^^Missed a couple:
Riker: (on intercom): Captain Picard is still on the surface, sir.
Dougherty: Doing what?
Now:
Dougherty: Remind the captain his twelve hours are up.
Riker: (on intercom): Captain Picard is still on the surface, sir.
Dougherty: Doing what?
Riker: Captain Picard didn't want to leave until we could adequately explain why Data malfunctioned. His future in Starfleet could depend on it.
Now:
Dougherty: Remind the captain his twelve hours are up.