.

Writing this post reminds me why I don't attempt to do literary analysis. Everything I describe is just this was "Interesting" or doesn't particularly catch my interest and then some nitpicks and meta-analysis.

For the STRO website I'll need to make listings for some of the recurring splinter timeline characters and I don't think Taurik has a listing yet, but my notes so far include Picard, Data, Crusher, Geordi, Worf, Wesley, and Chen as main, Taurik, Rene, Flint, McAdams, Elfiki, Sm???rhova , and Dygon as supporting, and Q and the Traveler as other. In particular I need to re-figure out what rank many of the Starfleet characters are.
 
I very highly recommend reading Immortal Coil, it's absolutely fantastic, especially if you're a fan of Trek's AI characters like I am.
 
Thanks for posting your thoughts here. I'm always down to read what people think about the novels. I agree with JD that Immortal Coil is well worth reading, as most of Jeffrey Lang's Trek work is.

Also, thank you for your work at STRO. I use that family of sites frequently under a different handle.
 
I agree with the review above; much is indeed as I remembered it... and yes, the 'trolley problem' didn't really work for me, either. Though I did like Flint's turn afterward; that he wasn't the vindictive, spiteful man he could have been in response. That was a nice bit of characterization.
 
Though I did like Flint's turn afterward; that he wasn't the vindictive, spiteful man he could have been in response. That was a nice bit of characterization.
This also stood out to me, I was telling my wife about it afterwards, but didn't quite fit it in my write-up and was rushing a bit towards the end.

As much as I'd probably enjoy it, I'm going to skip the immortal coil for now in favor of making progress towards coda.
 
Remember how the two-dimensional life forms were headed for that rift in TNG:The Loss, and Alice toward the particle fountain in VOY: Alice, And they wanted to get there quicker even though it just ultimately be their destruction?

...There are worse things to do than taking your time getting to Coda. ;-)
 
The Stuff of Dreams
Published March 2013
Set in 2384


This is a tight novella following up on the Nexus from Generations. The Nexus is about to deviate into the territory of the Kinshaya, one of the powers of the typhon pact, and so the federation decides they must close it before they have a chance to misuse it. An act of sabotage prevents them from destroying it, and the scientist responsible (Doctor Kolb) goes in with Picard in pursuit. I think the scenes in the Nexus were well done, and then the Federation locks (not destroys) the nexus, thus leaving the fridge stocked for it to be re-used in the future.

It's set after "The Body Electric" purely by mention of "The Machine" being a threat that had threatened the federation recently. Data is absent here, but we get the same supporting senior staff crew from the last novel, less Taurik.

Something that left me googling a couple times was this Doctor Kolb character, who despite being treated as very familiar to Picard, I don't think was ever in another episode or story. Which is fine, but I can't be 100% sure. His story makes reference to Styris IV, mentioned in Code of Honor, but we don't actually go there in that story and no wiki mentions this character.

I enjoyed it, and think it's a good star trek story in general, particularly following up on the nexus events and Picard's newly-found family.

Remember how the two-dimensional life forms were headed for that rift in TNG:The Loss, and Alice toward the particle fountain in VOY: Alice, And they wanted to get there quicker even though it just ultimately be their destruction?

...There are worse things to do than taking your time getting to Coda. ;-)

If I'm running towards my own doom, at least I can have the immortal coil leftover as a treat after Coda.

Next up is "The Fall: Revelation and Dust" By David R. George III. It will certainly take me longer than a couple days to read, particularly because my wife and I just finished rewatching DS9 and I started reading Avatar Part 1 with her (both because I enjoyed it, to get her caught up with the lit-verse, and to enter character appearances in the STRO)
 
This is a tight novella following up on the Nexus from Generations. The Nexus is about to deviate into the territory of the Kinshaya, one of the powers of the typhon pact, and so the federation decides they must close it before they have a chance to misuse it. An act of sabotage prevents them from destroying it, and the scientist responsible (Doctor Kolb) goes in with Picard in pursuit. I think the scenes in the Nexus were well done, and then the Federation locks (not destroys) the nexus, thus leaving the fridge stocked for it to be re-used in the future.
Yeah, that bothered me, as I referenced before. I mean, it turns out well. But the idea of 'Well, here's like a portal to Heaven or whatever, whoops, gotta destroy it so it doesn't fall into enemy hands...'

I mean, I guess that's not terribly different from, say, destroying the Iconian outpost in Contagion. But it just has that 'burning the library of Alexandria' bitter taste in my mouth, the idea that a wonder of the cosmos that could outlast all civilizations there is destroyed as part of some petty, fleeting conflict and denied to all future generations forever... well, I get that it would (realistically) sometimes be necessary. But it always feels... wrong. So, glad that an alternative was found.

Also, liked Kolb's characterization and ultimate resolution. Sad but poigniant.
 
The Stuff of Dreams
Published March 2013
Set in 2384


I enjoyed it, and think it's a good star trek story in general, particularly following up on the nexus events and Picard's newly-found family.

Thanks! I enjoyed writing this one; I think these novella-length stand-alone eBooks were an interesting experiment, one I wish we could have continued. I hope the format will be revived...
 
Thanks! I enjoyed writing this one; I think these novella-length stand-alone eBooks were an interesting experiment, one I wish we could have continued. I hope the format will be revived...
Yeah, it's a real shame that Pocket has moved on from the eBook-exclusive format (for a second time) in 2017 (the most recent one was a Deep Space Nine adventure IIRC). It's also a disappointment that none of the post-2011 eBooks got collected in dead tree format like many of the SCE eBooks and the Mere Anarchy miniseries were. Something like Paul Block & Terry Erdmann's 3 DS9 eBooks or the 3 Department of Temporal Investigations stories would have naturally lent themselves to being collected in a standard paperback together.
 
Something like Paul Block & Terry Erdmann's 3 DS9 eBooks or the 3 Department of Temporal Investigations stories would have naturally lent themselves to being collected in a standard paperback together.

Indeed, that was the plan for the DTI novellas, or at least the latter two. I wrote "The Collectors" as a standalone, but then my editor Margaret Clark wrote me, "DTI—I’m trying to buy eBooks in threes so that they can be put together as a dead tree book. Got another one? Or two?" So I plotted the latter two so that all three would form a larger story arc that could be collected as a fix-up novel. Although my first proposal for the third novella didn't work, so I just did the second, then came up with a new idea for the third later.
 
Indeed, that was the plan for the DTI novellas, or at least the latter two. I wrote "The Collectors" as a standalone, but then my editor Margaret Clark wrote me, "DTI—I’m trying to buy eBooks in threes so that they can be put together as a dead tree book. Got another one? Or two?" So I plotted the latter two so that all three would form a larger story arc that could be collected as a fix-up novel. Although my first proposal for the third novella didn't work, so I just did the second, then came up with a new idea for the third later.
I assume a similar situation with PAD's 3-part The Returned for New Frontier, which essentially seemed like a novel split into 3 portions.
 
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