I think this is great. I've always liked the Daedalus design - I know some people don't, for me its clunkiness is part of the charm (it plausibly looks like something that could have predated the TOS Enterprise, unlike the NX-01), and you've made it look beautiful here. It just goes to show that with modern graphics techniques a design with the TOS-style clean lines and uncluttered surfaces doesn't have to look cheap or simplistic. Something the designers on ENT could have borne in mind, I think.