I finished this late last week. The best part of the book is Saru. On screen he's probably my favorite character. I didn't like the implausibly unprofessional bickering he and Burnham participate in, but that's an accurate reflection of the television series, unfortunately. (I feel like you could write a rivalry that wasn't so immature-- its brazenness reflects poorly on both captain characters for not quashing it.) What
Desperate Hours lets us do that
Discovery itself has not yet done is let us see those parts of Saru that have nothing to do with Burnham; since the show is mostly told from her perspective, so far we've only seen Saru interacting with her. Here, we get Saru running his science lab on the
Shenzhou, Saru contributing ideas that help save the day, Saru interacting with the
Enterprise's Number One (who he kind of falls for, as the first human he's met who doesn't act like a predator), and Saru ruminating on his past (he was rescued from his planet, where his people lived in caves, by a Starfleet crew). I really liked the way the book handled Saru.
Number One was characterized well, though I was mildly grumpy that Mack calls her "Una"; however, I understand that originates from a Greg Cox novel. I know it's hard to work with an anonymous character like this in prose, but it just seems wrong, like translating Chewbacca's dialogue directly in print. I was a little sad to get almost none of the other Pike's
Enterprise crew: Boyce has one scene, and Tyler, Garison, and Pitcairn make tiny contributions, but there's no Colt (who's my favorite), and the only "expanded universe" Pike crewmember I noticed was
Caitlin Barry from the 1980s/90s novels by D. C. Fontana and Peter David. Give me some
Mohindas or
Burnstein or
Dabisch or
Nano or
Moves-with-Burning-Grace or
Carlotti! You shouldn't really take this complaint seriously, though, because ultimately this isn't a Pike's
Enterprise novel, it's a
Discovery (
Shenzhou) one, and the focus is in the right place; I just really like Pike's crew.
I do wish we'd seen more of the various
Shenzhou crew, though. Mack wrote biographies for them all, and named many of them (including
Kayla Detmer, the only one to make the transition to the
Discovery other than Burnham and Saru), but there's not much in the book to make you care about them: I want previous adventures for
Danby Connor that make me even more sad when he bites it at the Battle of the Binary Stars!
(I wrote more than this
on my blog if you're interested, but this is the gist.)