If You Could Rewrite DS9

Discussion in 'Star Trek: Deep Space Nine' started by Refuge, Mar 19, 2018.

  1. Discofan

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    Nope, however, it's quite damning that it took something so catastrophic as the invasion by the Cardassians to get them out of their millennia-old imbecilic caste system. It would be like the USA only realizing that they need a universal healthcare system after a pandemic had decimated their population! One can only hope it won't come to that.
     
  2. Nyotarules

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    Hopefully not, but to equate the two it would be as if 1960's USA only recognised it should grant civil rights and end Jim Crow laws after being invaded by its greatest enemy (the USSR) treating everyone of them like slaves for 40 years. Its a harsh way to learn a valuable lesson.
    I wonder if this is why the rest of the galaxy never came to Bajor's aid during those 40 years, some galactic powers might have thought they needed to be taught a lesson?
     
  3. Discofan

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    I can't argue with that.
     
  4. DarKush

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    Nice deflection. Not. I don't think you're reading much of anything I've written because you are coming across as very defensive, and I wonder why that is? Me doth protest too much perhaps?

    I wrote I have no problem with criticism of Sisko previously, though in your rush to defend yourself and attempt to 'turn the tables' you must have overlooked that. However I do have issues with specious criticism and double standards, of which some of your posts contained IMO when it came to Sisko. To me, you're looking for some excuse that you think will past muster to just express your animus for the Sisko character.

    I don't care what claims you make against Sisko or any character, if you can back them up by examples from the show, or other material if that's germane to the discussion or said criticism, and if you are not applying a double standard, i.e. holding Sisko to higher or different standards than you would other captains or Starfleet characters in similar situations. And with your condemnation of Archer I see there is a breakthrough here, that you are looking and comparing the various actions of the captains and that's fine by me. One of the issues I've seen with some-not all-criticism of Sisko in the past is that it's not 'similar cases' that are made against Sisko sometimes. It's selective cases. And usually these people show their hand when they take offense at Sisko refusing to join in Vic's holoprogram due to his discomfort about the segregation of the time period of that program(Why should he care? It was a long time ago! Why can't he get over it?), his identification with his African ancestry, his 'racist' mating choices, and things along that line, and some of that caught my attention as I was perusing this thread.
     
  5. DarKush

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    Wanted to add to my previous list. I would've left Dukat a blind Bajoran begging on the streets of Bajor by the end of the series. He claims he's Dukat but no one believes him. I think it would've been a fitting end for him, while also leaving him around to bring back in case there was a revival.
     
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  6. kkt

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    If they'd brought in Ezri in Season 1, she would have been too young to be an Ensign.
     
  7. Discofan

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    I think I'll cease this sterile exchange. It's obvious that you've "made up your mind" about me (or is it the "likes of me"? I wonder...) and that nothing I'll say will change anything to that. If you have issues with specious criticism then you obviously don't read the endless diatribes that you direct solely at me and that makes two of us.

    Have a nice day!
     
  8. Bry_Sinclair

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    I do wonder what the series would've been like had Starfleet taken a more 'subservient' role to the Bajorans, rather than coming in to oversee DS9 they were there to aide in its operation, as such the Commanding Officer would be a Bajoran Colonel with the First Officer being a Starfleet Commander and the Federation personnel clearly in the minority.
     
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  9. Bad Thoughts

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    Intriguing, although it might work better if the SF presence were more diplomatic and aide related.
     
  10. bolak

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    I was never comfortable with the character of Sisko, never really enjoyed watching him; he seemed constantly agitated and snappy and over-reactive and unpredictable. Though that's probably the way TPTB wanted him written, as the anti-Picard. Add in Kira and it was tough work watching DS9 sometimes, almost like Eastenders in Space ( UK joke, sorry ).

    Once things started getting serious in that region of space I was always hoping some flag officer would arrive on the station and reassign him elsewhere. Bonus points if it was Commodore Picard.
     
  11. Discofan

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    Definitely! And there were a lot of instances where his reactions were bizarre, to say the least.

    Like when he tells Kasidy that he doesn't want to go to Vic's because it isn't an accurate depiction of reality and then when Kasidy confirms that it is indeed NOT an accurate depiction of reality... that convinces him to give it a go! :vulcan:

    I mean, seriously? What's wrong with the writers? Short term memory lapse?
     
  12. Bry_Sinclair

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    He's someone who doesn't believe history should be washed over or rewritten, like how there are some people who claim the holocaust never happened. Without knowing the struggles made and learning from past mistakes then there is no learning from them in order to better ourselves and ensure they're not made again.
     
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  13. DarKush

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    That's fine. I didn't make any diatribes at you at all. I laid out why I took issue with some of the things you said because I did find those things questionable. The description of what I've said here as 'endless diatribes' seems a bit much, but if that's your perception of things, so be it. It is my hope that my replies here, as well as others in response to your statements does shine some light on why Sisko might not be as bad or beyond the pale as you have deemed him to be. Also that they might provide you (and others with similar viewpoints) with a new lens to see and critique his actions.

    I hope you have a nice day as well.
     
  14. Discofan

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    Which is not relevant to what I said, not at all!

    Could you and others actually read my posts before you answer them, please? I don't think it's too much to ask.
     
  15. Bad Thoughts

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    We have, and we know why you decided to reintroduce this horrid debate over Badda Bing, Badda Bang. Your wrote:
    The ensuing discussion led to the moderator reading the riot act. It requires only a little analysis to understand what you meant by:

     
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  16. Discofan

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    "We have"? I didn't know I was speaking to a collective. When were you assimilated? Was it painful? It's certainly painful to watch. I have the bad habit of answering to the posts I quote according to their ACTUAL contents, not to strawmen issued from my imagination. I see that it's a bad habit that you've got licked. I wouldn't want to be responsible for your falling off the wagon. So maybe you could just ignore my posts, which I am more than willing to do with yours, and leave the answering to people with the same bad habit as mine, IE of answering to actual contents of posts... etc.

    Thanks in advance for your "comprehension".
     
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  17. Discofan

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    I still don't get why we can't talk about rewriting DS9 in a thread about rewriting DS9...

    Sounds like a problem one has in an Orwellian nightmare or is it Kafkaian? Maybe a little of both.
     
  18. CorporalCaptain

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    If I could rewrite DS9:

    1) I'd scrap the concept of Sisko as the Emissary. Prophets, wormhole aliens, orbs, and Bajoran religious politics are one thing, all well and good, but instilling Sisko with an inherent destiny sacrifices what could have been a far more interesting journey, namely for Sisko to have been confronted with the problem of bridging two cultures and coming to discover in the process the value of an alien culture that he had initially rejected as founded on superstition. Making him a product of that alien culture short-circuited that journey.

    2) With the benefit of hindsight, I'd have introduced the Defiant as we knew her early on.

    3) No Pah-wraiths. At all.

    4) Dax would have gone through several new hosts.

    5) Bashir wouldn't have had affairs with or hit on his patients.
     
  19. Discofan

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    I agree that they should have done something more interesting about the Dax symbiont, kill the first host during season one and then have her appear only in "dreams" of the next host for example and so forth a couple more times. That would have given us a fuller experience of what it meant to be a joined Trill. Maybe the Zhian'tara could have been something more common and so we would see the different hosts expressing themselves through regular members more often, giving advice and helping to solve a problem on occasion.

    We've only seen something like that once (Fields Of Fire) and it wasn't very well done.
     
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  20. Savage Dragon

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    You can talk about rewriting DS9 all you want. That's not the problem. The problem people are having is your dismissive attitude when it comes to matters of race. You seem to want to change a lot of things that involve Sisko being a black man, and that will understandably get people's backs up. I would strongly suggest you back off on this front. I don't want to have to get into this again.
     
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