Exactly so. Throw Babylon 5 and its associated sequels/spinoffs into the list too, as far as plodding, pedantic dialogue and overly-familiar, predictable plotting is concerned.
Ok, what are you smoking? JMS's dialogue was one the the BEST things about B5. It's VERY witty, and has lots and lots of really pithy moments, esp when G'kar and Londo go at each other.
B5 had great
monologs. Its dialog was not up to the same standards.
Oh, there were some good exchanges, but there were plenty of cringeworthy ones as well. And the fact that JMS wrote so much of the show meant that at times characters who should not have had any reason to use similar turns of phrase, did so.
First and foremost, I consider
Babylon 5 one of my favorite shows. That being said, I am painfully aware of the dialogue shortcomings. Yes, the monologues were great, lyrical and well-written. At times, the everyday
human dialogue could be stilted, banal, overly formal, and almost ready-made. Too directed and too unnatural.
I know JMS is on record stating that he wanted a certain linguistic formality among the humans, and has given his reasons for doing so. However, in hindsight, I feel this was a mistake. TNG already had the market on formalized English. JMS should've turned to more naturalistic, easy going dialogue. Like Wheadon after him.
E! did one of those Scott Baio-hosted
Behind the Scenes on the making of "The Gathering", which I've been looking for a copy for years now. Used to have it on VHS, but that's another story. Anyway, everyone kept saying in the interviews how these were going to be more down-to-Earth humans with everyday problems, lovers, tainted relationships, the whole nine yards. They wouldn't speak in that overly grammatical English. They would speak like the average Garabaldi.
And in the pilot, it sort of was like that. Then in the series it kinda stopped in favor of what felt like standardized speech patterns.
Oh, well. It is what it is and I still love the show.
Now Joss, he can write some snappy dialogue. It's one of the things I enjoyed about his shows. Although I preferred
Angel over
Buffy, and
Firefly most of all.
Dollhouse, from the first few episodes, seemed to lack that Whedon spark in both story and dialogue. I wasn't looking for him to repeat himself but it couldn't quite grab me. Yeah, I hear it's gotten better. Maybe I'll give it another go.