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Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death better?

Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Kirk sacrificed his life to save billions. how is that stupid and pointless?

And he died just like how he predicted in Star Trek V. Without Bones and Spick there to cover him.

I really don't feel that his death was stupid and pointless.

What would be stupid and pointless would be to bring him back. That pretty much negates his death.

Kirk really did die a heroic death. There was no fanfare to it and only Picard knows because everybody else believes he died on the Enterprise B when the Nexus ribbon struck that ship.

Does every heroic death need fanfare?
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

...when you kill off the central and arguably most popular main character it is best if the character basically decides his/her own fate.
I like that thought. (But it's still the writers doing the deciding, and they decided to piss on the franchise to leave their mark - kind of like Bellatrix Lestrange proudly yelling, "I Killed Sirius Black! I Killed Sirius Black!").

I see your point, but I don't think you can really compare Sirius Black and James Kirk in terms of their importance to the franchise.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

I don't. I'm comparing the writers to Bellatrix Lestrange.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Yeah, but it wasn't a dark hearted boast either like some would have the rest of us believe. It'd be like someone getting to write the death of Luke Skywalker. .... "I killed Luke Skywalker! " or "I Nuked Luke!". It's a jestful boast...not a sacrilege or confession of murder. (Yes, I know Kirk was around first, but the cultural significance of both as fictional leaders of men and women is the same).

There only fictional characters. ... not gods being blasphemed against.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Kirk sacrificed his life to save billions. how is that stupid and pointless?

And he died just like how he predicted in Star Trek V. Without Bones and Spick there to cover him.

I really don't feel that his death was stupid and pointless.

What would be stupid and pointless would be to bring him back. That pretty much negates his death.

Kirk really did die a heroic death. There was no fanfare to it and only Picard knows because everybody else believes he died on the Enterprise B when the Nexus ribbon struck that ship.

Does every heroic death need fanfare?

First I never said his reasons for dying were stupid and pointless, the way they shot it was.

Second, and I know this is going to be in vain to some degree because either people truly thought the death was fine or because some people slavishly accept everything Star Trek does as being great in some way, no matter how stupid and ill thought it may be.

Let's look at the demise of 3 central characters in Sci-Fi franchises.

Spock in TWOK. Makes the logical decision to sacrifice his life to save the Enterprise from being destroyed by the Genesis explosion.

Darth Vader in ROTJ. A character who has been portrayed as a heartless killing machine for the series can't stand the sight of his own son being slowly tortured to death by his master and makes the decision to save Luke's life pretty much knowing that by grabbing the Emperor his lightning will cause fatal damage to his life support suit.

Flynn in Tron: Legacy. A man who, as the creator of the grid, realizes he is the most powerful entity on it but, because he blames himself for the way it's become and his generally peaceful nature, doesn't use his full power until the point where CLU is threatening to harm his son and then, knowing it will destroy both of them, uses his power to reassilimate CLU into him.

Even Luke Skywalker, who didn't die, made the decision to sacrifice his own life rather than join Vader.

So ALL of these CENTRAL characters choose, beyond any doubt as far as they were concerned, to die for what they considered to be a truly noble and/or heroic reason. Luke is spared through a combination of other's actions and sheer luck. But all of these characters took their own fate into their hands and decided death was preferable to the alternative.

Now let's reshoot these scenes like Kirk's death scene, where they knew it was dangerous but thought they would probably survive.

Spock would have repaired the Warp engines, suffered injury from the radiation but have told Kirk he believes he is OK but as he is on the way to the door he touches an exposed electrical conduit and is electrocuted to death.

Vader is in bad shape but believes if Luke can get him off the Death Star he can be saved, but as they are heading towards the shuttle a beam jarred loose by the attack hits Vader in the head and kills him.

Flynn is a little spent and out of breath but is OK, then when he returns to the human world he suffers a heart attack because of the stress of the events.

Luke tells Vader he'll never join him and instead of deciding to plummet to his death, Vader just says "OK" and rams his lightsaber right through Luke's heart.

Now please tell me WITH A STRAIGHT FACE that any of those alternative scenes would have been more emotional and dramatic than how they were really filmed.

For a character like WILLIAM SHATNER AS JAMES TIBERIUS KIRK the most central and important character in the entire Star Trek Universe and either #1 or #2 in terms of popularity (Nimoy's Spock the other contender, I don't think Picard would beat Kirk) out of the dozens, if not hundreds of significant characters in all the ST franchises, you're damn right he deserves a death where he takes his fate into his own hands and dies because he decided it was the necessary sacrifice, not just because he was in a dangerous situation and his luck just ran out.

We are not talking about Jadzia Dax, or Tasha Yar, or even Data.....this is Captain Freaking Kirk. Out of all the characters in ST he, above anyone else, should have a dramatic end that comes of his own choosing. Not because some chains, he thought might hold, couldn't support his weight and gave way.

Let's say if, as was supposedly intended, Spock's death in TWOK was meant to be the end of the character. Yeah it would have sucked to have Spock gone, but at least when thinking about his death you couldn't have asked for a more noble and fitting end. Like I said if Spock's death had been written like Kirk's he would have gone into the radiation chamber realizing it was dangerous and he might die, but also might survive and then upon not receiving fatal injuries while fixing the warp engines would have died of some unexpected explosion or other element as he was walking towards the exit doors.

Would you really have thought that was the way a character as important and beloved as Spock was should go? Seriously?

I honestly can't believe I have to explain why something like Kirk's death is crappy storytelling and filmmaking and I can't believe even further still why people will continue to say it was good. Not every film should follow filmmaking 101, but there are obvious cases where something tired and true is actually the BEST way to do something.

I guess I could be wrong though. I mean "Generations" was such a masterpiece of filmmaking, I guess it might be crazy of me to think such a classic could possibly screw up Kirk's death:rolleyes:
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Because, like you, everyone is entitled to their opinions. Opinions are not facts. ... but when folk try to overvalue their own opinions and mistake them for irrefutable fact.... well then ludicrousness sets in.

For the record, Generations is one of my least favorite Trek films. ... but Kirk's death played out like I expected it.... and it was fine. My personal opinion. Your actual tranya intake may vary. :)
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Because, like you, everyone is entitled to their opinions. Opinions are not facts. ... but when folk try to overvalue their own opinions and mistake them for irrefutable fact.... well then ludicrousness sets in.

Or when people refuse to accept something, that is considered in general to be crap, to be that way just because the words "Star Trek" are attached to it and they go to great lengths to defend it and say the majority are full of it......that's when the ludicrousness sets in.

I can't read people's hearts and I am sure that some people honestly believe it was a good and fitting way for Kirk to go. If that's the case, peace be with you, I respect that opinion.

But I would bet any amount of money there are plenty of people who, if, they saw the death of such an important character the same way Kirk's happened in a film franchise they didn't really care that much about, would roll their eyes and say "lame". But because it's Star Trek it's beyond reproach and they get upset at anyone who dares to suggest otherwise.

It's like the parents that have no problem saying all the other children they know who do poorly in school do so because they are stupid and/or not trying hard enough, or they have bad parents. But, when it's their own kid bringing home the bad report card, then it's not their kid's fault and it SURE AS HELL isn't their fault as parents. It must be the teacher's fault or their kid has some other mitigating reason why he or she isn't stupid and/or lazy and it's not their kids fault they did poorly, when often that is exactly the case.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Yeah, Kirk's death happened the way it happened, and there's really no way to change it...unless someone decides to create an alternate universe with a different Kirk. ;)

As for speculating about a different way Kirk could have died in Generations (if he had to die at all), sorry, but the way I'd personally want to see it involves a complete change in the nature of the film.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Because, like you, everyone is entitled to their opinions. Opinions are not facts. ... but when folk try to overvalue their own opinions and mistake them for irrefutable fact.... well then ludicrousness sets in.

Or when people refuse to accept something, that is considered in general to be crap, to be that way just because the words "Star Trek" are attached to it and they go to great lengths to defend it and say the majority are full of it......that's when the ludicrousness sets in
I can't read people's hearts and I am sure that some people honestly believe it was a good and fitting way for Kirk to go. If that's the case, peace be with you, I respect that opinion.

But I would bet any amount of money there are plenty of people who, if, they saw the death of such an important character the same way Kirk's happened in a film franchise they didn't really care that much about, would roll their eyes and say "lame". But because it's Star Trek it's beyond reproach and they get upset at anyone who dares to suggest otherwise.

It's like the parents that have no problem saying all the other children they know who do poorly in school do so because they are stupid and/or not trying hard enough, or they have bad parents. But, when it's their own kid bringing home the bad report card, then it's not their kid's fault and it SURE AS HELL isn't their fault as parents. It must be the teacher's fault or their kid has some other mitigating reason why he or she isn't stupid and/or lazy and it's not their kids fault they did poorly, when often that is exactly the case.

Well, you seem to have completely overlooked the fact that my views on Kirk's death are simply opinions. ... as I was very careful to point out. However, you seem to want to impose on everyone else that has an opposing POV from your own that they are just flat wrong. That's the difference.

I can respect your opinion that Kirk died in a manner that did not seem to befit his character as far as you're concerned. But try telling me that I'm wrong for accepting his death as presented. ... you can expect some static. You overvalue your own opinion to the exclusion of everyone else.

I'm not a fan of anything. ... so when I accepted Kirk's death as presented in Generations, it was so because honestly that's how I saw him dying according to what I knew of James T. Kirk.

Should he have died at the flaming helm of the Enterprise? Maybe.... but that's not what fate (the writers ) had in mind for his demise.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

I wasn't going to read enterprisecvn65's post because it was way too long, but I glanced at one of the alternative death scenes on my way past and then had to read the entire post. The contrasts are a great illustration of how to, and how not to, write a script with honorable deaths and dishonorable deaths. And I don't mean the characters are honorable or dishonorable. I mean the writers. I am just as incredulous that anyone finds Kirk's death in that scene anything but a waste, to the point that I think sometimes it's playing devil's advocate, like saying the moon landing was a fake.

I've been watching all the Bond films lately, in order. They are drastically dated, and surprisingly boring at times, but one thing I notice is just how much luck the writers introduce into Bond's survival. I haven't read the books, so I don't know how much Ian Fleming depended on luck to the point of constant deus ex machina, but it demeans the character and his intelligence (and believability) to have so much coincidence and fortune or misfortune that Bond does not intentionally create for himself. enterprisecvn65 makes the point well with Spock getting electrocuted on the way out of successfully bringing the mains online. That would be like a cheap thrill horror flick.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

I understand that Kirk was supposed to sacrifice himself to save billions in the that star system- only problem with me is that we never saw anything to suggest a pre-warp civilization in need of saving. Veridian III just looked like an uninhabited rocky desert. If we could have even seen the planet from orbit showing something of a civilization it would have made the sacrifice mean something more.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

I understand that Kirk was supposed to sacrifice himself to save billions in the that star system- only problem with me is that we never saw anything to suggest a pre-warp civilization in need of saving. Veridian III just looked like an uninhabited rocky desert. If we could have even seen the planet from orbit showing something of a civilization it would have made the sacrifice mean something more.

This point I can agree with. We never did see the inhabitants of the planet. I guess the writers were counting on the crowd paying attention to the words that stated there was life on the planet.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

I wasn't going to read enterprisecvn65's post because it was way too long, but I glanced at one of the alternative death scenes on my way past and then had to read the entire post. The contrasts are a great illustration of how to, and how not to, write a script with honorable deaths and dishonorable deaths. And I don't mean the characters are honorable or dishonorable. I mean the writers. I am just as incredulous that anyone finds Kirk's death in that scene anything but a waste, to the point that I think sometimes it's playing devil's advocate, like saying the moon landing was a fake.

I've been watching all the Bond films lately, in order. They are drastically dated, and surprisingly boring at times, but one thing I notice is just how much luck the writers introduce into Bond's survival. I haven't read the books, so I don't know how much Ian Fleming depended on luck to the point of constant deus ex machina, but it demeans the character and his intelligence (and believability) to have so much coincidence and fortune or misfortune that Bond does not intentionally create for himself. enterprisecvn65 makes the point well with Spock getting electrocuted on the way out of successfully bringing the mains online. That would be like a cheap thrill horror flick.

I do need to work on brevity.....oh well I'll put it on my list:)
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

Because, like you, everyone is entitled to their opinions. Opinions are not facts. ... but when folk try to overvalue their own opinions and mistake them for irrefutable fact.... well then ludicrousness sets in.

Or when people refuse to accept something, that is considered in general to be crap, to be that way just because the words "Star Trek" are attached to it and they go to great lengths to defend it and say the majority are full of it......that's when the ludicrousness sets in
I can't read people's hearts and I am sure that some people honestly believe it was a good and fitting way for Kirk to go. If that's the case, peace be with you, I respect that opinion.

But I would bet any amount of money there are plenty of people who, if, they saw the death of such an important character the same way Kirk's happened in a film franchise they didn't really care that much about, would roll their eyes and say "lame". But because it's Star Trek it's beyond reproach and they get upset at anyone who dares to suggest otherwise.

It's like the parents that have no problem saying all the other children they know who do poorly in school do so because they are stupid and/or not trying hard enough, or they have bad parents. But, when it's their own kid bringing home the bad report card, then it's not their kid's fault and it SURE AS HELL isn't their fault as parents. It must be the teacher's fault or their kid has some other mitigating reason why he or she isn't stupid and/or lazy and it's not their kids fault they did poorly, when often that is exactly the case.

Well, you seem to have completely overlooked the fact that my views on Kirk's death are simply opinions. ... as I was very careful to point out. However, you seem to want to impose on everyone else that has an opposing POV from your own that they are just flat wrong. That's the difference.

I can respect your opinion that Kirk died in a manner that did not seem to befit his character as far as you're concerned. But try telling me that I'm wrong for accepting his death as presented. ... you can expect some static. You overvalue your own opinion to the exclusion of everyone else.

I'm not a fan of anything. ... so when I accepted Kirk's death as presented in Generations, it was so because honestly that's how I saw him dying according to what I knew of James T. Kirk.

Should he have died at the flaming helm of the Enterprise? Maybe.... but that's not what fate (the writers ) had in mind for his demise.

No I actually I said that I understand some find it genuinely acceptable or good and if that's the case I respect it. Go back and read my post it's right there.

You seem to be one of those people so fine, I disagree but don't think you're a terrible person for doing so.

It's the people who blindly accept everything "Star Trek" as being good or great because it's Star Trek and get upset if anyone dares to suggest otherwise. Even if a majority of people would agree that such and such was awful.

And don't deny those kind of people are here, because they are and their sole purpose seems to get all pissed and defend every aspect of ST that someone talks critical of.

It's not unique to ST. There are some Star Wars fans out there who genuinely like the prequels (although I can't imagine why)

There are also SW fans who, if you could look into their heart of hearts, would acknowledge the prequels were weak at best and total shit at worst. But SW is so important to them that they cannot bring themselves to acknowledge these feelings outwardly and get upset at people who state what many would consider the obvious about the prequels.
 
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I completely agree, enterprise. And I know you do respect my opinion as well. Apologies for my earlier statements. I'm in hospital in a bit of pain and have been on enforced fast for over 36 hours. ... but that's no excuse. Again, I respect yours as well. :)

I completely agree that there are those who feel that Star Trek can do no wrong just because the title says Star Trek. (Or Star Wars or Doctor Who or whatever. )

"Oh Star Trek TMP.... rocks! Oh, Star Trek II TWOK, blows away TMP. Oh, Star Trek III TSFS, completely kills the first two movies! " (and on and on)

I love all of Trek, even the turkeys....but I'm also one of the many who recognizea which are the turkeys and stinkers. Those, I take simply as guilty pleasures. :) Then again, one person's turkey is another person's potential Emmy winner. :)
 
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^ I basically only accept TMP and TWOK, with strong preference toward TMP. By the way, I hope your recovery goes well.

As far as Star Wars goes, I believe that the stilted dialog and acting, shallow characterization, outlandish storylines, and even the cheesy titles of the SW prequels really capture the spirit of the z-grade Saturday afternoon matinee serials that were the original inspiration for SW in the first place (i.e. Flash Gordon, Buck Rogers). They're supposed to be that way, so I turn off my brain for a couple hours and enjoy them on that level.:shrug:

One big problem I have with Kirk's death is that the 230 million pre-industrial inhabitants of the other planet will never know what Kirk did for them! :klingon:

Kor
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

^ I basically only accept TMP and TWOK, with strong preference toward TMP. By the way, I hope your recovery goes well.

As far as Star Wars goes, I believe that the stilted dialog and acting, shallow characterization, outlandish storylines, and even the cheesy titles of the SW prequels really capture the spirit of the z-grade Saturday afternoon matinee serials that were the original inspiration for SW in the first place (i.e. Flash Gordon, Buck Rogers). They're supposed to be that way, so I turn off my brain for a couple hours and enjoy them on that level.:shrug:

One big problem I have with Kirk's death is that the 230 million pre-industrial inhabitants of the other planet will never know what Kirk did for them! :klingon:

Kor

Thanks, Kor:)

I completely agree with your final statement there about Veridian III's
inhabitants never knowing what a man named Kirk did for their world. .. simply out if not knowing...and because the PD probably forbids them being so informed. But even in the real world, how many unknown heroes do we have that we can't thank because national security forbids us from knowing what they did for us. ... assuming such protocols even exist?

Oh yeah, of course Star Wars was fashioned on the movie serials of old. Anyone who tries to take Star Wars as serious sci fi should probably get their head examiNed it's space fantasy ...high adventure, good time swashbuckling space fantasy. And I love it for that. :)

There's room in my universe for Star Trek, Star Wars, StarGate SG1 and Atlantis, Battlestar Galactica, Dune, etc. Ultimately, I just view them all as good time entertainment. All have their charms and pitfalls. :)
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

I suppose Kirk was like the Men in Black in that way. It's a scary universe out there, and the only way that people don't get scared senseless is to keep them in the dark.

Kor
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

We had a similar thread a few months ago:
http://www.trekbbs.com/showthread.php?t=259663


The problem is not really too much how he died, but rather that he did. It was completely unecessary. Looking for an alternative way to have had him die still leaves this terrible plot hole and just makes the thinking-man Picard we had to seven seasons, seem like a rash and unthought person who leaped before he looked when in reality he had all the time in the universe to think and there were certainly all kinds of better alternatives.

Here's the idea I proposed in the other thread:

Kirk is dead by Starfleet records. I say we use that technicallity and instead of killing him off perminently, we go an alternate route:

The battle on the mounain top continues, only this time Kirk orders Picard to get to the controls and that he'll handle Soran. Kirk depthly hands Soran his ass. They win.

There is some banter between the two. Picard says something like, "Come with me," persuading him to return to the mortal human plane of existance. For a second Kirk looks like he might, but the look quickly fades from his face and he smiles, looking at Picard

"Captain, you got things here. Go, take care of the Enterprise."

P: "But what about you?"

K: Big smile, "I'm going home," he hesistates, "maybe Antonia will have my eggs done. You should come -- best egg shaker this side of the galaxy, aside from me of course."

P: "Maybe another time."

K: "Your lose..." and he disappears into the white flash of light back into the Nexus. Proving, as Picard looks on, that the draw and appeal of the Nexus is so strong that even when you realize it for what it really is, you just want to go back.


A happy ending and a door left ajar to bring Kirk back to life.
 
Re: Keeping the same basic scene, how could you make Kirk's death bett

It's okay. But two problems:

1. Kirk "needs his pain" and time and again he has beaten the hypnotic effects of other elements that have tried to gain power over him: This Side of Paradise, Elaan of Troyius, the temptations of Yoeman Rand ("I've already got a female to worry about. Her name's the Enterprise."), etc.

2. A villain too easy to beat cheats the build and climax. They can't win handily or without a cost.
 
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