Hmm.....in that case they would be nitpicking since I try to keep the characters close to accepted canon.
I've only made one significant change and that's changing the lifespan of a certain character. Considering how that character was treated in the TV series, my change would rather be labeled as constructive, not destructive.
By the way, what's so special about "Places Of Exile"?
Playing devil's advocate for a minute. That significant change you speak of (clearly you are talking about Kes) could constitute a massive "character destruction" of Kes because I might consider her short life span to be an integral part of her character. Perhaps I like the idea that a character with such a short life span may need to be explored in a specific way such that she can accomplish certain things before she dies. Maybe I think her character is about living her life to the fullest given how short said life is. One might think that
not killing Kes at her normal life expectancy greatly reduces the character's effectiveness, because now she's just like everyone else.
Again, that was all really just playing devil's advocate to make a point. That being, that it's all subjective and you simply can not make everyone happy and you can not guarantee that what you do will not anger or upset or whatever someone somewhere eventually. At some point you have to accept that you can't please everyone and say "Well, I'm sorry you don't like my direction, but I'm going to continue my direction anyway."
As for
Places of Exile. Well in that post you made the other day wanting KJ alive, Kes there and alive and well and prospering with no effects of the Gift or Fury, and Pretty much every thing you said happens in that story (with a few notable differences -- like the 37's planet isn't involved.) But pretty much everything you said is there. (now of course I've spoiled it all, but there is a lot there that isn't spoiled, that based on what you've said here I can almost guarantee you'd like it.