A couple of minor quibbles, if you don't mind. The swords pull the eye away from the actual design. Not because they're swords, but because of the coloring. Try it with the color on the swords muted, and in a metallic. Also, metallic reflections generally run the length of a blade. Try rotating them (the reflections) so that they run that way and see if it doesn't feel better. Finally, there's the red command insignia- would a gold metallic be more appropriate?
Now, if it were me, I'd get rid of the swords because they make me think "mirror universe" too much, and change the command insignia to the same gold as you have edging the shield, however, it's your design, so do what you like best.
All that said, I really like your design. You've managed to combine a number of symbols without screaming "paste-up!" I could easily see this design hanging in the lounge of any of the Enterprises from the 1701 to the 1701-E.
Nice work!
Really liking the Excelsior one, myself. The choice of purple with the Knight and the dark tribal scrollwork on the swords are very impressive.
They are all great but my favourite is the Reliant coat-of-arms. I like the simplicty of the badge with the simple insignia-styled wreath, also like how the banner sits over the badge.
The swords on the others look a little unnecessary to me, maybe try placing them behind the badge in a X style.
^^^ Was wondering about that myself. On a web browser, F5 is reload page. Could it be an allusion to "reload torpedoes", particularly with a Borg Cube in the design?![]()
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