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This is simply wrong, to use your phrase. There is nothing in the show to suggest she was right, fan arguments aside, she is presented as being wrong and having done the wrong thing out of fear and prejudice. I really can't see how you can read the pilot as anything else. I get all the arguments that the plot makes no sense because the war was inevitable, but the show, the characters, see what she did as wrong. And so does she.

I agree with this espcially when you go back to Sarak's scene where he specifically cautions here that it may not be the right decision. Then when you add in the fact the T'cauvna was trying to convince the other klingins that the federation really didn't come in peace firing on them would still have likely started a war.
 
This is simply wrong, to use your phrase. There is nothing in the show to suggest she was right, fan arguments aside, she is presented as being wrong and having done the wrong thing out of fear and prejudice. I really can't see how you can read the pilot as anything else. I get all the arguments that the plot makes no sense because the war was inevitable, but the show, the characters, see what she did as wrong. And so does she.

Her mutiny was wrong. Not her initial decision. Again: She was wrong in handling the mistakes of others. Had she been more convincingly, the war could have been avoided. But she was god enough in convincing Georgiou to take her on a mission directly afterwards. So, compared to, say, Tom Paris who did a real mistake, Burnham was essentially punished for not being able to explain the right way to others convincingly.

Exactly, that's my point. She's changed from episode 1 when her reaction to Klingon presence is a physical, visceral, desire to strike now and strike hard. By finale she has learnt that was wrong, and now stands up to the federation wanting to do that. She stands up to authority in both pilot and finale, but the first time she was on the wrong side, in the second she was on the right side. That's her arc.

No! Absolutely not! She had no desire to go an a genocidal mission to Kronos in the pilot (nor the finale, for that matter). She wanted to use the "Vulcan Hello" as a genuine, working way to communicate with the klingons. She was a hawkish hardliner - yes. But not out of emotion. But because she knew klingon politics. Again: her choice in the pilot was the correct one (as in the finale). The only problem was that in the pilot, she wasn't able to convince her Captain to do the right thing (and thus did the stupid mutiny), while in the finale, she was able to convince the Admiral (and MU Georgiou).

But they did, though. It's explicit in dialogue in the show. She has to overcome her fear and prejudice of the Klingons as enemies to find a solution to the war. I'm not saying it's ground breaking or even particularly well written, but that's the story.

Well, yeah. She was predjudiced against them. But before that, that didn't cloud her judgement. She was just now able to personally forgive them/accept them. (Comparable to Kirks growth in TUC: He was anti-klingon in the beginning too, but still did the right thing to meet with the chancellor, and later learned genuine respect, too).
 
She was a hawkish hardliner - yes. But not out of emotion.
There's a whole scene where she is portrayed having a physical emotional response to the presence of Klingons, and a bit where she starts making racist comments to Admiral Hologram and gets pulled up on it. She is literally seen to panic.
 
It would have been more interesting, if Burnham's mutiny had had actual, not to mention galactic, consequences, like say actually firing on the Klingon ship in a full-fledged Vulcan Hello, and also if Burnham had skillfully and intentionally dispatched the Torchbearer in self-defense and/or in fear, instead of accidentally running over him while bugging out in a panic.

Instead we got this jumbled mess and cop-out, as if there had been way too many cooks in the kitchen, which resulted in Burnham being scapegoated by pretty much all of Starfleet. And for what? Inexplicably* upping her phaser setting from stun to kill after Georgiou had been fatally wounded? Because that was the only decision she made both that got to have consequence and that was actually wrong. Everything else she did got nipped in the bud or was excusable. :shrug:

* - Although, at least as many have argued from the perspective of our real world without weapons that can switch between stun and kill at the flick of a switch, quite excusably.
 
I want to address this from a different vein which is why I think Burnham seems more like a mary sue then say kirk or picard and it comes from an element of the show that I think sounded better in theory then it did in execution which is making a non-captain the lead character.

With Kirk/picard/etc they are the captains of the ship so we expect them to have all the answers, know what to do, etc. or seek out appropriate advise. The times they have to go against authority it is often an admiral or somebody light years away who doesn't know the reality of the situation.

Now in discovery we have a different dynamic. Our lead character and the one who is the hero and is going to save the day isn't the captain. So for her to be right and save the day she has to be the one to come up with the ideas and not the captain and in come cases (like the mutany) have to actually go against what the captain wants because she is the one that is right. I think having a non-captain in this role makes her look more like a mary sue then if it is the captain making all the right decisions. It almost comes accross more like Wesley (who absolutely fits this category) who performs better then all the starfleet officers on the ship. With Burnham she was starfleet but after we get past the pilot she has no rank anymore but is still the one with all the answers.

I don't want to get into who is and isn't a mary sue, but I think Burnham not being the captain and being in the hero role makes her appear to be more of a mary sue then if the same character was the captain.

Honestly, I don't think the idea of having the show center around somebody not the captain really worked as well as it sounded in concept but that is a totally separate discussion,

Even in past treks, the "lead" was not always the one who "saved the day." Often the protagonist of the episode was someone else entirely (any of the "character focus" episodes in later Trek), and even if the protagonist was the lead, the crisis was solved not by the actions of the lead alone (like say Spock in Devil in the Dark). DIS toyed with this a bit midseason with Lorca and Saru, but largely abandoned it entirely for Act 2.

I still maintain the biggest structural problem with Discovery's first season was their attempt to tell both Burnham's personal redemption arc and an epic war story at the same time. They should have focused on the first, and forgotten the second. Basically we just needed to see Burnham grow, redeem herself from causing the death of her captain, and leave her personal feelings behind to become a competent officer. We didn't need to see her kill two different "leaders" of the Klingons, be blamed for a quadrant-spanning war, solve a quadrant spanning war, help to destroy a ship which threatened all life everywhere, etc. The stakes-raising was ridiculous, and reduced the emotional impact.
 
Was the Mary Sue thing thrown at Archer back in the day? I remember some fans didn't even like the idea Enterprise just because they felt having Archer have the "firsts" in space exploration was Rick Berman's way of taking away Kirk's accomplishments. It sounds silly, but that's what I recall most about when the show was in its first season. Later on we learn that Archer is not only a pioneering captain of Starfleet but a founding father of the Federation and the future depends on him making the correct actions so to preserve the timeline.

Does that lessen the character? Would he be more endearing if he was "just another captain"? Does Picard being in command of the FLAGSHIP of the Federation make him too much of a wish fulfillment?

All our lead characters have these amazing accomplishments maybe because we're more interested in wanting to watch these guys than just some average lieutenant doing her/his duty by the book.
 
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Agreed. The "Lower Decks" approach often is not as dynamic as it is often hyped to be. Our heroes are just that-heroes. They may have flaws but they still save the day. And that's OK!
That being said (again): Burnham isn't too far off the general mold of Trek heroes. The writing could be a bit better sometimes. But Burnham - both the character and her portrayal by SMG - is IMO absolutely one of the main strengths of this show.
Agreed. I'll take more Burnham please.
 
Apparently Mary Sues are not overly likeable.
Which may be the determining factor as to whether or not a person thinks Burnham is a Mary Sue. I personal find her very engaging and likable to some degree, so I'll admit my bias and reluctance to call her a Mary Sue. Also, it is difficult to not see similar qualities among other Star Trek lead characters.
 
Was the Mary Sue thing thrown at Archer back in the day? I remember some fans didn't even like the idea Enterprise just because they felt having Archer have the "firsts" in space exploration was Rick Berman's way of taking away Kirk's accomplishments. It sounds silly, but that's what I recall most about when the show was in its first season. Later on we learn that Archer is not only a pioneering captain of Starfleet but a founding father of the Federation and the future depends on him making the correct actions so to preserve the timeline.

I don't think anyone could call Archer a Mary Sue (or Gary Stu in this case) because he's very very far from a competent character. If anything, the trope I'd say he fits is Butt Monkey, or informed ability. The show occasionally tells us he's this great, hyper-competent alpha male. But what it shows us is this sad whiny loser who likes to hang out with his beagle and watch videos of water polo.

Does that lessen the character? Would he be more endearing if he was "just another captain"? Does Picard being in command of the FLAGSHIP of the Federation make him too much of a wish fulfillment?

All our lead characters have these amazing accomplishments maybe because we're more interested in wanting to watch these guys than just some average lieutenant doing her/his duty by the book.

I don't think it's quite the same though, because for the most part TOS wasn't about Kirk, TNG wasn't about Picard, etc. They got to play the hero of course, but 90% of the time their characters were a means toward the ends of resolving the story. in DIS, Burnham is both the subject and the object - sometimes in the same episode. This makes her more like a fanfic Mary Sue, because the whole point of the original Mary Sue concept was basically self-insertion of a "perfect" version of the writer into a fictional world as the centerpiece.
 
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[to the tune of "Peggy Sue"]

If you knew Mary Sue
Then you'd know why Trek ain't cool with Mary
That Mary Sue-ue-ue
Jim Kirk and Mike Burnham, they're both just Mary Sues
Mary Sue, Mary Sue
Oh how that plot can't be new
Oh Mary, that Mary Sue-ue-ue
Savin' the galaxy, we need you Mary Sue

I think I'll drop in to this thread every week to see how it's shaping up...
 
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It's not Mary Sue, but I like Mary Jane Candy. Very underappreciated.

And The Mary Jane Girls. Also underappreciated. Not to mention the creators of one of my favorite songs.

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Forget Mary Sue. Go classic or go home!


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They could do something really cool and tie it to canon in a logical way. The Enterprise is dead in space because the crew learned the powers of the Talosians. The Discovery people at first find a ship full of passed out people, then are slowly dragged into the illusions of the Enterprise crew.

The reason there is a death penalty for going to Talos IV.
 
They could do something really cool and tie it to canon in a logical way. The Enterprise is dead in space because the crew learned the powers of the Talosians. The Discovery people at first find a ship full of passed out people, then are slowly dragged into the illusions of the Enterprise crew.

The reason there is a death penalty for going to Talos IV.
And it takes Burnham to mind meld the illusion powers out of them all. Even Spock is helpless!

:devil:
 
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