Re: I Changed My Mind! I Want Shatner as Kirk In Star Trek
I like the general idea, and it's along the lines of what I'd hoped for. Though I think the whole Nexus thing was utter tripe, I might revise the exchange slightly to have one of them allude to how difficult dealing with the Nexus was, only to have the other cut him off in a friendly way before he can provide a full explanation. Of course, so-called non-fans won't have any idea what's going on, but let's be honest -- the film is still being made with fans as the primary audience, in hopes that it will somehow cross over to a wider audience.
Actually, if the makers of this film just apply some imagination, they could write it in such a way that Kirk never dies in the Nexus in the first place. I'm always amazed at what a box so-called movie sci-fi writers put themselves in nowadays.
Kirk and Spock deserve a real send off. I don't think that it would be too much like "These are the Voyages" because A) "Star Trek: Enterprise" stunk and B) that episode
stunk even more than most of the episodes. The failure wasn't so much the concept but the tedious execution.